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Legacy by arus_knight

Rated:642 Reviews
Summary: Harry suffers through another horrible day at the Dursleys'. Little does he know that this day will start him on a road of discovery and renewal.
Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 05/10/05 Title: Chapter 42: Why a man fights

OMG!! That was SO awesome!! James and Lily still sacraficed themselves for the survival of Harry and everyone else in the world. Oh don't worry I'll keep my eyes glued to my computer screen for your sequel!!

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 04/26/05 Title: Chapter 41: You can't go back again...or can you?

Okay, what happened to Voldemort? He can't be dead. What about the profecy? *ugh* My head hurts! Please update so my headache will go away!

Civility by SecretKeeper

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 341 Reviews
Summary: THE LAST CHAPTER IS IN! Read, review and enjoy! The first battle of the second War- Dementors illegally issuing the Kiss on Death Eaters- A murder in the Weasley family- Voldemort's plans- Dumbledore's and Harry's struggle. In the midst of this chaos and hardship, Hermione is left feeling slightly disheartened. When Harry and Ron are temporarily unavailable to befriend her, an ironic and seemingly platonic relationship is born. Will it ease the pain of the War's influence, or will it only create further turmoil for a girl that needs anything but? And in the end, a terrible decision is left to be made; one that no natural person would envy.
Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 04/14/05 Title: Chapter 15: Civility

That was a beautiful story!! Unique ending, and I loved how you showed Draco's torment. Please right a sequel, or at least a one-shot for this story!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I appreciate the lovely remarks!! I strived to show Draco's torment (and often feared I over-did it, to be honest), but I'm glad you liked it! I'm considering a sequel- if I write one, it'll be out sometime next weekend/week. Thanks!

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 03/23/05 Title: Chapter 14: Broken

WOW! I never been on such and emotional rollercoaster before! *10*

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, a very BIG rollercoaster.. especially considering this whole story takes place over the course of a week or two.


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Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 04/07/05 Title: None

Just read through the first four chapters, great start so far.

Author's Response: thanks for reveiwing!

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 06/15/05 Title: None

I like this chapter for a filler. Molly's letter sounds just like her or any other mother for that matter. But I have no doubt that hormonally challenged teenagers will find a way.

Author's Response: thanks so much !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! they will find a way..... trust me. *winks* i loved writing that part of molly's letter. in my opinion, that is the best part of the chapter. i have a big suprise for my readers in the next chapter. not saming anything else. you ill jsut have to read the seventh when it gets posted!!!!

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 05/14/05 Title: None

LOL Exploding toilet with left over dinner, as long as it's pre-digested, it doesn't disgusting at all. Glad to Ron approves! Update Soon!!

Author's Response: hehehe it was pre-digested dinner. thanks for reviewing!! i'm working on the 6th right now.

Reversal by Fain Oakenbringer

Rated:43 Reviews
Summary: After unwittingly consuming a potion, Harry and Draco switch personalities. And though he's horrified at his niceness initially, Draco's starting to have a very warm, fuzzy feeling for a certain Mudblood...
Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 04/17/05 Title: Chapter 1: Nice? Draco Malfoy?

LOL How come only the two of them had the weird tasting pumkin juice?


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Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 05/19/05 Title: None

Hmmm...this story of yours is completely exercising my brain. At first I thought the mystery man might be Bill, but now that the note is signed T. M. M., I'm not so sure. Update Soon!!

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 05/26/05 Title: None

Hmmm, nice conflict going. Draco's distraught over Hermione, Bill's developing feelings for her, and you still haven't reveled who T.M.M. from the dance is. Update Soon!!


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 04/22/05 Title: None

Was it really Snape who sent the letter?

The Heart Has Two Sides by TheGreatLinkster

Rated: Professors • 217 Reviews
Summary: A story about Draco and Ginny as two people on opposing sides in a world heading towards division and war once more.
Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 10/21/05 Title: Chapter 26: The Heart Has Two Sides

Wahoo!! First to review! Loved it, glad Draco was able to redeem himself in Ginny's eyes. It's so true, human beings judge people by the people they associate with. We need to stop doing that. The term " The apple doesn't fall far from the tree" doesn't always apply, we're all individuals. Once again, two thumbs up!!

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 05/09/06 Title: Chapter 30: Life Falls Apart

OMG This chapter SO SUCKS for Draco! I hope he'll be able to pick up the pieces, if they're any left. Will Ginny be re entering the picture soon? Sounds like Draco really needs her or anyone for that matter.

Author's Response: After a few chapters, yes. The one I\'m working on now is from her point of view after everything has gone down. I\'m going back and forth for awhile, and then I\'ll bring them together again soon. Thanks for reading. It\'s slow going writing now, because of everything else going on in RL. :)

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 03/08/05 Title: Chapter 20: Pansy's Broken Dreams

I have to give at two thumbs up on Pansy's response to Draco. He maybe "perfection" in his world, but not in the Weasley's world.

Author's Response: Exactly. No matter how perfect Draco beleives he is, in the Weasley world, he will never be good enough, IMO. But I don't think Draco will ever really "get" that, because of the way he has been raised. The dialogue between Pansy and Draco was fun to write. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 03/14/05 Title: Chapter 21: The Friendship Stone

This is an adorable exchange between Draco and Ginny. Please update soon.

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 08/27/05 Title: Chapter 25: The Events at the Ministry

Wait...I thought Lucius killed the Parkinsons? If I remember correctly, I'll have go back and re-read the earlier chapters. Glad your update FINALLY updated. This one took FOREVER. Glad to see Draco's still Dark Mark free, but how's he going to explain the no contact over the winter holiday? Wonder if Ginny will even accept the explaination?

Author's Response: Yeah, it was a long time between chapters...between switching servers and all my rejections and resubmissions it took a long time. But thanks for waiting. ;) The Parkinsons are apparently dead, but not everything is as it always seems. Stay tuned. And Draco is still Dark Mark free, though the time is coming when he may have to choose.

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 27: Darkness Falls

You certainly set the mood with this chapter. Even I felt depressed, darkness didn't just fall, it practically consumed the whole school. I'm going to need to recover before I read another story. Something really bright and cheery, like a cheesy teen flick.

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 06/11/06 Title: Chapter 31: Strange Dreams

*gasp* An update! *faints* LOL Freaky dream eh? Hmm... doesn't sound promising for the Order at all. Err.. is Pansy one of the trusted students that can allow people on the grounds of Hogwarts?

Author's Response: Actually, she is not. But you will see what happens...

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 02/19/06 Title: Chapter 28: Loyalties

HURRAY Update!!! And the gloom continues... but does Draco REALLY have to be a Death Eater? Loved how you portrayed Draco's feelings of "alone" before he was interrupted by Dumbledore. But Draco's conversation with Dumbledore did lighten up the atmosphere, just an itsy bit.

Author's Response: I'm floored that people come back even though it's taken me so long lately to update! Thanks! :) The next chappie is coming soon, I hope. I'm nearly done revising. Unfortunately, the darkness of the story will continue into the next chapter. But as I've gotten comments about lightening it up a bit, I might work something a bit more hopeful into future chapters. :)

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal Signed
Date: 03/31/05 Title: Chapter 23: More Trouble

Nice backround story to Draco's plight. Now it seeems that he and Pansy are in the same boat, sort of. Update soon!