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Sadie Murray and the Enigma Scroll by star_sailor

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Sadie Murray is your typical American girl, stuck in the middle of her family. Sadie has an older sister who is popular, talented at everything she does, and lavishes in the respect she garners. Sadie's younger sister is pretty, adorable, cute, and uses these characteristics to cover up the fact that she's a nasty little brat. But Sadie's luck just might change when she receives a letter saying she has been accepted to The Salem Institute of Magical Learning.
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 07/13/08 Title: Chapter 8: Of Houses and Horses

oooooooooh, is sadie going to turn out to be a Seer or something? loved this chapter and i simply adore the ring idea, brilliant blue and white with horses, very pretty image =D
well done and cant wait for the next one!

Author's Response: She certainly has some imaginative dreams, that's to be sure. Thanks for reading!

The Price by Calm Envy

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Ginny Weasley has a secret.
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 11/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ooooooooooh *shivers* that was gurrrd! loving the twist at the end there!
one thing though- his pjs? in the middle of school-plus and more importantly...are his pjs sexy???

Author's Response: It was much later that night. And probably. I didn\'t think about it.

Once There Was A Darkness: Year Two by C_A_Campbell

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Winner of the 2008 QSQ for the Best Female Original Character. Shiloh Sander’s second year begins peacefully, but it is a peace that is easily shattered when words of blood appear on Hogwarts’ ancient walls. With rumours of the Heir of Slytherin floating through the halls, battlelines are drawn in the Slytherin common room, between those who will support the Heir and those who will not. Soon Shiloh must decide where she stands. But the choice is only the beginning. In the middle of it all, Severus Snape continues his diligent search to find the daughter he lost, never knowing that this is the year it will come to an end. One girl’s choice. One man’s deepest wish. One year that will change both their lives…forever.

Sequel to Once There Was A Darkness: Year One. Warnings of Abuse and Mental Disorders are for brief mentions of child abuse and insanity.

Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 12/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: A Story Never Told

wow...i mean wow! i cried. you are amazing at writing and superb at writing battle scenes. please update soon because that was ace!

Author's Response: Omg, things so much. You cried? I don\'t quite understand why, but maybe I do. I mean, during the end of the battle scene I was choking up and trying to tell myself \"I will NOT cry for Mordecai. He is scum!\" But I think it was more because of what that night meant for people like Mrs. Zell and Shiloh. Thanks so much for saying I was good at writing battle scenes. To be honest they are my favorite thing to write. They are just so fun! Anyways, thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Next chapter should be coming fairly soon!

Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 04/19/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: P.S. My Name Is Shadow

oooooh loving this chapter! i really hope George, and of course Fred, use their mischevious ways to discover who Shadow really is!...and soon too :P

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it so well, but you might have to wait awhile for that particular discovery.

Calliope and Thalia and Their Inspiration by lucilla_pauie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Callie and Lia, a Gryffindor and a Slytherin. A lady and a tomboy. Two opposite souls. Two sisters. Separated at birth by circumstances they are determined to discover... and undo. Yes, after being reunited, the siblings plan to reunite their parents as well. Let’s see them accomplish House Unity, too!

“It’s our rule not to dredge up past things, remember?”

This rule is about to be broken.

~Inspired by a worldwide beloved film.

Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 11/27/07 Title: Chapter 3: Mum

Well Lucius and Narcissa have certainly changed! I was really surprised, but I like it, it's as if the French air has changed them completely so slightly OoC but you can see how it could have happened. I do love the amount of power Callie has over her family.
And yes it's good to change it other wise we should all just watch the film and be done with it!

Author's Response: I hope I haven\'t changed them much, Chloe! Just a bit. ^_^ Yes, I love Callie\'s sway, too! Thank you very much for reading my stories and reviewing them, hon!

When You're Gone by Hermione_Rocks

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: All may be well for those in league with Harry Potter, but this is certainly not the case for those who supported Lord Voldemort. Rodolphus Lestrange flees from Hogwarts shortly after his lord's demise in the battle . . . but he can't ever flee her, no matter how far gone she might physically be.

Character Death warning is for a death that happened in canon, and the Mental Disorders warning is just to be safe.
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 11/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: When You're Gone

that was a really good story, I mean I actually empathised with old rudy, and thought it was sad Bella had gonew, you are a very persuasive writer.
I love the way you made her sound normal, and almost sweet before her time in azkaban.
loved it!

Author's Response: Well, Bella can\'t always have been completely insane, there must have been at least traces of a normal human. Thank you for your kind review!

A Shower of Stardust... by lucilla_pauie

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The Christmas after the Battle of Hogwarts is a battle in itself. The blackness of grief, the sound of tears and the taint of guilt and sorrow is a stark and ugly contrast to the backdrop of snow, carols, love and joy.

But one cannot grieve and live at the same time. And one realises it doesn’t really take much to go back to living after grieving: love thaws all sharp icicles the way spring has never yet broken its promise of driving away winter.

~LucillaJoanna of Hufflepuff believes Seasons Change and avows it with this entry to the Winter Tales Challenges.

~Dedicated to Wulfric Brian Dumbledore, who intimately knows grief and will successfully befriend it, too.

Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 11/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: ...on Andromeda's lap.

aww that was really sweet, I love the way you get a hold on her grief so well, the way you want to just sob randomly because of little things that remind you of what you've lost, bravo indeed!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you think so, Chloe. Thank you! ^_^

Send Not to Know - A Christmas Story by Subversa

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Non-compliant with both HBP and DH. An annoying event causes Hermione to choose to spend the Christmas break in seventh year away from her best friends, but Dumbledore feels she needs someone to watch over her. How will Hermione react to the appearance of the Potions master on her doorstep -- and how will they interact when cooped up alone together for days on end2006 SS/HG Winter Exchange on Live Journal, for the prompt: A weekend alone for Hermione in the Granger?s residence. Suddenly the Potions master turns up on her door step. For whom the bell rings, it rings for you.
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 12/19/07 Title: Chapter 8: Part 2, Chapter 2: All I Want for Christmas Is Ö

oh wow! i mean...bloody hell. that was so moving, i loved the begining when he was in complete denial, and the playful banter between them and finally their love making, it was a superb chapter and i cant wait for your next update!
i think everyone wants snape for christmas, espesh after your story *purrrrs*

Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 12/14/07 Title: Chapter 5: Part 1, Chapter 5: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas

awwwww, I simply love your story so far, and what's more, Im finally excited about christmas thanks to your story! This last chapter, I had the fleeting reminder of Beauty and the Beast, just thought I'd tell you. Anyway, great story and thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 12/23/07 Title: Chapter 9: Part 2, Chapter 3: Merry Christmas, Darling

loved it loved it LOVED IT! very nice early christmas present and I personally would love to see a sequel of their married life with Rose and Fox of course! merry christmas!

The Women Who Won by Laurelyn

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The battle is fought, the war is won--but no victory ever comes cheap. Join Alice, Andromeda, Ginny, Narcissa, Luna, Molly, and Hermione as they discover the cost of war.

EDIT: I'm back! And I am SO SORRY I was gone so long. There is absolutely no excuse for making you wait almost three years for an update. *hides from angry reviewers* The next chapter is in the queue!
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Ginny

I loved both of the chapters, but definitely this one the best, and I can't wait for the rest!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you like this chapter. I was afraid people wouldn\'t, as it is so different from the first, all you reviewers have allayed my fears. Thank you very much, and hopefully I\'ll have the rest ready to put up by the time the queue opens!

When Worlds Collide by jenny b

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story

Rose was a Weasley. She never gave Scorpius Malfoy a second glance. They were sworn enemies, even though they’d barely even spoken to each other. But sometimes all it takes for love to blossom is a Potions lesson, a few snide remarks and a dropped book.

Two people. Two entirely different worlds that are suddenly intertwined.

Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 07/14/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: Quidditch Fever

i loved it! just read the whole thing up until now - only one word for you.... UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE i really can't wait for the rest of the story :D well written :)

Author's Response: You read the whole thing? Wow. :D I'm so pleased you're enjoying it, and I'll try to update as soon as possible!

"I Want To Go Home." by coolh5000

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: “But I want to go home,” whispered the girl. “I don’t want to fight anymore”
DH p558

Not everyone who fought in the Battle of Hogwarts wanted to be there, and not everyone survived. This is the story of one of those people.
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 06/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: "I Want To Go Home."

i was sobbing by the end of that - bravo!

Author's Response: thanks for the review - I\'m glad you like it, though I\'m sorry I made you cry!

Daughter of the Dark Side by Lyra Lestrange

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story

Lindsey Tonks appears to be a normal, almost invisible Hogwarts student, but underneath her is someone far from normal. What the world doesn't know is that Lindsey is the daughter of two well-known imprisoned Death Eaters, and has an identity she must hide from the world. Underneath Lindsey is a girl named Lyra Lestrange, a girl who is meant to be a secret forever. But will it last forever?

*Begins in GoF and follows the series through DH.

**Will appeal to fans of the Black family! Prominent characters are Bellatrix, Tonks, Andromeda, Sirius, and (to an extent) Narcissa.

Part Four Synopsis:

It's the summer after Albus Dumbledore's death, and the whole world is falling to Voldemort and the Death Eaters. Broken-hearted Lyra, unable to return to Hogwarts, must go into hiding with her family. It doesn't last long, and eventually Lyra is faced with a choice: join or die. Lyra's decision comes with many surprises, including a new ally who follows her to the final battle of good versus evil. While Lyra's path may seem clear, she finds herself torn between two sides for the final time, and in the end, despite tragedy and loss, Lyra accomplishes the impossible...which defies all of the agreements she and her family ever made.

Three years later, the fic has been completely finished! Enjoy reading it without having to wait for new chapters. Thanks to those who patiently waited and faithfully reviewed!

Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 07/17/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5- The Auror and the Curses

Bloody Hell!!! so she inherited more than looks from her mother then. perhaps she subconsciously retained memories from when she was young about how evil her parents were?
great chapter...yet so short in length :(
cant wait for an update! =D

Author's Response: Yes, she definitely inherited more than looks! You'll find out later whether or not she acts on that. I've submitted chapter 6, so the update shouldn't take too long. Thanks for reviewing!

Only the Faithless by Soap

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "Those who are faithless know the pleasures of love; it is the faithful who know love's tragedies." -Oscar Wilde

Lily didn't always love James. There was a man she loved before James, a man she loved during. See the desperate journey of Lily Evans' heart from the beginning of her Seventh year, when the person she least expected is named Head Boy.
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Head Over Heels

MORE more more!!! I need more, a very promising START (notice start lol). I love the tone that has been set, and I'd love to see what Remus thinks about Lily!
PS I think it's safe to say I want you to carry on this story!

Shining Through Blackness by luinrina

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Isla was born into a well-known and respected family: the Blacks. She grew up with their traditions and was proud to be who she was – until she met someone who showed her that what she knew was not the only world.

Follow a young witch through her teenage years and discover how a traditional one will change and rebel against what she believed was the only truth.

~ * ~

Due to plot development in chapters nine and ten I've changed the warning from "None" to "Sexual Situations" for the rest of the story. In some chapters there are still punishments which do not qualify as “Abuse”; those are meant as reprimands for bad behaviour, a common method in the middle of the nineteenth century. If you can’t stand children being smacked by parents or others as well as any sexual situation occuring, do not read that story. You have been warned…

Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 06/18/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight - Seeing Beyond

ooooh *shivers* theres is something wonderful yet sinister about Savaric. I simply adore this story! keep up the good work :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Chapter nine is already with my beta, and I expect it returned any day now. Watch out for it.

Quiescence by Soap

Rated: Professors •
Summary: A person from Remus's past returns to his life, someone with whom he has a very personal history. How will she affect his relationship with Tonks? Who will he choose? And what will happen that turns everyone's lives upside down?
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 07/15/08 Title: Chapter 7: Surprise

AAAAAAAAAAAh!!!! what was that?!?!?!...was so utterly engrossed...author so utterly cruel!....gah!!! who was it????
*is speechless*...hooked on suspense....bluergh!

phew, well, i loved (and absolutely hated) how Remus rejected her, he did it so cruelly, getting her hopes up by saying how happy he was with her and then dashing them when he said 'loved' not love, cruel cruel man!. i think we've all been rejected badly at one point or another and its just the pits. how will she apologise to Tonks? will Tonks still be as bubbly with her afterwards or bitter? hmmm.... the plot thickens...

well, as you can probably tell, i love this story, im always intrigued about Remus' Hogwarts girlfriends as we dont hear much about them in the fanfic world. annnnnnnyways, well done you evil suspensful author and i obviously cant wait for the next chapter =D

Author's Response: haha I am cruel, aren't I? I'm glad you liked the chapter. I tried to pull in that feeling that most everything has experienced at some point... the rejection. It's rough, isn't it? Poor Kate. We'll see how this goes, wont we? Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: Illegal Items

Im liking the new character! shy but confident in her own surroundings, should be interesting, and i also can't wait until she meets Remus, gotta know the history there!

Author's Response: I\'m still working on the nuances of Kate\'s character. I want her to stay shy, but not irritatingly so! Your description is exactly what I was going for. Thanks for the great review!

Alexandra Quick and the Thorn Circle by Inverarity

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story

Winner of the 2008 Quick Silver Quills Award for Best General Story.

The first book in the Alexandra Quick series.

The war against Voldemort never reached America, but all is not well there. When 11-year-old Alexandra Quick learns she is a witch, she is plunged into a world of prejudices, intrigue, and danger. Who wants Alexandra dead, and why?

This story is canon-compliant with the Harry Potter universe, but the characters and settings are all original. I've put a lot of work into envisioning a world as detailed as the original series; I hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 06/24/08 Title: Chapter 25: The Registrar's Office

OH MY GOD!!!!!!! oh wow.
i cant imagine how disapointed everyone will be with Alex (as its far worse than anger) and poor poor Anna! wow I almost cried!!!
and you, are tres tres tres and sehr evil to leave us with that cliffhanger! please update soon!
oh my gosh, and i cant believe it wasn't thiel but journey instead!!!
i must say you have written this extremely well as i didn't suspect a thing about journey, i just believed everything that alexandra did, and that of course is the mark of a fantastic writer.
oh and another surprise! she is the heir of Thorn!!!
wow, wow and wowzee wow wow haha. really cant wait for the next intense chapter....and the one after that...and the next one, and the next haha.
keep up the good writing, your avid reader, ChloŽ xxx

Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 06/10/08 Title: Chapter 19: The Christmas Blizzard

I simply adore this story! Ilove the speedy updates and Ive fallen in love with the characters...why on earth is life so cruel to Alex?!?!!?!
cant wait for the next installment, keep it up its a great story
ChloŽ =D x

Author's Response: If life were easy for her, her story wouldn't be as interesting. ;) Thank you for your review!