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03/15/07





I'm never really here but I appreciate reviews, they make life a little brighter. I try to pop in from time to time, but I'm terribly sorry that I'm neglecting MNFF.

A shout out to any people still reading my wimsy little pieces. =D



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Reviews by Lalalalatina


Meeting in the Dark by Charmina

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 9 Reviews
Summary: “I’ve always wondered what it would feel like to fly, to be completely free and just soar across the sky,” the boy by the window whispered as he closed his eyes and let the wind wash over him. One-shot
Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 04/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Meeting in the Dark

What a wonderful story. It's really powerful and leaves an impact. It's great!



Chasing Dragons by Seren

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 16 Reviews
Summary: Two days after the Battle of the Department of Mysteries, Ginny Weasley sits at the banks of the Great Lake, remembering a game she once played with Ron, and contemplating who she is, what she was, and her decision to reclaim her innocence.
Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chasing Dragons - One-Shot

Wonderful story. The symbolism you used was fantastic and I really liked the "Patronus memory" you created. Great job- you're an awesome writer.



Maybe Tomorrow by TasteTheRainbow

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 4 Reviews
Summary: When Harry begins to feel so small in the wizarding world after Sirius's death, how he copes with it is poetry... (Harry's POV) (one-shot)
Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: Just Listening

My favorite part of this poem has got to be the ending. "The-Boy-They-Will-Forget" That is just so great- not that he wil be forgotten but I mean it is a powerfeul ending to the poem.

The only lines in this poem that I didn't totally like are these:
Just keeping it all together when
Others think you'll fail

I think the when should go in the second line so it's "When others think..." It just makes more sense to me that way. But if it makes sense to you the way you have it- feel free to ignore me. So anyways, good job on this poem.



The Pretend Boy-Who-Lived by immortal_evil

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 16 Reviews
Summary: Harry's mind is racing as he is forced to take part in a photo shoot for an article for the Daily Prophet. He can not help but feel alone in a room full of people.
Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 04/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: GoF Photo Shoot

I really liked this poem. This is honestly shows what would probably have gone through his mind in a situation like a photo shoot. I also like how you managed to put some darker lines in a not-so-dark situation. Very creative. ^_^



The Boy who Lived by Diamond Quill

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 62 Reviews
Summary: A short poem about Harry Potter.
Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 04/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Poem

I like it- nice and short but totally worth reading. I went to the tens to see the ten shortest poems and although this is very short it is undoubtedly good. ^_^

Author's Response: :D I love that ten thing, it brings me so many more reviews! Thanks for the comments :)



The Forget Me Do Chew by Elizabeth90

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 50 Reviews
Summary: At the end of the summer before her 5th year, the twins offer Ginny one of their new products: a Forget Me Do Chew, a troublesome little sweet that she's all too tempted to use on Harry...H/G one-shot with some R/H!
Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 03/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

aw, such a cute harry/ginny fic. u did a great job. ^_^



Take My Heart Away by Hatusu

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 960 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: Hermione goes back in time with one mission: to kill Tom Riddle before he ever comes to power. A difficult task, correct? An impossible one, she realizes, as a love between them grows stronger than anything she has ever known. Now Hermione has a choice to make. Will she condemn the Wizarding world to almost certain destruction, or will she take the life of the one boy she has ever loved?
Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 08/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: The End

Hi! Dropped by to leave a review as a thank you for my banner! Anyways, I must say, the first chapter is so interesting. Even without the Hr/Tom Riddle notice in the summary, you clearly hint at it. Hermione's determination to fulfill Harry's last request is excellent, though I wish we could've gotten more details on how he knew what he did (though she may find that out in later chapters). Anyways, excellent start to the story. ^^



"Mum, Dad, It's Me... Harry." by Mudblood428

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 476 Reviews
Summary: Harry, Ron, and Hermione make a trip to Godric's Hollow to visit the Potters' graves. There, Harry speaks to his parents for the first time, and in so doing, discovers that the dead are never truly lost. (One-shot. Bring your kleenex.)
Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 03/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

This is such a sad, sweet, emotional, and beautiful story. You did such an amazing job. ^_^



Simon says... by Peach

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 152 Reviews
Summary: In Harry’s sixth year a fifth house is added at Hogwarts. During re-sorting, recent events cause Harry to reconsider – and he unintentionally ends up in Slytherin, where he meets Simon, a former Ravenclaw.

When a new prophecy surfaces, old bonds of friendship will be challenged. Harry has to deal with the question of friend or foe, faith or fool, while living in times of mistrust, betrayal, and death. (No Slash)
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The PG-13 rating and warnings are for later chapters. A short note will be posted at the beginning of each one of them.

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Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 05/14/07 Title: Chapter 12: Turning Point

Aww... poor Simon and Harry! You did a good job of showing how prejudice people can be just because of who you are, where you're from, and who your friends are. Please update soon- I wonder what the kiss you talked about in your hint for the next chapter. Is it between two people- Ginny and Harry perhaps? I wonder if it is the Dementor's Kiss- since you described it as "empty and cold." Update soon- PLEASE!

Author's Response: like your musings - thanks for your comments :-)



Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 03/16/07 Title: Chapter 9: (Ir)rational Jealousy

Ron is being horrible- I hope he comes around. please please please update soon. ^_^

Author's Response: I do, too. The Golden Trio shouldn\'t end like this, right? :-) Thanks for reviewing.



Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 06/27/07 Title: Chapter 13: There's something about Justin

Wow, I was actually right. Harry did sorta kiss Ginny, and then there was the Dementor's kiss. Poor Justin. Please update soon.

Author's Response: hehe, yes! I guess the little preview was kind of obvious, at least when you know your way around the Potterverse. Thanks for the review, Chap 14 is almost finished...



A Dream Wedding by blacsilver_serpent

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 10 Reviews
Summary: An excerpt from the story:
A silver-white stream of flame wrapped itself around his and her hands. Ginny’s hand found Harry’s and Harry felt warmth spreading through his body. As the flames evaporated, they unclasped their hands. Their hands which held a rose petal earlier now held a silver ring. He took the ring on his palm and put it on her left ring finger and she did the same.

Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 06/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Dream Wedding

Oh, very sad. At first I thought that everyone had died and were reunited in the afterlife or something. Very nice story, the fantastic imagery you used to describe the wedding really painted a picture in my mind. Excellent work. ^^



Out of the Blue by lady magician

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 31 Reviews
Summary: Ginny Weasley is tough girl. But she, like everyone else in the world, experiences sorrows that come with being human...She finds her escape in the magical world of poetry...And she makes sure that nobody knows how she feels inside...Post-HBP Ginny's feelings after the break-up...
Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: Ginny's Story

Wow... you did such a good job on this. My favorite part is probably the stanza before the last one. I could just see the sad smile and his turning away. *sigh* So sad. Even though this includes the breakup and how they can't be together- it was still fluffy.Nice job!

Author's Response: why thank you! :-)...i believe ive read some of ur poems before but since my computer is being stupid these days i didnt bother to review..if i can remember correctly, hehe, maybe i did leave one... anywho, this one is probably my favorite out of all of them, i think the deepest and the nicest, overall...thanks! :-)



Haunt my dreams no more by lady magician

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 27 Reviews
Summary: Harry Potter was once again having a sleepless night. He dreamt about her again. She would always be there, in his dreams haunting him so he couldn’t sleep. He decided to try and write down how he felt. And he finally realizes what he'll do to make sure she’ll haunt his dreams no more. POST HBP and of course he's writing about Ginny.
Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: Harry's Dreams

I really liked this. It was so romantic. I don't know what else to say. Excellent job!

Author's Response: thanks!! i think the descriptions are what make it romantic, and im happy they did...when i was writing this i tried to see ginny\'s attractiveness from a boy\'s (i.e. Harry\'s) POV and im glad to see it worked nicely :-)



Uncle Fred Calls Him Dick by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 1511 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: 2008 QSQ Awards Runner-up for Best Post-Hogwarts

Harry defeated Voldemort. Harry married Ginny. Harry and Ginny had five children. Harry disappeared. My name is Lily Potter, and this is the story of what happened when my father returned after six years missing to find my mother about to re-marry. This is the story of myself, my crazy family, and most of all, this is the story of my parents and the man who tried to come between them. (pre-Deathly Hallows)

*Completed*

"Oh, I can so die happy now!" -Sirius Potter
Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 03/15/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Grandpa's Brilliant Idea

I really love this story. It is like one of the best fanfictions I've read in a long time. The wait is always worth it. I am always so happy when you update. Please do so soon! ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m really going to try and update soon for the long wait on this chapter. My sister (who reads my fics!) had surgery and I puttered around taking care of her instead of writing, but now that she\'s better . . . soon!



Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 03/29/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Mum Forgot To Remember

This story is amazing. I can't wait until the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!



A Past Reclaimed by nuw255

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 1455 Reviews
Summary: Sequel to A Stolen Past. Please read that story first, as this one really won’t make sense if you don’t.

Harry Potter has rejoined the Wizarding world after a year-long absence, but still has no memory of his time at Hogwarts. Will he ever get his memory back? Will he be able to pass his classes without it? And most importantly, will he ever be able to defeat Lord Voldemort? Read on as the last of the mysteries introduced in A Stolen Past are finally revealed.

This is a story of friendship and mystery, with a healthy dose of H/G thrown in for good measure.
Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 03/15/07 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Battle at the Ministry

aw, such a sad ending to the chapter. i would have never predicted that something like that would happen to harry in this story. please update soon.

Author's Response: Yeah, it\'s quite sad. And it was meant to be a surprise, so I\'m glad it was.



Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 03/17/07 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Beyond the Veil

YEY! HE LIVES! this was such an amazing story. I really like how it ended. great job ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you!



Mourning by clabbert2101

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 8 Reviews
Summary: A short poem from Harry's point of view concerning his feeling about Sirius's death.
Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 05/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Mourning

Wow, very very short, but still good. And the whole thing rhymes- which is cool.

My favorite part is the end:

Death.
Has left its stain.


Good job. ^_^

Author's Response: thanks.



Voldemort is Coming to Town by Sly Severus

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 11 Reviews
Summary: What should a small wizarding community do when they know that Voldemort is coming to town?



This is an entry for the Winter Tales Contest, A Christmas Carol: Parody, by Sly Severus of Slytherin.


Reviewer: Lalalalatina Signed
Date: 05/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ummmm... wow. This was great. ^^

I find it so interesting when people change the words of well-known rhymes or songs and make it something totally different. This was quite funny, especially since it was originally Santa's song, cuz Santa and Voldy are completely opposite. My fave stanza:

He’ll kill you when you’re sleeping,
He’ll kill you when you’re awake,
He knows if you’ve been bad or good,
So be bad for Merlin’s sake.


It just flows perfectly, like the song.

Gonna find out his pure and filth


If I were you, I would've followed what the song had "who's naughty and nice", but used it to say something like who is a pureblood and a mudblood/muggle.

Voldemort is coming to town.

And curses that cause pain,


This is just another litle thing I must critique on. The way the second line is phrased makes it seemed as if you finished with an incomplete thought the stanza before that one. I would just rephrase the second line so that it is its own complete thought, not part of a phrase. I'm probably just being confusing. Anyways, this poes was awesome, completely different from your other works that I have read. Keep on writing. ^_^


Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I\'m glad you liked it. I\'ll think about the changes you suggested. Thanks so much for the cirtique.