Well. Hello there.
My name is Susan.
I'm a student living in Massachusetts who has an insatiable thirst for music and, of course, Potter. I read a whole lotta Hermione/Snape and review often.
I'm also the proud momma of two posted fics that will be expanded upon shortly. I might post updates every once in a while here, so take a look if you're interested.
What's going on right now:
"Daybreak" is only the second part, people! Ready for Part Three?! *scattered, half-assed applause* Well, er, it's coming along shortly, I just need a bit of planning time and I'll be good to go. Sit tight, crazed fans.
Reviews make me so happy :o) And I'm sure other authors will agree. I so appreciate feedback! Thanks people!
Peace, Love, and Potter,
Absolutely wonderful. I love that the story is told from different perspectives, which, by the way, are very true to the personalities of each characters.
Well done :o)
Oh, steamy. I really really enjoyed this, you are very talented. Draco and Hermione, on an island, naked? What could be better?
Can't wait to read more :o)
Thanks for the great story,
Where you at, Sparx!? I miss you and your wonderful story dearly. I hope all is well in RL and that you will soon find the time to update, you're very talented! -ickle duddykins.
Thanks, sparx. I knew those two would eventually come to their senses and snog already.
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one! (more snogging I hope?)
What a great chapter. I absolutely love the progression of things. It seemed a tad slow at first, but then I realized that it made the whole story so realistic, like it could actully happen. Not to mention you have your whole audience constantly on the edge of their seats (our seats, really). I enjoy reading this story more than any ther on this site. You are a wonderful writer and I can't wait for the next post! Thanks for the time and effort you put into this story, it really is the best on the site.
Hey there! Just found this site a few days ago and I am absolutely ADDICTED. So in my search of this fantastic site, I found this fantastic story. It really is awesome and I can't wait to read more!! I completely sympathize with those who have been following the story since the start (2 years!!??) because in just the past few days, I've read all of it, and now I am so excited for next installment! Yay for sparx!
p.s. I'm really diggin the whole Hermione/Draco thing
I'm really impressed with how well written this is, way to goooooo!
O man, another great one. This story is my first and greatest love on this site. Why are you so freakin' talented?
Gosh, this story makes me smile,
My compliments to you. I very much enjoyed this story. I loved the ending in particular (finally, a happy ending!) I hate reading a wonderfully-written story only to find that it ends in tragedy and heartbreak. Fortunately, this was just wat I was looking for.
Loved this. Herms and Ron are my absolute favorite ship (right after Neville and his toad, that is). Great story.
Abandoned? I hope not; I'm really enjoying this story so far.
Are you dead?
I hope not. You're an excellent author and I really enjoy this story.
Wow. I mean, WOW. I am absolutley addicted. You obviously put a lot of time, effort, and thought into this writing and it shows. The plot is so captivating and that characterization is just amazing. I love the action element, with the military and such, I love role of the Muggles, I especially love the way you wrote Ron and Hermione. I'm basically a puddle right now, that was so friggin' amazing. I would type more but I think I would need the assistance of a dictionary to help me explan how wonderful this piece is. Once again, that was just so freakin awesome.
Oh Severus...so frustrating.
I really enjoyed this. The plot is original and you've blended the humor, romance, and drama well. I love the whole Veritaserum part, that was hilarious :o)
Thanks for the great story,
Oh man, another great chapter. I'm absolutely addicted to this story, and these updates can't come fast enough. But as long as each one is as awesome and funny as this, then you can take all the time you need :o)
Thanks for the update!
Snape makes me drool all over my keyboard.
Author's Response: hahaha oh thank you! your review made me smile :D
Well hello there. No, I'm not back to review a second time. I think I may be pushing it with those long-winded reviews, but you'll just have to deal with it because that's just how much I love this story.
Now, down to business. I have a question. Are you posting this on Ashwinder over at SH? I ask because I came across it and it was under the author PeterPan. Only the first chapter is up and there's a shocking lack of reviews for it (like 6 maybe?), so I figure you just starting archiving elsewhere. I'm hoping that there isn't someone over yonder who is posting your work under a different name ('cuz they're so jealous).
Author's Response: lol what a wonderful little sleuth you are! yeah, i started archiving over there, like forever ago. i was all \"this is a good idea. i will totally have the patience to re-update everything here.\" ....lol, you can see how well that worked out xD i might start putting the chapters up again in a little while, but it\'s just so darn time-consuming. in any case, thank you for checking! i would certainly want to know if someone was plagiarizing my work.
DUDE!! We can review before a chapter is posted!?!?! What's going on! I didn't know this! And I review like...woah. But you know that. Ok, prediction: Severus admits his feelings for Hermione. To himself. Not Hermione.
Author's Response: mwahahaha....
This story is my absolute favorite flavor of Hermione/Snape fanfiction. I luuurve this chapter; and Hermione is right, Snape is Grade A Hunk. I know, I know, heís fictional and heís supposed to be ugly. Fortunately though, I canít seem to get this vision of a gorgeous, tall, dark, and dangerous Snape out of my head. Oh well, there are worse things in the world :o)
Thanks for writing this freakiní amazing story. I eat up every hilarious word. And then I lick the screen clean.
Author's Response: hahahaha oh, i love your reviews. they consistantly make me giggle xD thanks so much!!!! i hope you like the next chapter just as much!
It's amazing to me that you can make this story so hilarious in some parts, and yet so analytical in others. And all of it is well written :D
I guess what I'm trying to say is, I'm really groovin' on this revived prologue. It seems appropriate when considering the tone of the later chapters, which are, in my opinion, darker than the beginning. Perhaps 'darker' isn't the right word, but they are more serious. Whatever. The point is that, rather than being out-of-sync with the rest of this fic, this prologue ties in nicely with later events. Know what I'm sayin'?
Anyway, well done. You've managed to improve an already excellent piece of writing. Every time you update, I shift a little closer to the edge of my seat : )
Thanks for writing and for sharing ,
Author's Response: Thank you so so much for the lovely review! I\'m so glad you liked it :D
Oh, poor Hermione. That girl is just always in the wrong place at the wrong time. Great chapter :o) Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: well if she wasn\'t, then it wouldn\'t be any fun xD Thanks for reading!!
Well hello hello hello again!
Iíve been vacationing in southern California for awhile and Iíve dearly missed this fic. Of course, it was wonderful to lie out on the beach, get nice and tan, and watch gorgeous half-naked males surf and such, but Iím back now and ready to review.
My initial reaction: *reaches Nirvana*
How you managed to bring the relationship between Snape and Hermione this far without making it cheesy in the slightest, I havenít a clue. It is progressing perfectly. Perfectly.
Stupid Sirius. Sorry, that must sound like an insult to you. What I mean to say is, he has the absolute worst timing. But then again, I suppose the suspense is what makes all of this so good. How do you make it so deliciously evil? I guess youíre just incredibly talented :o)
Anywaaaaaay, youíre the best and I canít wait for an update. Will we get as far as the graduation/when they get to be together? And will we find out more about that goldy locks thing Snape has going on? So many questions.
Thanks for a great fic and for sharing it with us!
With everlasting and all consuming love (orÖerÖwhatever),
Are you posting this over at Ashwinder under the penname Peter Pan? Because if youíre not, someone is helping themselves to your work. Only the first chapter is up and none of the reviews have responses. Smells fishy. You may want to look into that and speak to an admin. Plagiarism is not sexy.
Author's Response: yaaaay another wonderful review!!! :D :D i\'m so so happy that you approve of the non-cheesyness, and yay for half naked man surfers! also, as much as i would love to answer all those awesome questions of yours, i\'m afraid, you\'ll just have to wait and see (oops, there i go being evil again lol xD). as always thanks for reading!!! and about the peter pan thing, i think it was either you or another reader that approached me about that. yes, don\'t worry, that is me. i started posting and then forgot i had an account there, and now it\'s so far, i\'m not sure if i want to keep posting (it takes so long!!). but maybe i will. anyways, thanks for looking out for me!