MuggleNet Fan Fiction
Harry Potter stories written by fans!
sch [Contact]

I would like to thank everyone
who is generally nice to me,
and my right lung.

[Report This]

Stories by sch [1]
Favorite Authors [0]
Favorite Stories [0]
sch's Favorites [0]
Reviews by sch


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: sch Signed
Date: 03/14/07 Title: None

Hmm, well I can't say that I read these type of stories very often, but overall I really did like it. My only suggestion would to make the story flow better from paragraph to paragraph, and maybe a bit more setting description. However, good job.