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Summary: Past Featured Story

Winner of the 2008 Quick Silver Quills Award for Best General Story.

The first book in the Alexandra Quick series.

The war against Voldemort never reached America, but all is not well there. When 11-year-old Alexandra Quick learns she is a witch, she is plunged into a world of prejudices, intrigue, and danger. Who wants Alexandra dead, and why?

This story is canon-compliant with the Harry Potter universe, but the characters and settings are all original. I've put a lot of work into envisioning a world as detailed as the original series; I hope you enjoy it.



Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 164441 Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/20/08 Updated: 07/09/08


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 06/10/08 Title: Chapter 19: The Christmas Blizzard

I simply adore this story! Ilove the speedy updates and Ive fallen in love with the characters...why on earth is life so cruel to Alex?!?!!?!
cant wait for the next installment, keep it up its a great story
ChloŽ =D x

Author's Response: If life were easy for her, her story wouldn't be as interesting. ;) Thank you for your review!

 
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 07/09/08 Title: Chapter 29: The Raven

awwwww, so sad that this part of the story has ended. i loved it though, i wander what she will find to do during the summer holidays, and when will her dad get in contact with her? hmmm.....
well, it's been 'bloody brilliant' to use ron's words and i cant wait to be (very very, tres and sehr soon) reading the next....errrrm grade(?)
well done anyhow!!
ChloŽ =D

 
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 06/24/08 Title: Chapter 26: Murder in the Woods

oh wow!
i think Alexandra will deffinately have a change of heart towards Miss Grimm especially after that heroic display! what good timing Grimm had.
and wow, that fidelius charm certainly explains a lot!
hmmm...makes me think he got the wrong bracelet if he was shot and not her. i hope miss grimm can survive the bullet, and i certainly hope Anna is ok.
im guessin we meet the govenor general soon?
and will Alex's father come looking for her soon because she knows her purpose now and needs to make sure she keeps the secret???
also what information does Alex have about the Thorn circle? only what she has read in books, so she must find something else out that is the 'key' to the fidelius charm???
oh its all so confusing, but beautifully written! your action scenes are brilliant!
ChloŽ x

 

Summary:

His fears? Flying...his own wand...fitting in...sticking out! His best friends? A passionate fire-breathing cousin, and a cool, aloof Death Eater's son. His destiny? Anything but ordinary!

Join Albus as he experiances his first year at Hogwarts and begins the journey out from under his father's collosal shadow, if he can survive it of course!

Meet the new Tenacious Trio, Albus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, and Rose Weasley



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 61027 Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Published:
05/23/08 Updated: 09/08/09


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 07/25/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Something Happened on the Way to Normal

wow! deffinately sue proof! that and the previous chapters are amazing! i love it! it is a favourite too =D

Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it...please tell your friends my reader ship has gone way down here recently.

SLy 

 

Everything Happens for a Reason by MerrryD
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 31]

Summary:

Five hundred twenty-five thousand six hundred minutes

Every student plans on making their final year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry the most memorable one ever. Eight in particular want to make those minutes really count. Except, they each have a different idea of how to go about doing it.

James Potter would like to waltz into Lily Evans’s life and throw it completely off course. Julie McGuire didn’t exactly plan on rescuing Remus Lupin, but now that she has, why not just go with it? Marlene McKinnon should have know what she got herself into when she kissed Sirius Black the first time, but that boy has a way of knocking her senseless. Emmeline Vance had planned to just sit back and watch it all happen, until Roxanna Louchester, her ex-friend, barged in and turned everything upside down.

Suddenly they’ve gone from only wanting the most memorable year, to achieving it. It’s a year of love and lust. It’s a year of tears and fights. It’s a year of finding yourself. It’s a year of learning to lose. It’s a year that none of them are likely to forget.

How do you measure a year in the life?



Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 18589 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
06/27/08 Updated: 08/28/09


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 07/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Are You Ready? Hold that Focus--Steady

absolutely loved it, i like the fast pace it moves at and the characters, although the last bit confused me a bit and im also very intrigued as to why Roxie is now an enemy...what happened? and someone find Remus!
anyway, ace first chapter and i cant wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! -laughs evilly- You\'ll have to wait and see what happens, I\'m not saying anything. xo I\'m glad you like it so much. :D xo Mere

 

My Life in Scarlet by Malfoy_Star92
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Imagine if you had a good life: one with a family who loved you and great friends who would do anything for you, maybe even a boyfriend whom you really liked and maybe even loved and he returned your feelings. But then one night all of that was ripped away. And now everyone who was dear to you hates you because you have been forced to become someone you would never would have chosen to be. What if there was no escape, not even death? This is the story of my life, for I learned so long ago that there is no such thing as "Happily Ever After."

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death

Word count: 1828 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
06/27/08 Updated: 07/05/08


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 07/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Hell on Earth

wow! i'm hooked, this is certainly a keeper and if my account would work, i would favourite it, but i cant unfortunately, so i will simply have to keep my eyes peeled for it!
i love the way that you didnt confirm who she was straight away even if you did give clues (who else would have the power to kill death eaters at will?) i also love how you gave the anonymous book, showing that someone has faith in her and knows her obvious struggle.
im also very intrigued....her love of Harry Potter...hmmm, is that because he brought the downfall of her captor and father? or is it actual love as in i-want-to-marry-you love???
well, i loved it and i cant wait for the next speedy (hint hint) chapter ;)

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I was a little worried about how people would react so your review means so much to me. I so have chapter two done so I\'ll submit it soon. Your question about Harry will be answered soon. But how soon? That is the question. ;) Thanks Again.

 

The Five Senses by Hermione_Rocks
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: Sirius Black explores his five senses. Sirius/Lily. Oneshot.

Written for Slytherin House, for the Salazar's Secret Swap. This is for mrsmcclnt. Hope you enjoy this, Marsha.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3045 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/29/08 Updated: 06/29/08


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 06/29/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Five Senses

oh wow. it was beautiful, and i love how you didnt go OOC or AU with it, twas brill! i want to see more haha, sirius and lily...*sighs*

Author's Response: Thank you! I had no idea what to write at first, I\'d never tried my hand at Sirius/Lily before . . . thankfully, inspiration struck eventually. :)

 

At The Ceili by Starmaiden
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Five years after the War's end, Leslie, Hermione, and Ginny attend a Victory Ball. It's a romantic setting and love is most definitely in the air.

Categories: Various Pairings Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1924 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/08/08 Updated: 07/10/08


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 07/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: At The Ceili

oh wow i loved it haha, ive actually been listening to that song practically all day haha. fab!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 

Hearthlinks by Grace has Victory
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 31]

Summary:

Growing up with two stepfamilies, Sally-Anne Perks has all the usual family problems in triplicate. Now her stepmother wants to prevent her attending the Yule Ball. Will this ruin Sally-Anne’s chances of winning her prince? And who has stolen her magic shoe?

This is a response to a challenge to retell a traditional fairy tale with a Hogwarts setting. You might consider that I put a twist in the ending… or you might not.



Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 48449 Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/28/08 Updated: 09/05/08


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 07/29/08 Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon a Time

oh god, it was brilliantly horrible. I know how she feels aswell, keep it up its great!
ps loved the yellow hair accessories

Author's Response: Dear Cocomaloco, I think I had better caution you that the nasty family dynamics will only become worse. If this is a touchy issue for you, you will need the courage of Godric Gryffindor to keep reading. Take a yellow cyber-ribbon from me! Love, GhV

 
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: All the Gold in Gringotts

OMG, you do realise Im crying, I mean, have you been spying on my family or something?!?! God i HATE step-mothers and step-sisters and dads. they cheat and steal and lie through their teeth. you have written an extroadinarilly realistic story and its a favourite, keep it up because i just know Sally-Anne is going to get back at her dad's family and realise that her dad has changed and is just as bad as her step-mum. the sooner the better.
keep it up!

Author's Response: Dear Cocomaloco, I am so sorry to hear that Sally-Anne is a girl like you. I haven't been spying on your family, but I have been spying on human nature. However, I hoped that my story had a fairy-tale awfulness that would never quite be rivalled in real life. I don't necessarily hate stepmothers, but I definitely hate cheating, stealing, lying and adultery. I have a son of your age and I would be so furious if someone like Cressida entered his life. Anyway, I have now posted a new chapter, and it includes a few happier events. Thanks for all your support for my writing, GhV

 

No Assistance Required by Subversa
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: In the years since the fall of Voldemort, Severus Snape has lived outside of Britain. Then one idyllic day at the Burrow, surrounded by a plethora of Weasleys, spouses, and off-spring, Hermione Granger comes face to face again with her former teacher. Why is he even there, and why the hell is he watching her?

Categories: Hermione/Snape Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Epilogue? What Epilogue?

Word count: 6381 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/18/09 Updated: 08/18/09


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 08/18/09 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

I absolutely loved that - and I really really want to read the next bit - and the bit after that....and the bit after that!
In other words....please continue!!!

 
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