An excellent chapter for set-up, and also a definate improvment from the last one. Everything seems more interesting from Fenrir's point of view. Keep it up, I love your story and am absolutely hooked! I hope they have a confrontation again soon!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks . . . I think? o_O Well, at least I\'m improving :P I know what you mean. And there will be more and more Fenrir and FenPOV as the story progresses. They should be meeting up in a couple chapters. The plot keeps getting in the way XP You\'ll understand later; all this has to happen for Del so there can be Fen later on. Trust me ^____^
Wow...this is a really good story. I really enjoyed it so far. Kudos to you!!!
The development of this story is good, but I'm startin g to wonder if I'll ever see Fenrir and Delphia...you know...in the same room? Also, I am still a little confused as to Delphia's opinion on the Dark Arts in general. In some chapters, it seems like she embraces her background and is unquestioningly dark, but in others she seems almost resentful of the dark lord and her family in general.
But anyway, excellent story, me likey, please continue!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review n_n And don\'t worry, the story\'s really long, so all these chapters will seem like nothing. The next chapter, actually, is when Del and Fenrir meet. And yes, Delphia does embrace her background, however she is still a teenager and is a constant disappointment. No matter how much you want to please your family, you still want to piss them off sometimes too, and take your own path. Especially when you\'re reminded of how you let the family down all the time. She is confused; that\'s explored more later. I\'m actually surprised someone noticed o_O Del wants to please her mother, but on the other hand, she wants to strangle her and scream in her face that she\'s good enough and that she\'s really great at things other than Dark Arts, if Preia would only take a look. I\'ll say no more ^.^
Oooh....excellent! Me like, me like!!! I love how everything is coming together, but it all lines up with the book. And the way Delphia thinks is very vivid...and not completely foriegn because of her natural feelings. (Greed, pride, lust, sadness, confusion, nerves...) I can't wait for the next chapter...and I esecially liked this one even though Fenrir was not in it!!!! Congrats!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Eeee, you makes meh so happeh ^____^ I\'m glad her mental state is coming through so well. Over the course of the next few chapters, she becomes even more emotionally mixed up. Glad you liked it n.n I do try to keep the plot chapters interesting, though they can never be as much fun as Fenrir :D He\'s up next. Two words to describe the next chapter: girlish squealing.
Oooohhhh!!!! Me likey!!! That was really, definately my favorite one yet. I felt like everything came together for me on this one-Delphia recognizes her feelings and her place in the world, and Fenrir...well, he finally finds something less gory to be interested in. *nudge, nudge, wink, wink*
Yay!!! Hurry up and write more, I'm addicted!
A great little chapter, though I was looking forward to another confrontation with Greyback. Ah, well, I'm a writer too...I know all about transitions. Congrats, this chapter was very well written and thought out. It seems like Delphia is still struggling with her convictions... unsure whether she wants to be under Voldemort, or her own power. Once again...great job, I hope to read more soon!!!
Author's Response: Danke :D Yes, she is struggling with everything that\'s going on. She still has that teenage rebel in her yet she wants to please everyone and do what\'s right by her family and her blood. Not to mention Fenrir had to toss himself into the mix. There will be more soon, although unfortunately Del and Fenrir won\'t be together again for a few chapters. Fortunately the wait for their meeting is worth it ;)
2010: Ahaa, God, I just took another look at this story and, uh...the only defense I have is that I was a lot younger when I wrote it. Whew.
Oooh...me like! Write more soon, please!
I know someone so like elodie it's scary...good job with her.
Author's Response: chapter five is on its way asap!
This Post-Hogwarts fic focuses on Ron and Hermione’s ‘budding’ relationship while the four friends attempt to solve a mystery in a club called ‘Boundaries’. Will the boundaries that Ron and Hermione have barricaded themselves behind survive the ‘knock, knock’ of true love attempting to beat them down?
This fic is the sequel to Internal Battles also by Emily Jayne.
This story is now complete.
haHA!!!! I knew he would be mad.....
Author's Response: Of course! It\'s Ron!
Oooh! I loved Internal Battles and I love this one too. Arghhh...Write more, please!!!!!! I never thought I'd become obsessed with a ron-hermione fanfic, but....my mind has been changed, I admit
Author's Response: obsession..not good...adiction...that\'s a compliment! I am really gald that you like it and hope you keep reading...and that the mods keep validating!
Ahhhhh???What happens next? Hurry up!!!
Author's Response: chapter 8 is already in the queue!!!! It\'s getting there!
Oh...another cliffie!!!!Arggggg!!!! Well, what more can I say besides...CAN'T WAIT 'TIL THE NEXT ONE!!!
Author's Response: My beta yells at me all the Time for those...but he secretly loves them! Chapter 9 is in the queue.
I just read through this entire story so far in about 45 minutes, unable to stop even though I've got plenty of other things I'm supposed to be doing. Write more!!!! I love your stories!
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 7 is posted and awaiting validation ... and guess what???!!! I am going to be sending chapter 1 of the third installment to my beta SOON!!!!!!!!!!! It is much fluffier and much funnier, but very seet and cute. I named the and everything! Keep rading and tell a friend!
Excellent, as usual!!!
Author's Response: Awww! Thanks!
How much longer til we get the next chapter, would you estimate? I'M DYING HERE!!!!!
Author's Response: chapter 7 is up!!!