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The Wedding Ring by KASK
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 75]

Summary: Lily and James Potter were always happy and in love. In a way, they never had to try to make it work. But, going through a rough time, their relationship is pushed to its limits.



Written for the February One-Shot Challenge by Kask of Slytherin.


Winner of the February One-Shot Challenge.
Winner of the 2007 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Canon Romance.
Thank you everyone :)




Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4645 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/22/07 Updated: 02/23/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 02/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Wedding Ring

wow I like how you have brought them rogether through tragedy. Really well written.

Author's Response: Thank you!

 

I Wish You Knew by MagicalMe831
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 19]

Summary: "I wish you knew. I wish you knew everything that I keep inside. I wish I could tell you everything that has welled up inside of me. The things that are on my mind. You sit there as though there is nothing that bothers you; like you’re carefree. It’s rather annoying, actually."
A short fic told from Hermione's point of view.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 875 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/22/07 Updated: 03/01/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 03/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: I Wish You Knew

I really like the way you keep the identity of Ron a scret until the end, really good piece of writing. :)

Author's Response: I liked that about the story too... thanks for reviewing!

 

Let's Face the Music and Dance by Kerichi
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 26]

Summary:

When detention ruins his plan to take Ginny to Paris via the Room of Requirement, Draco brings Paris to Ginny, with the help of a house-elf named Slinky.



*A 'missing moment' story inspired by A Tale of Two Matchmakers.*





Categories: Draco/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1547 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/24/07 Updated: 02/24/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 06/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Let's Face the Music and Dance

loved it! simply spiffing

Author's Response: Love that word, spiffing! Very spiffy way to put it. Thank you!

 

Brotherly Business by Caliente
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: Twin-centric one-shot set during Book 5, after the duo left Hogwarts. Fred is being a twit. George is tired of it. They beat on each other. And a good time is had by all. Mentions of various other Weasleys, Hogwarts students and mild references to Fred/Angelina, George/Alicia and Angelina/Roger. R&R plz!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1888 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/25/07 Updated: 03/01/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Brotherly Business

I love the dinamics yiuve worked between these two! you have portrayed them perfectly i reckon, you really are a good writer! keep going :)

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I tried. This was definitely a harder story for me to write (humor\'s not really my thing) but I\'m pleased you liked it and the Weasley boys. :) Thanks again for the sweet reviews!

 

What Lies Within by j4fun
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 181]

Summary: This story is post HBP. The funeral service has ended and students are headed home aboard the Hogwarts Express. Most everyone is still stunned over the events of the last several days. Our trio is no exception. Harry would really prefer to close his eyes and just disappear for a bit. Unfortunately, he doesn't have that luxury. There is so much more for him to do, so much more for him to figure out. Time is running out and things have never seemed so near impossible. Harry has to find and destroy the remaining Horcruxes, and then face his greatest nemesis. Can he protect those he loves? Can he protect himself? Can he meet his ultimate destiny?

While we wait for the release of Deathly Hallows, I thought it would be fun to see how far my own imagination would take me. All of it, of course, has been inspired by Rowling's beloved magical world.

Note: No DH references are included. Chapters 1 - 25 were written, with 1 - 20 posted before the release of DH, and I delayed reading DH until the final chapters were written.

Enjoy.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 148676 Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/27/07 Updated: 08/31/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 09/01/07 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: New Beginnings

You will not believe how much i cried throughout that whole thing! i have just read the whole story and it was bloody brilliant!
you gave the characters their own style and independance, i especially loved ron's speach in the dursley's kitchen because he was so mature. and the final battle was really good.
your imagination is wicked, the extra lessons were amazing too! and none of the plot seemed really out of it either, the characters didnt change, for example snape didnt run up to harry and hug him and say, 'im your real godfather!', he stayed sinister the whole way through!
anyway im going to stop rambling now, and im hoping you have done a sequel including harry finding out what went wrong with lily and petunia besides hogwarts! loved it! mwah!

Author's Response: Thank you so, so very much. And no, you weren\'t rambling. :) I\'m glad you found this story so moving. I knew from the moment I wrote the first few chapters where and how it would end; but it was emotional for me seeing it unfold in my mind\'s eye and on paper. I\'ve loved writing it and sharing it on MNFF and every time I get a response like yours, every hour spent writing and editing it feels so well worth it. I haven\'t written any sequel, yet; but your suggestion definitely has potential. I\'ll keep it in mind. Thank you again.

 

A Simple 'Hello' by HermionePotter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: A forbidden romance, both families never being able to know about the other, happens between two teenagers, and the only time they have is stolen phone calls in the middle of the night. But is it all worth it?

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 1921 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/01/07 Updated: 03/02/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 03/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Midnight Calls

sounds good so far, but I really wanna know who the girl is.lol. you write well!

Author's Response: The girl is Lily!! Couldnt you tell from “Lils? You still there?” he asked in his near silent, velvet voice.\" Oh, the guy is Sirius, I didn\'t want to make it blatantly obvious, just a few major clues here and there. Im glad you like it! Im gonna try writing a few more chapters. Thanks for the review!!

 

The Muggle and the Horcrux by Buckbeak22
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 37]

Summary: Lauren has always been Hermione's best girlfriend, but she is a Muggle. She plays the cello. How can that help Harry, Ron and Hermione in their quest to find the Horcruxes? O/C plus R/Hr and H/G

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 32071 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
03/04/07 Updated: 11/29/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 11/29/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Visiting The Strangers

Eeeek! don't do this to us!!! At least have the courtesy to update soon, like- in the next 5 mins lol. --but seriously! please please please update soon, it's just too juicy to leave at such a cliffy!

Author's Response: OK: 5 mins - not possible. But I do have another chapter to go up, if the moderators approve! I am glad you like it so far. Buckbeak22

 
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/15/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: An Interesting Conversation

I know I havnt reviewed before and Im sorry about that, but I absolutely LOVE your story, and I check twice a day for it, so pleaaaasssseeeeee update soon!!!????!!!! Your an extremely talented writer and please keep going with your story.....btw, has Hermione told the others that she is a decendant of Rowena Ravenclaw yet?!

Author's Response: I\'ll try! Thank you for such a lovely review.

 
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/15/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: An Interesting Conversation

Sorry I just said Hermiones related to Rowena Ravenclaw *slaps self for being stupid* I meant Lauren as you prrobably guessed,lol. I can be rather dense sometimes, maybe what they say about blondes is true...hmmmm :D

Author's Response: But I\'m blonde! Don\'t put us down!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 06/20/07 Title: None

ooooh the suspense! please right more!!!! ace btw!

 
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 04/19/07 Title: None

PLEASE CARRY ON!!!! ace story line!

 

Summary: After his failed attempt on Dumbledore's life, Draco seeks refuge at the Order of the Phoenix. Sent back to Hogwarts with suspicious title of Head Boy, he is forced to share a dormitory with none other than Hermione Granger. But with war looming on the horizon and another danger even closer to home, their seventh year of Hogwarts is anything but ordinary.

A story of compelling intrigue, hidden motives, dangerous secrets, and obvious passion. Animagi, Quidditch, the Order of the Phoenix. Masquerades and riddles. Hate and love. Pleasure and pain. A blend of contradictions that, for two people, makes a truly unforgettable final year. Slow moving D/Hr with plenty of plot.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 110027 Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/19/07 Updated: 06/24/09


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 07/13/08 Title: Chapter 28: Hogsmeade

ORMAN!!! something needs to be done about that pr*k! i cant believe him, and he is so a death eater undercover, how are they missing that little but very obvious fact?! its so frustrating!!
i flipping love this story btw, its fab and i really cannot wait for the next chapter, you always manage to draw the emotions out of the reader so they feel what the characters do. well done on another great chapter =D

Author's Response: Lol, poor Orman. Everyone is so suspicious! He hasn\'t done anything *extremely* out of the ordinary, except for skeeze out Hermione. That doesn\'t automatically make him a bad guy (though you certainly don\'t have to like him for it...)\r\nI\'m so happy you like the story and I\'m incredibly relieved that the proper emotions are coming across. It\'s hard to get that right sometimes, when you\'re so concerned with what you\'re actually writing. :)\r\nThanks for the review!!!

 
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 03/28/08 Title: Chapter 22: Wrongly Played

loved it! that was fabulous, Ron needs sorting out badly! keep it coming!

Author's Response: Haha, that he does. Thanks so much for reviewing!!

 
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 11/29/07 Title: Chapter 17: Hospital Visits

Aaaah! poor draco, evil evil evil blaise! love this latest installment keep it up!

Author's Response: I know! He\'s such a meanie. Happy you like it; thanks for the review!

 

Summary:

Sequel to A Tale of Two Matchmakers

Seven years later....


Blaise fears Terry wants a divorce, Luna is hiding a secret from Wesley, and Draco is tired of idiots saying his son has pink hair! Ginny's solution? Call the curls reddish blond and invite their friends to the Malfoy mansion for Christmas.

 



Categories: Draco/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 8081 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/27/07 Updated: 03/27/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 06/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Reunion

write more please!!!!! i love this story line its wicked!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I want to write more, I\'ve just got other projects and a move down the coast taking up my time. :(

 

Holding on. by keryn617
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 26]

Summary: Twenty years after the Final Battle, four friends return to their old school.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1668 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/29/07 Updated: 04/05/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 04/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Holding on.

I cried so much at your story, its great, your an amazing writer!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

 

Up All Night by Nymphadora1229
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 43]

Summary: When Ron and Hermione have trouble sleeping they spend the whole night talking.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1435 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/03/07 Updated: 04/17/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 04/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Up All Night

its B-E-A-U-tiful such a romantic story ! fluff fluff fluff!!!!

 

Almost Me Again by nuw255
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 443]

Summary: Harry Potter disappears immediately after defeating Lord Voldemort, and the circumstances all point to him being dead. But when has Harry ever been known to just roll over and die? Join Harry on a journey of self-discovery to find the family he never knew he had.

Post-Hogwarts H/G

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 58359 Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Published:
04/07/07 Updated: 10/31/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/23/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Confirmation

ooooh pleassseeeee let it work!!!!

Author's Response: Read on to find out if it does. ;-)

 
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 06/01/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: The Memory-Restoring Potion

sort brian out!!!! and im glad harry has stopped working there and got his memory back-YAY!

Author's Response: Thanks! Brian\'s going to take some time.

 

The Worth of an Uncanny Love by BloodRayne
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 19]

Summary: Cho Chang is in an abusive relationship with a person she loves more than herself.







2nd Place in the Spring Challenges, *To Laugh or Cry* prompt, by BloodRayne of Gryffindor.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Non-Consensual Sex, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 3417 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/21/07 Updated: 04/27/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Really Worth it?

aaaaaaaawwwww its both sad and well i cant say happy, but theres something else...hope? its genius! perfect balance between his rough side and his charming sweet side, loved it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!

 
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