Hurray! Update! Took you long enough, loved the little quiet time between Harry and Ginny. It was just right? Okay so what happened to Percy, is he going to make a full recovery.
Just read through all 7 chapters, I think you're doing a great job so far. Mrs. Weasley and Lupin in an akward position was funny. Is Ron's brain attacks and Hermione's fainting spells related? Update soon.
OMG!! Harry and Ginny are SO BUSTED!!! Who screamed and what broke in the sitting room?! The twists in this story keep getting better and better!!! =)
Ohhhh, so Ron's a seer, hmmm wonder which type? And what was that urgency all about with McGonagall? Update soon!
Hehehe, I liked this chapter. Takes me back to my hormonially challenged teen years. Update soon!
Whew! Draco's the father! *wipes forehead* I hope Harry and Draco get enough training before the baby's born.
WOW! Please update soon, I want to know who the father is.
Okay, I read all the way to the end of the chapter and you ended it with this.
Hermione grinned. “Sure. Just let me get my bathing suit on.”
So Malfoy wants to see Hermione in a bathing suit? But then again, he is a teenage boy, but what do I know, I'm just a loyal reader.
But this reaction that Hermione noticed in Malfoy caught my attention.
Hermione saw a flash of anger in Malfoy’s eyes, but it was quickly replaced by his fake lovey-dovey expression.
Then again he could've been pissed because Hermione didn't take him at face value, but he is Malfoy. I have no idea where I'm going with this, I'm just rambling. *mumbles to self*
But this statement made by Hermione really made me laugh!
“I was too mentally unstable.”
Then again, Malfoy could actually mean what he says in this statement.
“Grange-Hermione, look. If we have to spend the rest of the year together, we better start acting civil towards one another, got it? I’m not spending the rest of the year with someone who keeps calling me ‘Malfoy’. Call me ‘Draco’ from now on, and I’ll call you Hermione.”
I'll just wait for the next update to see where my rambling has gone, if meant anything at all.
Author's Response: how did you get that malfoy wanted to see hermione in a bathing suit? malfoy was gone and the girls were going swimming. to go swimming, hermione needed a bathing suit. to all the rest of the stuff, okay. thanks for reading and reviewing in such detail, i love these kind of reviews.
OMG! I hope Hermione gets revenge on Draco! Update soon.
Author's Response: actually, something completely different will happen, kinda unexpected.
I like your story so far, keep updating. I hope Draco opens up to Hermione soon, sounds like he might get distracted and caught he doesn't tell someone about his double agent thing.
Well, at least Draco admitted to Hermione, even thought it was only after he was cornered. Great update! So true, Lucius would only be proud of Draco when he became a Deatheater!
lol Snape in bunny slippers, priceless! Ron was very IC with his reaction at Hermione's being friends with Draco, at least Harry's trying to be understanding.
Oh, Harry's in SO much trouble! Of course I meant with Ginny, who care's about Snape.
Awww... that was so cute! Totally loved the scene in Honeydukes. What was Ginny nervous about? She's a Weasley and Fred and George's sister for crying out loud! I had several of those OMG I've grown up moments myself. Gosh! That makes me feel old!
Are You Crazy?! You can't stop your story NOW! Especially after this cliffy!! You MUST continue!!! I need to know how the aftermath will turn out!
Great update! It felt like was in high school again with this chapter. All the gossip, tension and emotion in the air, while trying not to expose the truth. Can't wait for the next one!!
Author's Response: Hopefully remembering high school was a good thing for you... ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Oh, Harry's in for it now, the rest of the brothers supect him! lol Never underestimate the power a mother has over her children, no matter how old they are! I smiled when all the boys were scrambling around the kitchen. I wonder how the Weasley brothers are going to tourment Harry about liking Ginny?
Author's Response: I always imagined Mrs. Weasley as standing in the middle of the kitchen, brandishing a stirring spoon and ordering about all those raucous boys. As for the brothers... well. You'll see. ;)
I nevery object to early Christmas presents! And I really enjoyed this one! I like your transition from serious to light hearted with Harry and Ginny's conversation. *thumbs up* Excellent writing there! Keep up the excellent writing, and maybe we can have another early Christmas present. Hint, Hint! *nudge*nudge*wink*wink*
Whoa! Ron gave Harry the "Malfoy" look! Plus he was able to put two and two together without the help of Hermione. Thank goodness they made up! Can't wait to hear about Christmas, update soon!
Author's Response: Well, Hermione does have a powerful influence... ;) Thanks, hawaiinhulagal!
Overprotective brothers, what a pain!! Glad I'm the oldest without brothers, but only in situations like that. I didn't think the dialogue was boring, in my opinion, it was quite amusing.