First off my name is Ashleigh, and I love to write. Although, I tend to get a bit harsh while rating my own work. I love to write, but after I write it I think it sucks. So, you may see how I comment on my stories at times. Yes, I know it can get annoying, but it is just a thing that I have - can't get rid of it. Anyways, I have a few poems that I use as examples, so I'll posta short one on here. It is my shortest one, so it may not be that good. Also, currently I am looking for a beta, so if anyone is willing enough, and able to catch errors and mistakes, to be my beta then please let me know!
what's done, is done,
what is paid for, is paid for in blood,
tears, sweat, misery, and agony,
every little thing is just one more push on that knife,
embedding it deeper and deeper,
leaving its mark for all eternity,
there is no release from this pain,
no release at all..
Well, there is my example; my shortest poem ever, but it has some deep feelings in it (in my mind atleast). Once again, if anyone is willing to be my beta please let me know, I'm in desperate need of one! For the time being, read and review my stories, and if you see an error, don't ignore - let me know so I can fix it.
"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”
“No,” Sirius said simply.
“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”
The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP
I love your story! It's so good! Keep it up and keep updating! Angel of Darkness
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I love it, can't wait for the next chapter to get validated!
Author's Response: me either!
Summary: Hermione has just broken up with Ron. He had cheated on her and so she is heart broken and devastated.
Please review everyone! I want to know people's opinions! Thanks, Angel of Darkness