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Curse of the Reapers by deanine

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: A different sort of alternate universe... It is a world under the thumb of an ancient emperor. Muggle society has been oppressed beyond recognition. Wizards rule over all, their only laws defined by power. This is the story of a rebellion, a family, a traitor, and the long road that leads home at last.
Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 08/13/08 Title: Chapter 22: She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not

It's great to see this story update again. Its been a while.

Author's Response: Thanks, and it has.

After the Die is Cast by Mudblood428

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Since the tragedy at the Astronomy Tower, Harry has become an even more formidable wizard, but a shocking revelation may mean the difference between life and death for The Boy Who Lived. It is the final stage of Harry's quest to destroy Lord Voldemort - can he save the Wizarding World and those he loves from the treachery of the Dark Lord... and also save himself? [Action takes place in media res towards the end of Harry's Seventh Year at Hogwarts (Post-HBP).]
Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 04/13/07 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

Your story is great! And a bunch of other adjectives I can't think of at the moment. It is one of my favorites on this site.

Senses by Gryffinpuff

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Sense: a word of so many meanings. This is a story about senses. The common sense notion of self preservation that is lost when friends are in need, the senses of the body that can be damaged so easily, and the intuitive senses of the heart that tell you when things have changed. R/Hr focused with a little bit of H/G, not a lot of fluff, with rotating views between the characters on a truly horrific day.

Quicksilver Quills Runner-Up - Best Romance, Canon
Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 03/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: Dulling of the Senses

Don't leave the story like that! Please update soon!

Author's Response: I would never abandon this story, its like my baby. Should be through the queue soon *crosses fingers*

When Darkness Did Surround Us by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: 2007 QSQ Awards Runner-up for Best Post-Hogwarts

Petunia Dursley is enjoying dinner with her family when someone starts pounding on the door. Ready to tell them off for being so rude and refusing to leave when they didn't answer at first, Petunia opens the door to have a baby shoved into her arms and told she is his only family. Years after the great Harry Potter defeated Voldemort, Death Eaters have risen to power and taken over Hogsmeade, Hogwarts, and even the Ministry of Magic. Their marriages announced invalid, their children in danger and their lives hanging by a thread, the heroes of the war with Voldemort must once again take a stand against evil.

H/G and R/Hr

(pre-Deathly Hallows)


*Quote from The Epilogue*

Suddenly Harry was kissing her as if he couldn’t resist the temptation. There was a kind of frenzy to the kiss at first, a kind of desperate need, but it melted into something soft and sweet and gentle, a promise of a future when kisses would never be limited. When they broke apart he rested his forehead on hers, sprinkling a few affectionate butterfly kisses across her face. “I love you,” he murmured.
Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 06/24/07 Title: Chapter 10: The End of The World as We Know It

NO! Don't kill off Ron! Though, hopefully by adding that quote that means the next chapter will come soon, right?

Author's Response: Yes, that quote means the next chapter should come soon ;)

Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 08/02/07 Title: Chapter 12: The Devil's in the Details

Well, I'm glad to see that you updated! And glad to see you are continueing on with the story after the realease of the last book. I was tooken by surprise by Ron and Albert's plan, I thought that Albert chickened out last second! I liked how Ron asked Harry about food at the ending. Deffinaly more cheerier than the last chapter.

Author's Response: Much more cheerier than the last chapter! Hopefully another update will be here soon, thanks for the review.

Author's Response: Much more cheerier than the last chapter! Hopefully another update will be here soon, thanks for the review.

Author's Response: Hehe, oops.

Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 09/26/07 Title: Chapter 13: The Words You Never Want To Hear

Yet another suspenseful ending. You have a habit of doing that. Will we find out in the next chapter what happened to Tonks?

Author's Response: Yes, in the next chapter you will finally find out what happened to the last person. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 03/26/07 Title: Chapter 4: The Sins of the Father

I love your story! While most of the Weasleys are out of the fire, so to say and Ginny and Hermione are close, poor Harry isn't. Is he going to starve to death or will he be kept alive longer? I also like the last line Remus says before the POV changes "I need you to help the assasination of Severus Snape". I hope he does get assasinated soon. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I\'m glad you like it! Hopefully I\'ll finally get around to an update soon and those questions will be answered.

Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 04/12/07 Title: Chapter 9: The Hope To Cling To

Yay!You finnaly updated! Gaurding Harry would be a suicide misson? I can't exactly see him having enough strengh to escpe on his own. Than agian I could see why they would be wary anyway since he killed their original leader. How is Ginny doing? Did the poiton work ?

Author's Response: How is Ginny doing will be answered in the next chapter. And you\'re right, Yay for an update, FINALLY! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 04/27/07 Title: Chapter 10: The End of The World as We Know It

Well it was nice to see what happened to Ginny and knowing that we will find out what is happening to Tonks when her husband is overseas planning a assination.The pregency thing is not too good for Ginny I can't see Malfoy liking it.

Author's Response: I know, I\'m sure Malfoy won\'t like it at all! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 07/14/07 Title: Chapter 11: The Schemes We Dream

Wow, you sure liked using the phrase "Then he/she couldn't think of anything" in this chapter. And everything goes wrong. Ron is dead. Although I am hoping there is some weird twist were he turns out alive, I mean Albert did say the killing curse wrong as pointed out by one of your reveiwers(that better not be a spelling mistake). Tonks is captured, most likely along with McGonnigal and Kingsley. Ginny STILL hasn't made it out of the house, though at least she took the poition. And Bill got hit with a curse after making a deal with the devil so to say. Though I don't know what the spell did, I'm guessing it just ingures people or stuns them for a long time. I don't think it can be a killing curse as AK seems to be the only one that kills instantly so Bill would probably go through a few minutes of pain before dying or something like that.Looks like the good side are going to face to MAJOR obscales. While I know there will be a section on those abroad, are we going to find out what happened to the four? I liked all of the suspense in the chapter.

Author's Response: The good side is good to face some major obstacles, you\'re right. But not everyone is dead yet! Thanks for the review, and I will try and update quickly. The next chapter features what happened to Ron, what\'s happening to Harry, and what\'s happening to Hermione and Petunia.

The Ravenclaw Quibbler by Ravenclaw

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Welcome to the Ravenclaw Quibbler! This delightful digest delves into various magical mysteries and features articles, interviews, and editorials by the members of Ravenclaw House. Volume V explores the amazing theories and conspiracies of book seven which our reporters uncovered exclusively for your reading pleasure. We hope you enjoy our exploration of the wizarding magazine often referred to as 'rubbish' and 'trite.' We find Luna's favorite tabloid a fascinating look into the wizarding world, and wish you happy reading as well!
Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 04/20/07 Title: Chapter 2: Volume II

I liked the "Great Vegetable Heist of í43"! The articles are very creative!

Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 04/20/07 Title: Chapter 3: Volume III

I like the part about the play in this issue, the last song title was the funniest.

Welcome, The Darkness Infused by Prophecies

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Harry Potter has always been unusual. But how unusual will he become when a brutal massacre at Bill and Fleur's wedding leaves him simmering with rage and revenge? Confronted with a darker side of himself and with unlikely allies, what's going to be next? Follow him while he deals with the ever growing threat of a world full of despair and darkness, and his quest to conquer the Dark Lord. Book 7 fic, HBP compliant.
Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 05/19/07 Title: Chapter 4: The Portotalus & Releaser

Wow, you're not cutting Harry a break anytime soon. I like the story though, Harry's reaction to Ginny's death was really tearjerking

Author's Response: I\'m delighted you like the story so far. And regarding Ginny\'s death, that is the exact emotion and feeling I was trying to give the reader! Glad it has worked for you :)

The Unknown Marauder by Slian Martreb

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: In which Peter clarifies a few things for the general population.
Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 04/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Unknown Marauder

Intesting narrative. I liked the beggining lines
\\Peter Pettigrew would like the world to know that he isnít a murdering, traitorous, cowardly, evil and stupid bastard.
His parents were happily married long before he was born, thank you very much. No need to drag them into this\\

Author's Response: Honestly? I feel as though that is the only redeeming thing to have come out of that story-the opening lines, I mean. Thank you.

Mortality by dashofmagic

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Everything was fine. There was pain and hurt at the death of their headmaster, but they were all okay. And then, he fell in love with her. And their romance would spark a betrayal unlike anything Harry had ever known. But it isn't just lost friendship Harry must worry about. There is an epidemic sweeping through Hogwarts and threatening to destroy the Wizarding World. And as his own health begins to deteriorate, will he have the strength to defeat the man behind it all? Or will the betrayal of his friend, in essence, destroy him?

This fic has not been abandoned!! I'm having a bit of writer's block in reference to the ending, but it is NOT abandoned.
Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 04/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Bell Tolls Seven

I like your introduction part to your story

The Haunted Dreams of a Traitor by BlackClaude

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Every choice must be lived with.

Written for the Character Sonnet Challenge by BlackClaude of Ravenclaw.
Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 04/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Haunted Dreams of a Traitor

This poem is wonderful!

Author's Response: Thank you!


Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 04/20/07 Title: None

I'm anxious to find out about this other world. I like how this was triggered by the mouth organ

Author's Response: Thanks. I was rereading the sixth book and Dumbledore\'s quote leapt out at me. I\'m glad you enjoyed it. This is my first time writing fan fiction. If you have any suggestions on how to improve, I\'d be delighted to hear them.

Essence of Loyalty by Gonz

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: When Dolores Umbridge was a young girl, she pledged loyalty to one man: Cornelius Fudge. After a lifetime of service, the bounds of that loyalty are tested when the world comes crashing down around them.

Won Second Place in: The Dolores Umbridge Chaptered Fic Challenge.
Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 04/20/07 Title: Chapter 2: A Profitable Relationship

Writing Umbridges relationship with Fudge is a unique idea. I like the rivalry between Fudge and Crouch.

Author's Response: Thanks for the rewiev! I enjoyed creating the rival and it made sense conisdering Fudge beat Crouch out for the Minister later, so who says it couldn\'t have started earlier?

In His Head by BloodRayne

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Peter continues to feed his hatred...where will it take him?

For the April Challenge, Prompt 1 (Succumbing to Darkness), by BloodRayne of Gryffindor house.
Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 04/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: Feeding Hatred

I've seen many one-shootss were Wormtail is somewhat regretful of what he did and haven't seen much of theese were he is just really evil. Good job on the story, I really liked it.

Author's Response: Thankies!

Drifting by Secret shadows

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Drifting 'long the river Styx,
Where broken oaths and dreams do thrive,
Bodies float beneath the surface,
Those who lost the will to survive....

The inferi of Lord Voldemort's sad purpose reflected by rhyme. Do enjoy. ^_^ I LOVE nice reviews by the way *hint hint* Let the chills begin.
Reviewer: Nevica5 Signed
Date: 04/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Drifting

Great job! The poem was well writen

Author's Response: Thank you. Mainly, it is thanks to my beta, irishblueeyes. She helped edit my stanzas where they needed work. She gave me ideas to help the words flow, and that\'s how I got here. It\'s amazing, thrilling to know that people enjoy my poetry. To all my new friends here at mugglenet.com, I will continue to write for you.