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My World by guiding ray of sunlight

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 5 Reviews
Summary: You were my world, and everything in it. You were all I had that kept me alive and sane.

But now you're gone...and they're saying it's for good.

What am I supposed to do?


An Advanced Rhetoric and Style assignment for Professor Fresca.

Nominated in the QSQ awards for best D/A story.
Reviewer: Colores Signed
Date: 08/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: My World

Wow, Sunray. This oneshot was very beautifully written. The rhetoric is haunting and really pulls out intense emotions. Awesome work; you should be very proud.

Author's Response: Thanks hun!...um...Prof Fresca :D I'm glad you liked how I wrote it. Now can you see why the messed up version I posted earlier in class was a total train wreck when compared to what it was supposed to be?



A Certain Slant of Light by Hatusu

Rated: Professors • 61 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary:

At age fifteen, Regulus Black became sole heir to the largest fortune in Wizarding London. At sixteen, his abnormal intelligence won him entry into the most notorious cult of Dark wizards on earth. At seventeen he made a mistake – one that he would never be able to take back – and his entire world came crashing down.

Enter London, 1979. The story of a boy who managed to defy Voldemort at the height of his regime. But what price did he have to pay?

Reviewer: Colores Signed
Date: 01/17/09 Title: Chapter 1: Colour and Sound

Doesn't suck. :P

LOL though seriously. When did I say that? Must have been one of those weird comments at 4 AM, eh?

Congratulations on a wonderful first chapter. You already know that I love it and I cannot wait to see what all your other fans have to say!

Author's Response: LOL I'm not sure if it was 4AM, but I said something like, "Uhm the last sentence thingy, does that suck or no?" and you answered "Doesn't suck." Which was pretty hilarious, actually, and typical(coming from you, it was a compliment). :D You should be proud, Fresca; you put a lot of work into this story and now it is here for everyone to read. Thanks to you, they won't be pointing out any mistakes! If they do we can just kill them. :D



Her War by thechocolatefrog

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 7 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary:

A set of haiku telling of Molly Weasley's own war against Voldemort.

**Implied character death


Reviewer: Colores Signed
Date: 06/15/09 Title: Chapter 1: Her War

The second to last haiku was my favorite. Nice job!



Changing Faces by coolh5000

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 12 Reviews
Summary: Hermione knows Draco Malfoy - he is arrogant, mean and has been nothing but hurtful towards her ever since the first time they met. Called to testify at his trial, however, she sees something other than hatred in the face of her old nemesis and begins to wonder if there is something she has been missing all along.
Reviewer: Colores Signed
Date: 06/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My muse does great work, doesn't she? :P

Author's Response: She really does. One afternoon with her and suddenly I'm writing like you!



What We Lost in the War by solemnlyswear_x

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 10 Reviews
Summary: Susan Bones reflects on coming home.
Reviewer: Colores Signed
Date: 09/20/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well hello there, dear Melissa!

I love the narrative style of this story - the use of the parentheses was a really nice touch, a sort of back story that filled the reader in on the post-Hogwarts that you envision. I like that you chose to talk about minor characters, ones that Susan would be more likely to mention, and that the trio wasn't mentioned at all.

I also really liked the description of Susan as a little girl, entering Hogwarts. For some reason, I'm rather drawn to white ribbons. (:

i have to go to class now so I'll stop this review here...*brains*