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My World by guiding ray of sunlight
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: You were my world, and everything in it. You were all I had that kept me alive and sane.

But now you're gone...and they're saying it's for good.

What am I supposed to do?

An Advanced Rhetoric and Style assignment for Professor Fresca.

Nominated in the QSQ awards for best D/A story.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1855 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
07/27/08 Updated: 07/28/08

Reviewer: Colores Signed
Date: 08/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: My World

Wow, Sunray. This oneshot was very beautifully written. The rhetoric is haunting and really pulls out intense emotions. Awesome work; you should be very proud.

Author's Response: Thanks hun! Fresca :D I'm glad you liked how I wrote it. Now can you see why the messed up version I posted earlier in class was a total train wreck when compared to what it was supposed to be?


A Certain Slant of Light by Hatusu
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 61]

Summary: Past Featured Story

At age fifteen, Regulus Black became sole heir to the largest fortune in Wizarding London. At sixteen, his abnormal intelligence won him entry into the most notorious cult of Dark wizards on earth. At seventeen he made a mistake – one that he would never be able to take back – and his entire world came crashing down.

Enter London, 1979. The story of a boy who managed to defy Voldemort at the height of his regime. But what price did he have to pay?

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Mental Disorders, Non-Consensual Sex, Strong Profanity, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 65364 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
01/11/09 Updated: 11/15/09

Reviewer: Colores Signed
Date: 01/17/09 Title: Chapter 1: Colour and Sound

Doesn't suck. :P

LOL though seriously. When did I say that? Must have been one of those weird comments at 4 AM, eh?

Congratulations on a wonderful first chapter. You already know that I love it and I cannot wait to see what all your other fans have to say!

Author's Response: LOL I'm not sure if it was 4AM, but I said something like, "Uhm the last sentence thingy, does that suck or no?" and you answered "Doesn't suck." Which was pretty hilarious, actually, and typical(coming from you, it was a compliment). :D You should be proud, Fresca; you put a lot of work into this story and now it is here for everyone to read. Thanks to you, they won't be pointing out any mistakes! If they do we can just kill them. :D


Her War by thechocolatefrog
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Past Featured Story

A set of haiku telling of Molly Weasley's own war against Voldemort.

**Implied character death

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 176 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
06/15/09 Updated: 06/15/09

Reviewer: Colores Signed
Date: 06/15/09 Title: Chapter 1: Her War

The second to last haiku was my favorite. Nice job!


Changing Faces by coolh5000
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: Hermione knows Draco Malfoy - he is arrogant, mean and has been nothing but hurtful towards her ever since the first time they met. Called to testify at his trial, however, she sees something other than hatred in the face of her old nemesis and begins to wonder if there is something she has been missing all along.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1087 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
06/10/10 Updated: 06/10/10

Reviewer: Colores Signed
Date: 06/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My muse does great work, doesn't she? :P

Author's Response: She really does. One afternoon with her and suddenly I'm writing like you!


What We Lost in the War by solemnlyswear_x
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: Susan Bones reflects on coming home.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1070 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
09/19/10 Updated: 09/19/10

Reviewer: Colores Signed
Date: 09/20/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well hello there, dear Melissa!

I love the narrative style of this story - the use of the parentheses was a really nice touch, a sort of back story that filled the reader in on the post-Hogwarts that you envision. I like that you chose to talk about minor characters, ones that Susan would be more likely to mention, and that the trio wasn't mentioned at all.

I also really liked the description of Susan as a little girl, entering Hogwarts. For some reason, I'm rather drawn to white ribbons. (:

i have to go to class now so I'll stop this review here...*brains*

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