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What a wonderful story. It's really powerful and leaves an impact. It's great!
Wonderful story. The symbolism you used was fantastic and I really liked the "Patronus memory" you created. Great job- you're an awesome writer.
My favorite part of this poem has got to be the ending. "The-Boy-They-Will-Forget" That is just so great- not that he wil be forgotten but I mean it is a powerfeul ending to the poem.
The only lines in this poem that I didn't totally like are these:
Just keeping it all together when
Others think you'll fail
I think the when should go in the second line so it's "When others think..." It just makes more sense to me that way. But if it makes sense to you the way you have it- feel free to ignore me. So anyways, good job on this poem.
I really liked this poem. This is honestly shows what would probably have gone through his mind in a situation like a photo shoot. I also like how you managed to put some darker lines in a not-so-dark situation. Very creative. ^_^
I like it- nice and short but totally worth reading. I went to the tens to see the ten shortest poems and although this is very short it is undoubtedly good. ^_^
Author's Response: :D I love that ten thing, it brings me so many more reviews! Thanks for the comments :)
aw, such a cute harry/ginny fic. u did a great job. ^_^
Hi! Dropped by to leave a review as a thank you for my banner! Anyways, I must say, the first chapter is so interesting. Even without the Hr/Tom Riddle notice in the summary, you clearly hint at it. Hermione's determination to fulfill Harry's last request is excellent, though I wish we could've gotten more details on how he knew what he did (though she may find that out in later chapters). Anyways, excellent start to the story. ^^
This is such a sad, sweet, emotional, and beautiful story. You did such an amazing job. ^_^
Aww... poor Simon and Harry! You did a good job of showing how prejudice people can be just because of who you are, where you're from, and who your friends are. Please update soon- I wonder what the kiss you talked about in your hint for the next chapter. Is it between two people- Ginny and Harry perhaps? I wonder if it is the Dementor's Kiss- since you described it as "empty and cold." Update soon- PLEASE!
Author's Response: like your musings - thanks for your comments :-)
Ron is being horrible- I hope he comes around. please please please update soon. ^_^
Author's Response: I do, too. The Golden Trio shouldn\'t end like this, right? :-) Thanks for reviewing.
Wow, I was actually right. Harry did sorta kiss Ginny, and then there was the Dementor's kiss. Poor Justin. Please update soon.
Author's Response: hehe, yes! I guess the little preview was kind of obvious, at least when you know your way around the Potterverse. Thanks for the review, Chap 14 is almost finished...
Oh, very sad. At first I thought that everyone had died and were reunited in the afterlife or something. Very nice story, the fantastic imagery you used to describe the wedding really painted a picture in my mind. Excellent work. ^^
Wow... you did such a good job on this. My favorite part is probably the stanza before the last one. I could just see the sad smile and his turning away. *sigh* So sad. Even though this includes the breakup and how they can't be together- it was still fluffy.Nice job!
Author's Response: why thank you! :-)...i believe ive read some of ur poems before but since my computer is being stupid these days i didnt bother to review..if i can remember correctly, hehe, maybe i did leave one... anywho, this one is probably my favorite out of all of them, i think the deepest and the nicest, overall...thanks! :-)
I really liked this. It was so romantic. I don't know what else to say. Excellent job!
Author's Response: thanks!! i think the descriptions are what make it romantic, and im happy they did...when i was writing this i tried to see ginny\'s attractiveness from a boy\'s (i.e. Harry\'s) POV and im glad to see it worked nicely :-)
I really love this story. It is like one of the best fanfictions I've read in a long time. The wait is always worth it. I am always so happy when you update. Please do so soon! ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m really going to try and update soon for the long wait on this chapter. My sister (who reads my fics!) had surgery and I puttered around taking care of her instead of writing, but now that she\'s better . . . soon!
This story is amazing. I can't wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
aw, such a sad ending to the chapter. i would have never predicted that something like that would happen to harry in this story. please update soon.
Author's Response: Yeah, it\'s quite sad. And it was meant to be a surprise, so I\'m glad it was.
YEY! HE LIVES! this was such an amazing story. I really like how it ended. great job ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you!
Wow, very very short, but still good. And the whole thing rhymes- which is cool.
My favorite part is the end:
Has left its stain.
Good job. ^_^
Author's Response: thanks.
Ummmm... wow. This was great. ^^
I find it so interesting when people change the words of well-known rhymes or songs and make it something totally different. This was quite funny, especially since it was originally Santa's song, cuz Santa and Voldy are completely opposite. My fave stanza:
He’ll kill you when you’re sleeping,
He’ll kill you when you’re awake,
He knows if you’ve been bad or good,
So be bad for Merlin’s sake.
It just flows perfectly, like the song.
Gonna find out his pure and filth
If I were you, I would've followed what the song had "who's naughty and nice", but used it to say something like who is a pureblood and a mudblood/muggle.
Voldemort is coming to town.
And curses that cause pain,
This is just another litle thing I must critique on. The way the second line is phrased makes it seemed as if you finished with an incomplete thought the stanza before that one. I would just rephrase the second line so that it is its own complete thought, not part of a phrase. I'm probably just being confusing. Anyways, this poes was awesome, completely different from your other works that I have read. Keep on writing. ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I\'m glad you liked it. I\'ll think about the changes you suggested. Thanks so much for the cirtique.