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Hello everyone, I'm an adult female student from India. I'm obsessed with fanfics, like everyone else here at MNFF.

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Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 08/02/06 Title: None

I like all the fics in the series even though I didn't spot any connection, apart from the HBP spoilers in them.

In Nomine Amoris is beautifully written, and I'm sure it's going to be very long. Harry's interactions with various people is never out of character. Even though you've strayed a bit from canon in the vampire chapter, I found it okay.

The Susan/Justin fanfic was just excellent. I found the pairing believable, even though it's not official canon.

The only flaw I spotted was in the classification of Never. Since Harry/Other Character is a sub-category of Romance fics, I feel that the fic is better suited in the Dark/Angst category. In any case, I would advise you to put the fic in one category only, due to MNFF rules about multiple categories .

 

The Talk(s) by smokeline
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 84]

Summary: After walking in on a snog-session between Ron and Hermione, the Weasley family takes it upon themselves to inform them about the birds and the bees. One-shot.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3742 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/07/04 Updated: 11/07/04


Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 09/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Talk(s)

This fic is extremely funny! I re-read it six times and I was laughing all the way through! That just proves its finesse and calibre. The characters (especially Bill and Charlie) did seem a little OOC, but that was how you wanted it to be. Great humour, and thanks for the laughs!

 

A Day with Life by ByMerlinsBeard
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: Bode, an Unspeakable, has recently been promoted to the Life Subdepartment of the Department of Mysteries. Unfortunately for Bode, Life is a pain and his subordinate is having problems.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2104 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/17/04 Updated: 11/17/04


Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 07/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Day with Life

Ok, I want to add more to my review. Upon re-reading the fic, I saw a deep, subconscious message in it that impressed me a LOT. Ironic, that Life itself is not alive.

I had a look at your bio, and I found out that you like rarepairs. You might want to read my fic Amor Non Mutuus (if you're comfortable with the rating and warnings). It's a Tom Riddle Sr./Merope Gaunt fic. You've mentioned that you want to read Tom Marvolo Riddle/OC fics, so why not give a shot at a fic involving his father? ;)

~Mini.

Author's Response: I\'m also glad you saw the deep side of the fic. If the fic made you think and laugh a bit, then it served its purpose. :-) And I will have to take at look at your Thomas/Merope fic sometime soon. I think the only way I\'m going to find the kind of Tom/OC fic that I want would be to write it myself...which is so much work. ;-)

 
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 07/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Day with Life

Ooh, strange and interesting story.

In some lines, I could see the humour: (Bode) even missed writing the overly-polite letters to the leaders of alien worlds, begging them to prevent their scientists from abducting the defenseless Muggles on Earth.

I laughed out loud at this. Integrating magic with sci-fi! *rotfl*

I felt sad for the new Unspeakable and the predicament of the Unspeakables themselves!

Overall, great story! *thumbs up*

P.S.: Thanks for the banner! I've got a question: are we allowed to submit the Harry Hospital Wing Challenge fics now?

~Mini.


Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. And I\'m glad you saw the humor, since that is definitely supposed to be a part of the fic. And you\'re very welcome for the banner. As for your question, I\'m afraid I have no idea. You\'d have to ask one of the moderators running that challenge.

 

Summary: A series of hilarious journal entries and lists from Hermione, describing the insane "war" she has gotten herself into with Parvati. Insanity, and hilarity, ensue... A sequel to "The Secret Thoughts of Hermione Granger" (though it'll make sense if you haven't read it)

Note: Another story from "back in the day."

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 14991 Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/27/04 Updated: 01/24/05


Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 07/21/06 Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue - Learn Your Lessons

*rotfl*
OMG! This fic is simply hilarious! And so is the prequel! :D

To be constructive:
1. Most people were completely OOC, but in a funny way.

2. McGonagall's name is spelt as McGonnagall in some chapters.

To heap some praise (and put in some random comments in the style of this fic):

1. I laughed my head off for a long time over the most trivial of sentences.

2. I just discovered that I have a bizarre sense of humour.

3. You have an even more bizarre sense of humour. *lol just kidding. The fic is original!*

4. Write more humour fics.

~Dumbledore Prince

 

Delightful Pain by Queen of Serpents
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 1147]

Summary:

Hermione gets a visitor at night that delights in her pain. Before she used to dread the nights but lately... she has begun to look forward to meet her nocturnal vistor... and rapist?

Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.

Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.

~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!



Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations

Word count: 35830 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/12/04 Updated: 05/13/06


Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 09/12/06 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

This story is just amazing. You've handled the subject quite maturely. It's not easy to have a gripping plot with OOCness (mainly with Draco and not much with Hermione and the other). I've found one of the few writers who can pull it off in such a brilliant way.

As a fellow writer of sensitive subjects, I know the guts required to post this kind of story anywhere. I've started admiring you for your bravery of writing about sensitive themes. I liked the ending, because in my opinion, a happy ending for such a stirring fic would be a wrong interpretation.

There are a few cliches in the story (the Head Dorms, for instance), but they didn't stop me from reading the story until the very last line. Again, very few authors have the skill to pull this off.

There are many justifications within the story itself that indicate your excellence in writing. All hail Queen of Serpents!

 

The Prophecy Complete by smokeline
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: A poetry version of one of the possible outcomes of the Final Battle

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 718 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/13/05 Updated: 01/13/05


Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 05/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Prophecy Complete

Tragic, yet heroic. Nice rhyming.

 

Summary: At the start of Harry’s sixth year, the wizarding world is falling further under Voldemort’s evil control. Fudge has declared a draconian State of Emergency, but he is little more than Lucius Malfoy’s corrupt puppet. But when Malfoy seeks to impose Voldemort’s racist Pureblood ideology upon Hogwarts - the last bastion of the Light - the students rise up in revolt.

The spirits of the great Witches and Wizards of the Light, fearful for the future of the Wizarding world, send Harry and his friends a powerful ally, to help them in the desperate struggle to save Hogwarts and the wizarding world from impending darkness.

An epic struggle of Good against political corruption, racism, elitist ideology ... and Ultimate Evil. The roller-coaster plot twists and turns into the past and future – and Nightmare Realities, where the terrible consequences of failing to stop Voldemort are chillingly revealed.

A story to fascinate the intelligent reader ... philosophy, politics, time-travel, romance, humour ... and a few very cunning ideas.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 200560 Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/27/05 Updated: 02/18/05


Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 02/19/05 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

Lovely ending I'd say!

 
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 02/19/05 Title: Chapter 34: A Midsummer Night's Dream

Lovely FF... but I began to read it when there were 29 chapters. I was so sure that Harry & DD were going to die. *sighs with relief*

 

A Hero Never Cries by annie
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 107]

Summary: Seven years after the second war, Ginny Weasley can still remember everything. Seven years after Voldemort prevailed over Harry, she's still broken. These are her thoughts and memories, written down seven years after the greatest horror the world has ever known. A heartbreaking tale that describes the months before, during, and after the war from Ginny's PoV.

The last chapter has been sent in. Thanks for reading, everyone!

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5633 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/30/05 Updated: 05/01/05


Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 05/05/05 Title: Chapter 3: Avada Kedavra

I reckon he's dead, the Dark Lord can't be alive ... no matter how tragic this FF is, no writer in their right mind would want to destroy the world

 
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 05/07/05 Title: Chapter 4: Those Four Words

Very sad! *cry*

 
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 05/03/05 Title: Chapter 3: Avada Kedavra

Right, sorry! There must've been a glitch when I was reading! I think it's just the epilogue left now! great FF!

 
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 05/01/05 Title: Chapter 3: Avada Kedavra

Excellent and tragic! *sniff* "This story is complete." I dunno if all the readers have read that line ...

 

The Second War by HPotter7
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 84]

Summary: With the ever-growing threat of Lord Voldemort and secrets of the past that could tear Harry apart, Harry’s six year will be like no other. More attacks on muggles and wizards then ever before as Voldemort gains back the power he once had. Harry will make a decision that will change not only his life, but also everyone’s around him. He will have to choose between what is right and what is easy...
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I've finally updated! Now that it's finally summer I'll have more time to write! I've submitted my new chapter and I hope it will be out soon. I really need a beta because I can't get a hold of my last one, so feel free to volunteer!
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This story was written Pre-HBP so it's my own storyline!

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 15198 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
02/06/05 Updated: 09/21/05


Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 04/28/05 Title: Chapter 4: To the Burrow Once More

Great chapter, that! EVIL CLIFFY!! Hope the DEs don't harm a single hair on Ginny's head ...

Author's Response: Thanks1 I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've finished the next chapter and it is well on its way. Hope you enjoy! -HPotter7

 
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 08/21/05 Title: Chapter 6: The Potion

If there's a delay, contact the mods ASAP!

 
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 03/24/05 Title: Chapter 3: A Rescue and A Dream

First review! Good chapter ... very bizarre, DD at Number 4 ... (lol)

Author's Response: Thanks? that was a coment

 
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 06/08/05 Title: Chapter 5: The Attack

Hey, your chapters have a lot of suspense in them and they're awesome!

Author's Response: Wow, you've been with me from the start and I want to say thanx! okay so anyways, down to buisness, I've decided to make my story a summer fan fic because I've pretty much run out of time! So after chapter ten the story will be over!

 
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 04/05/05 Title: Chapter 3: A Rescue and A Dream

Thanks! Hey are you having login problems? You've responded thrice! BUMP, BTW.

Author's Response: Yes! Yes! Yes! lol....

 
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 03/29/05 Title: Chapter 3: A Rescue and A Dream

What's the title of the next chapter? Have you submitted it yet? Can't wait to read!

Author's Response: I really want to tell you but i can't, this chapter is kind of confusing to write so i'm still touching up parts. -Thanks for reading HPotter7

Author's Response: I really want to tell you but i can't, this chapter is kind of confusing to write so i'm still touching up parts. -Thanks for reading HPotter7

Author's Response: I really want to tell you but i can't, this chapter is kind of confusing to write so i'm still touching up parts. -Thanks for reading HPotter7

 
Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince Signed
Date: 08/03/05 Title: Chapter 6: The Potion

New chapters ...

 
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