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Brothers by megan_lupin
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: “He would never see James smile again. Sirius knew he would never again hear the voice of his best friend – his brother. Brothers look out for each other. They would never joke about anything again. They would never again have a “little too much” to drink and then have to try and explain it to Lily afterwards. Never again would he have his brother to remember the “good old days” when they both grew too old to do anything. Never again would the Marauders be together . . .”

Sirius had the perfect plan to protect James. But what happens when a flawless idea isn’t so flawless?

Written by megan_lupin of Gryffindor House, this is the final assignment for Professor Talon's DADA: Introduction to Dark/Angst class.

Validator's Pick of the Week (26 May 2007) on HPFF!

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 4459 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/22/07 Updated: 04/25/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 04/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Brothers

wow such passion, had i not been giddy from hyperness(lol) i would be crying now, it certainly sobered me up


Author's Response: Oh, thanks cocomaloco. I\'m happy to hear you enjoyed the story, since \'Brothers\' is one of my personal favourites.

~Megan

 

Sweat and Blood by FullofLife
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: An insight into the life of a Hogwarts artist, and the hardwork she puts into each and every one of her paintings and portraits.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 2114 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/01/07 Updated: 05/05/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Sweat and Blood

wow, thats a very gothic take on the school artist, its an interesting concept that i had never considered, who the artist is. I like the way you portray her as invisible and her form of revenge, your a talented writer, its a good fic!

Author's Response: Thanks!

 

Summary: There have been a few alterations to the plot summary as I've been writing.
So, this is the basics of the new one:

Meredith Bradbury, a previously home-studied witch with a mysterious and tragic past, arrives at Hogwarts during theTrio's seventh and final year.

Things take turns for the worst, the best, the hopeless, and, of course, the unexpected.

Full of fluff, but a bit dark at times. --- Chapter 7 in process!!!!!!!!!!!! REVIEW and you will forever make me happy =)

Categories: Harry/Other Character Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Sexual Situations

Word count: 14858 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
05/02/07 Updated: 08/02/12


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 04/16/08 Title: Chapter 5: Getting Acquainted

loved this chapter, i can feel something happening with Harry and Meredith, can't wait to see her new house and how she settles in!

Author's Response: Um so I am really embarrassed that it has taken almost two years to reply to this...i don't even know how that is possible. wow. so sorry. thank you for your review, and as I have just re-discovered my fanfic and have new inspiration, I hope to be back on pace now!!

 

Summary: The Marauders are in third year Muggle Studies, with their latest class project sneaking up on them: ballroom. "Who cares?" they think, "Hardly any Muggles even dance; they don't even like it that much. Why should we have to deal with it?" Professor Richardt has other ideas.

I recently read back through this and cringed at how poorly written it was. I'm going to finish the sequel, and then this story is getting completely revamped. Thanks to all who put up with the poor writing and complimented it!

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 17676 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/03/07 Updated: 07/05/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/31/07 Title: Chapter 4: A Sickening Discovery

that really showed the bond of friendship between the maurauders, you captured it perfectly, its a great story keep going!

Author's Response: Thanks! That\'s what I was trying to do. I\'m sure everyone was surprised when James didn\'t care that Lily was mad at him. The next chapter is finished, but I\'m having trouble with the mouse so it may be a little bit. Yes, I did navigate the internet without a mouse. It takes a while. Anyway, thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/25/07 Title: Chapter 3: The First Date (sort of)

grrrrr im well aggitated now, let them kiss!!!!! i love your story btw and it is going on my favourites!

Author's Response: Don\'t worry, they\'ll kiss. Eventually. Next chapter has already been submitted.

 

Hesperides' Apple by Ogygiasylph
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 228]

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhen Ginny Weasley becomes Draco Malfoy's wife, he suspects neither her true identity nor her dangerous motives. But when all Hell breaks lose and their relationship takes unexpected turns, there is more at stake than preserving their marriage--namely, preserving their lives.

Categories: Draco/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 159368 Chapters: 31 Completed: No
Published:
05/06/07 Updated: 02/01/13


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 06/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: 4. Temptation

oooooooh hurry and update pleeeaaassseee!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love it!

 
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 06/30/07 Title: Chapter 5: 5. The willing bride

fantabulous as ever, i love the detail you put into describing the settings and appearance of Ginny. love the story full stop. please continue and upate sooner plz? :D

 

Summary: Minutes from becoming a parent for the first time, Harry Potter reflects on the beauty of his wife, Ginny, and how lucky he is to have one such as her. Nothing can shatter his perfect life with his beautiful wife...but a few surprises over the course of Ginny's labor will leave Harry reeling...

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1994 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/08/07 Updated: 05/15/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: For the Sake of the Children

wow! powerful stuff there, made me cry!

Author's Response: I\"m sorry you cried, but thank you for reviewing! :D

 

Like Catching the Snitch by SeaIsleWitch
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: After the infamous fifth year Quidditch match, an injured Draco waits impatiently in the hospital wing for Pansy.

(A missing scene fic for OotP, this one-shot was written for a Quidditch player challenge on Live Journal.)

Draco/Pansy PG/approximately 1500 words/complete

Categories: Draco/Other Character Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1465 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/08/07 Updated: 05/08/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Draco/Pansy

aaaaw thats really sweet, its nice to see them in kinder tones instead of being so..brass?lol. good job!

 

Remember by Caliente
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: A Prewett/Weasley family one-shot set during and after the first war. Before she was a Weasley, Molly was a Prewett with two brothers... brothers she loved... brothers she lost... brothers she remembers...

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics, Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1055 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/14/07 Updated: 05/26/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Remember

that is so moving, im touched. it is a really special story, one of those ones that pop up every now and then and touch you, so thanks very much for sharing that with us, your a very talented writer, i espesh love the line,
'Fudge might be an idiot but even a broken clock told the right time twice a day.'

Author's Response: Wow, I\'m really honored you think so. And that it touched you... cool. :) Thank you for the very flattering review. Really. Heh, a lot of people like that line! So true for Fudge... Thanks again!

 

Monarch Butterfly by BloodRayne
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Hermione mourns herself, along with those who fell...

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 843 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/15/07 Updated: 05/26/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Butterfly

thats horrible! not the writing the plot and the part at the end, our a powerful writer. I felt like i was there at the battle! loved it!

Author's Response: Wow, you scared me for a second! Glad you liked it!

 

We All Fall Down by _Ivy_
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: A dark poem about the Second War and the horrors within. This is a slightly darker version of 'Ring Around The Rosies'.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Violence

Word count: 157 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/15/07 Updated: 05/16/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Golly gosh thats dark! very morbib which is what you were obv going for,so its good, well written,
The black, cloaked men take out
Their wands and begin to shout.
Not sure about the last part of 1st line into second, but then thats just me being picky, and who am I to talk? lol, well done! :)

Author's Response: Heeheehee, I love morbid poetry. Nah, you aren\'t being picky, you\'re being uber-helpful. Thank you for reviewing! :D

 

To Make A Broken Heart by wendelin the wierd
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: Who said that some hearts can't be broken? The hardest hearts to break are the ones which have already died inside.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 270 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/18/07 Updated: 05/23/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

omg i love your poem its so emotionally powerful and strong, is it luna and draco? you are very talented!

 

Frozen by Sarakime
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 25]

Summary: "Cold without you...
Never let me go.
"
It started out as watching, simply watching her while she peacefully slept in the common room. But slowly, for him, it turned into so much more - something that shaped his life. Draco Malfoy never would have imagined that Hermione Granger would've had such an affect on him - never would've thought he needed her so much.

Originally written as a drabble for FFTF OWL Romance Class.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 867 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/21/07 Updated: 05/24/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow, thats really sweet! amazing imagery in there, your very talented! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

 

Battling Jitters by EmilyJayne
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 287]

Summary: They have battled evil, fate, destiny, time, even each other. Now Ron and Hermione take an emotional ride to battle something equally as treacherous….nerves.

The third installment in my “Battles” series continues here in a fluffier-than-is-normal-for-this-author tale depicting the Jitters Ron and Hermione experience when popping the big question and the events leading up to it.

If you have just found this story, be sure to read “Internal Battles” and “Battling Boundaries”. This story stands alone, but the other two will help complete the back-story. You should enjoy them too! Let me know what you think!

Disclaimer: JKR started it…I am just playing with the fabulous characters!


Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 37068 Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/22/07 Updated: 08/14/08


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/31/07 Title: Chapter 1: Father, Ron, and Merlin's Ghost

wow mr granger is very mean and cold, although i can see it from his point f view, but still... i am a huge fan of this series so keep going! :D

Author's Response: well thanks! I am posting cha[ter 2 in a few minuets.

 

Summary: Professor RJ Lupin has had a rough life ... except for those precious years he spent as a teenager at school. And now, as he waits to start yet another new life working at the school where he spent so many good times, he looks back on those golden days, and it’s almost as if he’s reliving those times all over again ...


Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 2745 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/22/07 Updated: 05/30/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/31/07 Title: Chapter 1: Professor R.J. Lupin ... Previously Known As Moony

aaaw that was well sweet. and i thank you for not portraying peter as the lackey or suspiscious or even justdownright stupid. Even though he is evil, you are the only writer i have seen who has shown him as the best friend he once was and as quite clever and friendly, cos it really annoys me that people dont write him as the maurauders saw him cos theyre biased *rant over*
sorry about that,lol. its a really food piece and i love your style of fliking back to the past but skipping years, just how memories relly do come about, your a talented and realistic writer thanx!

Author's Response: Thank you! Especially about the Peter thing, because I do struggle with that sometimes ... there are definitely other fics where Peter is cool out there, I definitely remember reading one in particular ... but I don\'t remember anything else about it *embarrassed* I have the worst memory for detail, I swear. Anyway, I\'m glad you liked it! Thanks so much!

 

Return to Me by Kerichi
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary:

Return to me, from beyond the veil, across the sea of darkness that divides us.... When Sirius falls, his lover repeats a phrase that is both plea and prayer. Return to me....




Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 149 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/25/07 Updated: 05/25/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 05/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

aaaaaawwwwww thats soooooo sad :'(

Author's Response: Thanks, it was tragic and I know I\'ll get teary when I see it happen again in the film. Sirius finally had something to live for, and didn\'t get to. Sigh.

 

Imperius Lust by L Morgan
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 78]

Summary: What happens when the Imperius Curse is abused?


Draco Malfoy is having second (and third) thoughts about being a Death Eater. His father tries to help him along, however improper use of the Imperius Curse can turn out very wrong. Malfoy’s emotions, desires and orders become very mixed and he flees to the only place he can be safe. He takes refuge in the most unlikely person and the outcome is scandalously attractive.


D/HR, with very slight R/HR. PRE DH.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Book 7 Disregarded, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations

Word count: 14108 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
06/11/07 Updated: 08/03/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 07/31/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

ooooh i loved it! its so wrong but feels so good, you are a genius! who can she tell? and when do we get to see draco again?

 
Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 08/06/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

oooooh what wil hermione do???
once again a fab chepter keep it up!

 

A Conundrum by Pussycat123
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 34]

Summary: Sitting in his office one summer, Albus Dumbledore has come to a conundrum. But what is the problem he has? What decision will he make? What might Professor McGonagall think of this momentous verdict? And, far away, what will be the reactions of those it affects most?

There’s only one way to find out ...

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2601 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/12/07 Updated: 06/12/07


Reviewer: cocomaloco Signed
Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Conundrum

lol, loved it and i was lmao at the kinky/kochy bit,teheh. loved it, keep goin pretty pleeaassee!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you liked it! If you mean keep going as in continuing this ... sorry, it\'s just a one-shot. But I have lots of other fics (no, really) so you can always read them any time you like! Glad you liked Koochy / Kinky, lol!

 
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