ah excellent chapter. Really interesting idea re: effect of kiss on Kane, and implications of what might happen to other ferals. Loved bit at the end, with huge moral and personal dillemas hanging over you, theres nothing better than some nice social humiliation eh? really gd chapter. look forward to next.
Enjoyed the chapter though nothing in particular happened, just very vague ideas of what might be going to happen. looking forward to next chapter though.
Aah, it all falls into place. interesting. very interesting. Look forward to more.
Great chapter. Very intriguing new characters, and great suspense. I love seeing Remus and Tonks working together and can't wait for next chapter.
Enjoyed the chapter a lot, tonks/remus argument a good way to get across the implications of their discovery. And while not exactly a cliffhanger, i am in suspense at to what harry and ron have overheard/deduced. Good work!
Ah excellent, v glad this is out. Really enjoyed it, look forward to more great things, and wd yes you did get so much from hbp right! v impressive. and i did find myself thinking of oblivious while reading it. Really look forward to next chapter.
Ooo. exciting. gah. can't wait for more. Lupin was excellent and in character, weary as ever.
Author's Response: I know...poor Lupin!
Oo nice story. Very interesting. moving and katherine is a great oc. Does this lead on from dol and ss or not?
Author's Response: Thanks for dropping by to review this one too, ellidiot! It's going to be related loosely to SS but it is in no way an indication of what happens at the end of SS...even I don't know exactly what's going to happen at the end of SS yet! LOL This is just a bit of Christmas fluff.
Ah excellent chapter. Snape and Maeve's characters shown well- the similarities and differences in a similar situation. I look forward to more.
Author's Response: I thought it would be interesting to see how they were both coping with incarceration. And just one more chapter to go!
Great chapter, am liking your character more and more. Look forward to seeing Lupin and Narcissa.
Author's Response: Hope Lupin and Narcissa lived up to your expectations. It was a short glimpse of them...but they were instrumental to theplot.
Really enjoyed it, both characters come across perfectly. The chess game is a very neat parallel and works very well in your fic. Good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! Particularly for the character comment -- I may have to throw these two together a few more times.
ah some very cunning ideas this chapter. Nice to see that snape can still outsmart the marauders even if they do have the map. look forward to more.
Author's Response: Some cunning ideas -- and a little of the luck that Severus insists on believing he does not have. Thanks for the review and read. More will follow!
I cannot believe it's over. :( please keep writing anyhow, there are many incidents in the books I'd like to see from this accurate Severus' point of view, not to mention book 7 possibilities. A brilliant fanfiction that I've enjoyed no end x
Author's Response: "accurate Severus" -- aw, shucks. More writing is a certainty. I can't seem to stop. Where it will wind up is another question altogether. Thanks for reviewing so loyally throughout!
I love this story. So nice to read a fic that fits in with hbp canon, but still seems to understand snape. Enjoying it immensely.
Author's Response: Thank you! I always found that the interesting thing about Severus was that he could always be doing any particular thing for at least three reasons, at least one of them pretty good and at least one of them rather evil. For writing this, I generally tried to make ALL of those reasons the right one. It keeps him properly complicated. Also very very challenging...
Very good story, I'm enjoying it. You seem to have come up with a plausible plot fitting in with hbp and characterisation is good so far. Look forward to more.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I tried to do my research on the whole Snape/Malfoy situation. :)
Very much enjoyed it. Am i right in thinking it fits into in the eyes of others after severus' dada display? I love your Lily, exactly as she should be, and the maturing James is also rather lovable, when he's in the common room of course. Very good work
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, that's exactly where it fits in. James is indeed far more loveable in the common room, and in his own POV, than he is in the Severus fic!
Aw a lovely twist! Certainly in keeping for Lily to be the one to... Perfect. Just the way it should be. :D
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
still really enjoying this story. That Lily is a clever one. That James really isn't, but it's good to see him growing up. lovely characterisation even if no action this chappie.
Author's Response: Every now and then the action has to slow for a minute and two people have to hiss at each other across a table in grand glaring public, no? I LOVE writing Lily. She may be the best gal to come out of my pen to date. Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad to see someone found my Toad!
Interesting piece! Very convincing journalistic style for the period and I especially liked little details such as Dumbledore's suit. I've often wondered about the Grindelwald war and how far it was connected with WW2. Enjoyed, but a bit slow at the start before it got to the interesting bits.
Author's Response: Thanks! First review! Poor lady, here she'd written a perfectly acceptable slow-starting society concert review of 400 words, then what goes and happens to the hall? "Skeeter! 800 words on Queen's Hall, five minutes ago!" I had such fun with this. And I've always wondered about Grindelwald too. The incendiary bomb wedging between the roof and beams of the concert hall, in the official account, just sounded so Ministry-coverup I had to use it.
Very nice, a nice little explanation for Draco's increased abuse of Ron in ootp, you've really thought this through. So who was Lucius' first love? must go look for clues. Got Narcissa's sussed of course. Nice to have it linking with the rest of your fic world, the blue eyes have always seemed a separate package.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing (again!) You know, I have no idea who Lucius was in love with, or whether he's making something up to jolly along his son and give him a good puzzle. If it sends up bunnies for you, help yourself -- and let me know!