Born in May on the 17th day during the year of 1986, LOrenzo was always blessed with talent in singing, writing and performing. Sustaining himself with writing poetry, songs and sometimes short stories, fanfiction intrigued him shortly after reading the HP series. He now awaits the sixth book, singing, writing and trying to become famousbefore he dies! haha. oops, I don't think narrative voices are supposed to laugh!
Lo would also like to thank his friends that introduced him to the Potter Universe:
To Mrs. Mallory Giunchigliani Black (Ick! She married a dead man...) haha. She forced the first book into my backpack, and to you mal, I owe- uh- a lollipop! (Lollipop prize subject to availability. hey, a stick guys gotta eat!)
To Mrs. Sarah Jane Umbr-er, Wilkes, who puts the "wacko" in "Slytherin" (A word that doesn't contain any of it's leters! How does she do it?? ::amazed::) Proving to all how hillarious, yes hilarious Slash fics can be.
To Mrs. Melissa Martin Malfoy who gave me my first HP book (The 3rd!) I will never forget your Very Harry generosity! haha. Don't think Ameoba!
And to Mrs. Katie Barrett Snape- er, Wood. You gave me the first two books and sat by me during the 3rd movie which was an absolute Blast! Keeper of my car keys and friendship! (Sniff!)
Three of the best Witches a Wizard could ask for!
This is the dreamy narration voice signing out with one last word on this matter: LO and behold, I've got my family, my friends, and my family of friends- the world has it's magic! ~LO
BE SURE TO READ ALL MY FICS ON HERE! I HAVE CURRENTLY POSTED AND COMPLETED:
*SLEEPING HERMIONE (Adventure/mystery)
*REMEMBRANCE (Emmotional/sad/so great!)
*INTERVIEWS WITH RITA SKEETER (Q/A Comedy, with great reviews!)
*FRIENDS WITH THE ENEMY (long awaited sequel to "SH", a must read!)
FIC CURRENTLY BEING SUBMITTED CHAPTER BY CHAPTER:
*The Spinning Chandelier. (Third installement after "Friends...")
NEWLY COMPLETED FIC DUE LATER THIS MONTH:
THANK YOU KINDLY! ~LO
Hey! Well, I gave you my advice, and I can't wait till you update your fic. it really is a good one! ~LO
Hey! This is one of the best stories on this site! haha, i think slash fics are incredibly funny and real. Yours esspecially! You hvae no problem in making characters wait and dodge feelings (whereas others make things impossibly real)
I love how you've played "god" and showed us the thoughts of each character and how much one can think in only seconds time! Excellent fic! ~LO
Author's Response: I really doubt whether I could write hetro or not. I just don't know that many straight people. And they say "write what you know," right? Well, I know queers. Lots of them. lol. (Yes, I'm aware I'm a bit blunt.)
Hey! I think Slash fics are funny, and yours is very, uh- frilly! haha. Things seem very sweet throughout, which I still enjoy reading. nice touch with the ring. ~LO
You haven't gone too far into the plot, but you have gone deep enough to catch a readers eye and make us want to see what will happen next! can't wait to see where you go with this! ~LO
Hey! This story isn't bad at all! You've introduced the characters and have stayed true to their personalities, meanwhile, you've given the reader something to wonder about. (The dream) Though sometimes it is hard to read. You shouold work on describing things more and stretching out actions that characters do to make them seem more real. Overall, the first chapter is good and I can't wait to see where this story goes! ~LO
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. Ill work on it next chapter =)
Very good and actually somewhat beleivable. You are a crafty writer! Update soon. ~LO
haha. I'm sorry for laughing, but it really is a funny piece you've written!
Really though, I shall give you my true opinion: When you are writing, you make it almost too casual, almost like you're having a conversation with the reader, which is not what's bad, it's just that you explain things akwardly. When you make jokes, you don't have to clarify the joke again in "()" as we've gotten the joke or explanation.
So you've just got to work on detail and keeping a true narrators voice-
Still, I've never heard of an idea remotely like this one- it is very unique- just like you are a unique writter!
Don't stop writing, I'd like to see where this story (And you as a writer) goes! ~LO
Author's Response: thanks soo much for the supah long comment! i really appreciate the help, seeing as i have no idea what im doing here. :) thanks a lot!
This is my second review, lol, but your story deserves it! This chapter was good! It answered a lot of questions! I can't wait to read the next chapter! ~LO
Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing my story! :D Although thanks for at least reviewing my story... your the only one whos reviewing :'( but thanks for your review :)
HEY! It is so awesome to see a fic here from you! The chapter is amazing and exciting! I can't wait to see where the story goes! I have to say that you ahve come far as a writer and I've gotten to see a bit of that with all of the editing! Congrats and good luck with this, no doubt, successful story! Your pal, ~LO
Author's Response: :D i kno isn't it :D ive been trying to hard to get a fic on here, and i met a very nice mod and finally got one up :D thx for the review! :D
Author's Response: i forgot to mention... pudding :D