While I can honestly say I didn't cry, seeing as I've written many death scenes and read them, the story is great. I like how you put the lyrics in with the story, it lets the reader know when to switch over to Rhapsody to pause or unpause the song, it also somewhat incorporated what would happen next. Although I do think you might have done a little more description in-between, and made their deaths different. Yes, a person can die from to much alchohal in take, but maybe having some one use a hand gun or something might have varied between the cause of death? Anyways, great story. I might read some of the others.
~Chained