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"Mum, Dad, It's Me... Harry." by Mudblood428

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry, Ron, and Hermione make a trip to Godric's Hollow to visit the Potters' graves. There, Harry speaks to his parents for the first time, and in so doing, discovers that the dead are never truly lost. (One-shot. Bring your kleenex.)
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 04/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Very moving ... *sniff*

The Awakening by hearyoume

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: My own shocking ending to the Harry Potter series (last chapter). Harry wakes up from a deep sleep and what he learns turns his world upside down...
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 07/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening

Strange story. As much as I liked this fic (turning a wild theory into a fic is great), I hope that it doesn't become canon. The last chapter of book seven shouldn't be this.

Ironic, isn't it, that Harry actually wishes that his scar was ... real?

Author's Response: Ah, yes. You\'re definitely not alone in thinking that. And the irony of it all is probably the best part, in my opinion (: Thanks for reviewing.

Dear Dumby by Oppungo

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: What happens when Dumbledore has his latest "brilliant" idea, to start an advice column, and call it 'Dear Dumby'? Letters from some of our favourite Hogwarts students, some of our not so favourite Hogwarts students, some not even Hogwarts students at all, and, of course, lots of madness!

Pre-HBP for obvious reasons!
Nominee for the Best Humour Award in the Quicksilver Quill Awards! Many thanks to all who voted for it!
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 09/08/06 Title: Chapter 12: The Notice - Part 2

Oh, wow! Very funny! Ah, the wizarding world has been turned upside down due to Dear Dumby's "advice" ... *roars with laughter* Oh, and the dialogues never failed to crack me up. I can imagine the hard time the Furniture Warehouse is having trying to stop Voldy's crying and kick him out from their premises *chuckles*.

Thanks for all the amusement and enjoyment you gave us with this short story! It was an entertaining read.

I wish there was a little less OOCness, though. At least this isn't one of the cliche-bashing stories - I've read too many of those.

[/attempt at a meaningful review which should be more than a one-liner]

Author's Response: Thank you! *Giggles* I know, I did feel a bit sorry for Bob! I can\'t say I\'d want to be delegated his job of shifting an emotionally wrecked Voldemort from the premices - but then I\'d want him to stay even less! I know that some of the characters were a bit OoC at times, but I did try to keep them as close as possible to canon whilst keeping the story on the same track. owever, in my next humour story, (which will be coming!) I will definitely take that on board! I\'m so thrilled that you\'ve found yourself amused and that you\'ve enjoyed that story - thank you for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 07/16/06 Title: Chapter 11: Dear Dumby - Issue 5

I think the last part was the funniest. I liked the bit about the Un-Named Gryffindor Girl.

Dear Dumby,

I have absolutely no idea.


*roars with laughter*

Poor Dumby, I wish his advice hadn't backfired. *sighs*

Normally, I don't like the nickname "Dumby" (because a Death Eater called him that. I didn't like the name before that, either). I would have pressed the back button if "Dumby" (the nickname) was in a serious fic.

But this is an exception, obviously. :D

Author's Response: Yes, but if his advice hadn\'t all backfired, then I\'m not sure this story would be (allegedly!) so entertaining! Poor old Dumby - so desperate he had to write to himself! I\'m not sure how much his advice helped himself either...! Thanks, I\'m glad this is an exception! Yes, in a serious fic, it wouldn\'t feel quite right, but hopefully this is ok...(besides, it\'s such easy alliteration!) Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 05/03/06 Title: Chapter 9: Late Night Escapades

I've been reading this fic for ages (and haven't reviewed - stupid me), and it's getting even more hilarious!

BTW, who's that "Vote for Cornelius Fudge as Minister" person? Percy or Umbridge?

Author's Response: Ah well, better late than never!! I\'m gald you\'re enjoying it! \'Vote Fudge For Minister\' was actually even less subtle than that - it was Fudge! Talk about underhand advertising campaigns...

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 05/23/06 Title: Chapter 10: In The Face Of Adversity…

Wow! Very funny indeed! You had me laughing my head off for fifteen minutes ...

I think Hermione should name her last child VOLDIE! (LOL! I don't think she'll really do that ... )

Author's Response: Thank you! It always makes me smile to know I\'ve caused a little more laughter in the world! Ooh - what a great idea!! That\'s who\'d be next closest to her after Draco!! (I am so tempted to put that in right now...!)

Kissing Harry by Kerichi

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

A kiss is not just a kiss. After a disastrous Valentine's date with Cho, Harry finds himself alone with Luna and discovers what a kiss should be. Humour and Romance in a story that started with canon and went What If?


Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 07/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Kissing Harry

Wow! *applause* Another fanfic wriiten by an awesome writer, Kerichi!

I just loved it, inspite of it being AU. Harry/Luna is a strange pairing, but I liked it how you made me believe it for a few minutes while reading the fic, at least.

By the way, I have a romance fic (my first one) and a WIP up. If you're not comfortable with the rating of my romance fic (Professors), you can check out my WIP ... please?


Author's Response: It\'s not AU- it could have happened! I wrote Harry/Luna after OotP, when Harry could talk to Luna when he couldn\'t talk to anyone else, and felt better...making writers like me say, hmmm....Harry and Luna....that would be very, very interesting! I think Jo was mean to \'take it back\' in HBP, having Harry squirm with discomfort and pity instead of appreciate her unique qualities. -_-

Abracadabra by DrTaylor

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry dreams about Dumbledore, and discovers something disturbing. My first fic. Be gentle, please.

I know everyone says it, but please review! I love to see them!

Sheeee's back! And she's better than ever because her story is already complete!
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 02/07/06 Title: Chapter 8: Slytherin

Cool! Ginny just shattered the locket ... with a metal lump!! It seems too simple to be true. 10/10

Author's Response: Well, the last one got poked with a fang. Since it won't open, I figured that if you got it open, it would be destroyed...and all she had to do was think I need something to smash the locket with, since they were in the Room of Requirement...

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 02/22/06 Title: Chapter 9: Coming of Age

Interesting interpretation ... though I don't agree with it completely. I still don't want to think that Dumbledore actually asked Snape to kill him. :_( Great chapter nevertheless. Hoping for your next update soon!

Author's Response: Well, it's just one possibility among many. Only one woman knows for sure, and she hasn't even told her husband yet.

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 10/25/06 Title: Chapter 10: Godric's Hollow

Ah, nice chapter. I know that you took a really long time to update, but it was worth the wait!

The entire chapter was good, of course, but I was kind of surprised by your version of Harry. He seems somewhat cold and detached when he sees his parents' graves at first. That was an interesting twist. Harry's continuing loyalty to Dumbledore made me smile.

Nice use of symbolism on James and Lily's grave. The pair of antlers cradling a lily is not something that I've read about before: it was very unique!

But, there was one little mistake that I could spot ...

When it was time for Seamus Finnegan’s test, Professor Tofty looked nervous – however, Seamus passed easily.

If I'm correct, "Finnegan" should be "Finnigan".

Good luck with the next chapter!


Author's Response: My apologies. Have you ever considered being a beta?

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 02/07/07 Title: Chapter 12: All Hallows Eve

The last two chapters were good, but I feel you're revealing the plot a little too fast. Many unexpected things happen, which work well for creating a suspense-filled atmosphere - like Snape's capture and the possibility of destroying Helga's cup - but I could hardly take a breath. Of course, my review is not a flame, and hopefully, you won't consider it as one. I'm eager to see what happens next. I have a small word of advice, though. The story will be more believable and gripping if the pace were to be slowed down just a little bit.

That apart, I like the little flaws you've maintained in the characters; without going overboard. One of them is really worrying - the fact that Harry hasn't perfected non-verbal spells yet could prove to be a weakness - while the other (Ron's undignified eating habits) is simply hilarious.

I didn't expect McGonagall to ask Harry, of all people, to use Legilimency on Snape. You're right; he isn't ready for that yet. And I'm glad he's got a little break from all that Horcrux hunting. Good luck with the rest of the story!

- Mini.

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 01/23/06 Title: Chapter 6: Return of the Broom Shed

Great chapter! (The identity of R.A.B. is sooo obvious ...)

Author's Response: I feel really bad for the people (and I do know some of them) who haven't figured it out yet.

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 12/30/05 Title: Chapter 4: Disagreements

I like the story, but I think more details have to be put in, in some places.

Author's Response: Agreed. Editing good. Also, there are details that I have intentionally left out so I can flesh them out later. Remember, this is a first attempt at fanfic, and I dont' want to go into too much detail, since too much detail bores me to death.

Never by suckr4romance

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Written in response to Winter Snows Challenge One: Redemption.

It’s New Year’s Eve. A young man wanders the streets of a town, blaming himself for the loss of a loved one, and a young woman sits before her fire, pondering the effects of the war. What happens when one mentally calls for the other, without even knowing it? A life-altering conversation is held amongst the two, its result mending a rupture between the One and the world—his world, the world he loved.

The war ended less than a year ago, and it has been five years since the end of Book Seven. WARNING: This is not to be taken as a romantic shipping.
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Great story Christine! Once again, you have proved that you're an awesome FF writer :)

Heaven by Dubbledore

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: We know Dumbledore died at the end of HPB, but where did he end up? Well all dead people go to Heaven, those who are good that is, while others...

Obviously Dumbledore's going to Heaven, if he manages to survive the Road to Heaven and the trouble

Final chapter has been added! Thanks to all who've read and/or reviewed!!
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 02/07/06 Title: Chapter 2: An Anomalous Altercation

Awesome fanfic! I haven't seen this kind of HP story anywhere else ...

Author's Response: It\'s awesome, huh? I\'ll try to keep it that way...if I fail miserably do not think too badly of me.

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 02/22/06 Title: Chapter 4: The Chase is On

Wesley's feeling sorry because the ranting Goddess of War (Athena) is around.

Author's Response: Yes, I suppose...Then again anyone would feel sorry because Athena around. I\'ve made her into a pretty nasty godess haven\'t I?

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 05/19/06 Title: Chapter 5: A Very Frosty Welcome

Update, finally!

I know exactly who Mortimer was. He was Ron's uncle Bilius, wasn't he?

I think I know what they encountered ... Tauris (sp)?

Author's Response: You\'ll find out soon enough...about what they encountered not who Mortimer is. I will reveal who he is in a later chapter.

We Live On by suckr4romance

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Written in Response to Winter Snows Challenge Two: Ending of a New Beginning.

Six men and women spend Christmas together in a small house, on a small hill. They are their own family—or they would be, if only they could put the past behind them, and live as the dead would want them. The war changed them. Many had died, many had been saved, but they lived on in spite of everything...

Post-War One-Shot. WARNING: Multiple character deaths mentioned.
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 12/13/05 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Awesome story! That's all I can say ...

Gone, But Never Forgotten by megan_lupin

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The Second War has ended, and several months have passed since the Final Battle. It is now the night of 31 December, and while the rest of the world is out celebrating the dawning of a Voldemort-free year, one young man is preparing to end his life. He has lost everything he cared for, including the love of his life, and can see no reason to continue living. Will someone come and save him before it is too late?

Written for “Winter Snows Challenge One: Redemption” by megan_lupin of Gryffindor.
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 09/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Gone, But Never Forgotten

It was very moving. I like the way you portrayed suicide in a non-offensive and not-so-affecting way (mainly because Harry doesn't really die). Ginny as an angel ... that was marvellous.

Well done, Megan!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the compliments! They really mean a lot, as well as the fact that you took the time to leave a review. I\'m glad you liked the story. I was amazed, to be honest, at how well it turned out, considering just how quickly it was put together. It\'s had a good response, though, and I\'m glad you thought I handled everything well. Again, thanks for reading and reviewing. ~Megan

Little Ratty Paws by Vindictus Viridian

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Have you ever gotten halfway through an experimental kiss and realized that yes, this really was a good idea? Remember, it's the quiet, mousy ones you should look out for...

Sirius comes back from a Marauder jaunt with a sleeping rat curled up in his hair and a mood that won't quite go away.

A whiskery nose poked lightly at the side of Sirius’ jaw. Little ratty paws laid their claws lightly on his neck. Peter was awake and hoping for a little help changing back. Sirius held still and kept his breath regular. A small paw settled on his cheek. Sirius thought Peter could bloody well leave him alone and go back to sleep, since finally he was relaxed.

The pointy nose suddenly plunged into his ear and snuffled furiously, whiskers vibrating. Sirius wasn’t particularly ticklish, but everyone has limits. Sirius discovered his with a stifled yelp. “All right, all right!” he hissed, and fumbled for his wand. Pointing it over his shoulder, he performed the spell to help Peter back to his normal shape.

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 12/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: Little Ratty Paws

Hmmm ...

In order to make my review more clear and not a potential candidate for the 'Odd Reviews' thread, I will elaborate further. The fic is quite interesting and well done, because well-written manistream slash fics themselves are really hard to find, and slash rarepairs even more so.

First of all, I felt the fic was believable. I've read lots of (non-explicit) slash fics and thought, "Huh?" because most writers prefer under-developed relationships. I felt the Sirius/Peter romance was a tiny bit abrupt, yet believable at the same time.

I also like the way you've given Peter a personality, unlike many Marauder era fics (though, I must admit, I have read very few MWPP fics). I like his intelligence and quick thinking; it's always good to see the positive qualities of a somewhat negative canon character.

Loved the references to Sirius/Lily and Sirius/James as well. As for the sex-scene ... well-written, and (thankfully) not excessively detailed.

I couldn't find any errors. It's great to read well BETA'd fics! Well done, VV!

- Mini.

Author's Response: Ah, the \"Odd Reviews\" thread. I\'ve had too many to pick one. Thanks for reviewing and enjoying! I\'m glad you found the relationship and Peter were plausible. Peter is hard to write, which is why I have to try it now and again. Despite that, I\'m still waiting for Minerva to catch the rat.