what a fantastic fic, good work =)
Author's Response: thank you very much! i truly appreciate it!
oh god, hurry up! fantastic as usual, but please, get those chapters rolling!
fantastic, get ch22 and 23...and as many as possible [!!] done asap, i dont think i can wait that long to see how this all plays out. good job! =)
Author's Response: im going as fast as i can and still write well!! (*is still suffering over chapter 20....*)
absolutely wonderful. what a fantastic ending. you must write another fic. well done.
Author's Response: thank you so much! im so happy that the end is not a let down to most of you! yay!!
oh please a sequel!
what a wonderful story. please do make a sequel, and be sure to post the title on your review page.. just to make sure it's impossible to overlook. well done, one of the best reviews i've read on this, and that's surely saying a lot. unique and completely addicting. not at all cliché, not at all the same plot as all the marauder fics- just perfectly unique. i look forward to enjoying your sequel even half as much as i enjoyed this one. it would still be one of the best out there. congrats on a fantastic job. -anira
fantastic. what a great plot and resolution. well done =)
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you'll read the sequal, SCAR which already has the first four chapters up!
to be perfectly honest i dont think lana is that bad - i think shes human. she cares about sirius, but she also has to look out for herself. and at the moment, tangle had something on her (i wonder what...!) and what she did seemed like the only choice. mistake, but an understandable one. awesome chapter again =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much hunny!! -huggles- I'm glad you see Lana as that, as that was what I was trying to bring across. Thank you so mcuh, you ahve given me the will to actually write my next chapter! WHOOT! Thankeis again -huggles- xxx
well done as always, seemed shorter.. but maybe thats because i was just hoping that there would be at least 5 new chapters posted... haha good job!
Wow, what an amazingly passionate and perfect chapter. this is my first time commenting, because it is the first chapter that got me actually emotionally attatched to your story (though the others are wonderful as well). i find myself practically lusting over the character that you created as Sirius just as much as the girls you write about! ;) its out of control, you write smoothly and realistically, well done. if all us girls already did'nt love Sirius enough!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! I'm glad this chapter had such an affect on you, and I hope chapters in the future may make you feel the same! Why thankyou! He is rather wonderful...There wasn't much inofrmation given on the young Sirius, just that he was a bit of a prat...So I tried to show a different side of him. The sexy, yet rather vulnerable side...I don't see how it can be smooth and realistic if it comes from my brain :P That's definitely not soemthing that's smooth and realistic!! But thank you very mmuch, you have given me the inspiration to continue writing my new chapter! -Bows- Happy reading and reviewing! -huggles- xxx
wow that was vindictive. good chapter as usuaalll, when should we be expecting #17?
Author's Response: I love vindictiveness...It has a certain rustic charm to me...Teehee....Chapter 17 is up, as you probably already know since my replies are exceedingly late! I hope you enjoyed it! carry on with the absolutely wonderful reviews! They're really encouraging me! And that goes to all my reviewers, couldn't have done it without you people! -Huggles- xxx
just wanted you to know that your story is one of the best on the site, and thats saying a whole lot considering you've only written 5 chapters. this one, particularly, was impressive. to write about such a tragic event with such eloquence without it seeming cheesy and overly dramatic definitely deserves praise. good work! keep them chapters cominnnn ^^
Author's Response: awwwwwww thank you..........awwwww that was nice.....awwwwwwww............ you are so nice! awwww...i cant get over it! so nice! i dont deserve it!!!!
that ending was sadistic, absolutely cruel. how could you do that to your readers!? brilliant chapter as usual- but cmon- be nice! =)
Author's Response: i...find...pleasure...from...your...PAIN!!! ;) at least i had a warning ;)
glad to see you back... this chapter was very touching - i loved the introduction of the weasleys, i had this ridiculous vision of a whole slew of red haired twins walking around in dumbledore's office knocking things over as i read it, couldnt get the smile off my face. it still kills me though whenever i read about peter and his descent to treachery.. good work!
Author's Response: doesnt it bother you to think about that whole situation? the whole idea of someones good friend betraying them just gets me every time. and every story needs a little more red heads, dontcha think?
so.. bloody.. good. wow. GOD it kills me though. but in such a good way... =) desperately awaiting the next chapters..
Author's Response: ahhhh oh thank you soo much!!!!!!!! meow! i am so honored. but i don't want it to kill you, friend! live! live! (or blame jk it's her depressing story)
that was a fantastic chapter. i had planned on reading the whole fic before commenting one huge comment, but i had to after reading this one. it was perfect and amazingly well written. i love how you made aberforth, a seemingly crazy old guy, candidly stating- not predicting- what would happen in some-15 years later. wonderful, keep it up
oh please update soon!!
quite good as usual - it just kills me to see peter and the beginning of his betrayal, and i commend you for being discrete, but just obvious enough to make the readers (or maybe just me...) want to yell and scream to everyone about what's going to happen.
woah, i just commented on your absolute [b]need[/b] to make a sequel... and here it is. [b]-_-[/b] who knew? well! good thing i found it! looking forward to another brilliant fanfic!
cmonnnnn this fic is too good to wait thisssss long for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Ach! I know, it's been long. And this is when I start to take the abuse. *ducks* It's coming, I promise!