25 y/o...American-multiracial (blk,wht, cherokee, & puerto rican)- male-eyes change colors-5'9 & 160lbs. A, now, devout HP fan after many years of thinking that it was just going to be stupid lil kid stuff. JK Rowling is a genius & in my opinion, HP is one of the greatest epic heroes of literature.
Beautifully ended.. as I have told you before, you are one of my favorite writers on here, and very rightly so. That was a great way to end it and stay true to the characters you wrote about and a clever way of doing so. WELL DONE!
You are a superb writer. I love the way you have the characters following their traditional roles & not going off on crazy tangents like some other authors do on here; having characters do things that are totally out of character. (i.e. cutting, etc.) But I digress, Keep up the great work, and I hope you will read mine once I finish planning and have it posted.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review; and I try to be very loyal to my characters, so I'm grateful for your praise. I'll be on the lookout for your story.
I really love your story, its gr8. This was a gr8 chapter and I like how you have the battle going with Snape & Potter. It is fairly obvious that from your writing, that we have similar thoughts about Snape and how is a victim of circumstance and was never evil or mean but did what was necessary for his & people he "cared" about. I like that. I hope in your story the "truth" as you see Snape's past will be discussed and he can get some modicum of recompence from those that have berated him for so long.
Author's Response: Hee hee hee. You ought to read Fair Exchanges (if you\'re old enough), it\'s got the Beleagured!Snape in spades.