I changed my mind...I like your story a LOT! I't's incredibly dark and rich with detail...and not to mention addictive! I love it..keep writing untill everything is told. You're a severely cool writer *thumbs up*.
It's quite imaginative ,well wrtten, and descriptive for the scenery. But I think you should add more detail when describing Harry's thoughts and feelings; I suggest making Harry silently "talk" to himself more, as it could show his character and emotions more deeply.
I'll add your fic to my faves, keep it up! :)
Oh my God... The last time you updated was last year! I just noticed right now and I'm very dissapointed. please continue your story... : (
New reader! The last three chapters are too amazing! Your ideas are totally original, and the writing style is brilliant and easy. I'll definetely add this fic to my favourites. POST MORE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!
That was great! But I don't know about Harry's father being alive...In the end of goblet of fire when Harry was fighting Voldemort ,these shadows of Harry's father and all the other people Voldemort have killed last (Cedric, Lily, Frank ) prove, in my opinion, that Harry's father really is dead. I think Dumbledore said (I don't have the book now so don't count on that) that the shadows represent the characters of those who "died".. mmm..I'm not sure though. Anyway, this fic is awesome and I must read it untill the end! You gotta keep it up. 9 outta 10
Good show! You have a lot of great ideas, and a beautiful talent. Can't wait for the last chapter and I'll definetly read the sequal. That story is just awesome...
This is too good! Honestly, this chapter is the BEST so far. I love the adventurous moments and the excitment you put in , it's really great how you change the dark mood of the story for some time. It's how JK does it in my opinion.
You know what I'm going to say, POST MORE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked this chapter. I just submitted chapter seven, hopefully it won't be too long. Thanks again for the review!
Wow. You writting style is definetly one of the best on this website! It's so simple but rich , easy but sophisticated. The atmosphere of the story is beautifull. So sad, lonely and anticipating altogether. I think you have good future infront of you as a writer. I really can't wait to read the rest of the story. Can you please post sooner?
Author's Response: Wow... thank you so much! Yes, I expect sooner updates and I'm very sorry that one took so long. The truth is that I've written up to chapter eight, and it's being checked over... but it tends to take longer for me to get it approved than it does to actually write it. I'm just in the rebeta-ing stage of chapter four, so it shouldn't be too much longer. Thank you so much for the review!
This is amazing, it brought tears to my eyes. I think Neville plays a big part which JK will bring out more in the up coming books. And I think this fanfic is so different from the others which all talk about Harry, we all know what Harry feels anyway "I hate Voldemort...I have to kill or get killed ...I miss Sirius Black"...It's getting really boring to me, I'm tired of seeing everything through Harry's eyes.
You have to keep this story going on because it's really special, and I'm a huge fan now!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I feel the same way about Harry, which was my primary reason for making this fic. Again, thank you for your review. ~Eponine
I meant that last review for the fifth chapter..sorry!
Author's Response: Haha that's okay. I kind of figured it out! Thanks again! ~Eponine
Finally the new chapter arrived! *squeal* Honestly this story doesn't stop getting better! I admit that some scenes make me dislike Harry , but you didn't change his personality at all. I sometimes felt from OOTP that Harry thought he was too good of a super hero to be true. For example, he couldn't believe that Ron and Hermoine were chosen as perfects and not him. And whenever he's angry he keeps talking about all of the evil he fought. He is brave, honest and funny, but still far from perfect. Neville is not perfect either but I think he's more modest that Harry.
Anyway, this story is very good and you are REALLY bringing all the characters to life. Don't stop posting! I'll read all of your fics from now on.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate having a reader as enthusiastic as you! Thanks a million!
This is great! I'm a big fan of Neville too. Actually I'm exactly like him; clumsy, forgetfull, and I also have a very roundish face! Moreover, I never get noticed by my crushes (because I'm not as pretty as all the other stupid popular gils). Man I'm gonna make myself cry! :( Forget about me now, you have to post more! I can't believe only a few people are reviewing here and so many others are going crazy about the disgusting gay stories! (they all want to read about Harry and Draco have sex..ugh!).
I can't believe only a few people are posting reviews about this story. It's brilliant and very dark. I love the evil side of Harry you made. You managed to create a really vivid atmosphere in most of the scenes, and I'm definetely in to your style more than most writers I've read for on this site. Keep up the good work and count me as a great fan!
I don't want Harry to be good again : ( Okay actually I'm a bit of an evil Wednesday sometimes...I love the chapter like all the previous ones . Post more soon!
AWESOMENEESS!!! I know that's not a real word but I can't describe how much I'm thrilled when I read your stories! I had a feeling that Harry would survive and I love the way you put it through.The centaurs were a good choice as well...so keep up the good work ;) By the way I'm Egyptian and was kinda happy when you mentioned my country..well maybe Makhail won't be a great part of the plot (or is she?). Anyway I think it's amazing how so many nations have their own view of magic; Europe with flying brooms and vampires, Arabs with flying carpets and demons, Egyptians with symbols and curses. I think it proves that magic is real...at least it's great in stories! :D POST MORE SOON!
Hey there u really kicked my butt with all the info. about my own country! : P Thanks for telling me about the Aker thing though... I remembered the girl's name was Makhail which sounds very manly in Arabic letters, but Mikhail does sound like a girl..good choice..Keep it up!
Hi again. I just forgot to tell you that Makhail is not a girl's name, and also Akker isn't Egyptian. They don't sound bad anyway, but if you'd like help about anything Egyptian then you're welcome to send me! Again..I can't wait for chapter 2.. :' (
Author's Response: Thought I'd let you know, because you seem interested, I have a cousin named Mikhail, and she's a girl, my name is infact also a boys name as well, which I got teased much for growing up, sometimes I have to wonder what our parents were thinking... Anyhow, Aker, mythologically is actually a branch of Egyptian werewolf. The name is taken from the Egyptian word for trustworthy(ikr). The myth, is that the line desended from the Lycaons, but possessed different traits, they actually turn into wolves, and they tend to have a golden or desert color hue to their fur. They are also said to be uneffected, except for a magic boost when it comes to the full moon. They also have a love of wisdom, philosophy, and magic. Ok so maybe I'm giving too much info, but I hoped it helped a bit. :)
Haven't read a fic with that high quality for some time. Keep up the good work because I'll be reading : )
Author's Response: That\'s quite a compliment thank you! But much of that Quality Assurance is due to my fantastic beta. Two will come soon, hopefully.
So sad...great writing.