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Remember Me by lookitsria
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 35]

Summary: Based on the combination of the Latin obliviscor, meaning "forget," and the Aramaic עַ�‘ְ�“ָא כְּ�“ַ�‘רָא, avda kedavra, meaning "what was said has been done," Oblivi Kedavra has the meaning “forget what has been done.”

After being struck by a home-made curse from Draco Malfoy, Hermione's mind is swept clean of any and all memories of Ron. Which is stronger? Love or revenge?

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Epilogue? What Epilogue?, Sexual Situations

Word count: 18137 Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Published:
07/24/11 Updated: 04/05/13


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 11/24/12 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bit short. The next chapter looks interesting.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 11/27/12 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Too short. I need more.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 11/27/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

P.S. We have "real estate agents" in England. Not "muggle realtors".

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 12/21/12 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I think it is.

 

Love, Hogwarts by Amortentia Black
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: Sirius, Remus, and Harry share memories and stories as they read through letters the Marauders and friends wrote to their future selves while at school.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 7395 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/27/11 Updated: 01/10/13


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 01/07/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Morning Hiccups, the Half-Blood Prince, and Worries and Warnings

Who is this Alice Longbottom? Frank's wife would have a different maiden name.

Author's Response: You're right- thanks for the catch. I meant for them to be talking about the current Alice Longbottom, but it wasn't so clear. I edited it.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 01/11/13 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Hobgoblins, Always the Charmer, and Fifteen Years

Nice one.

Author's Response: Thank you!

 

Heiress of Evil by voldiexx
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: Whew, those thirteen years were nasty, but Voldemort's back and better than ever. He's got plenty to do, consolidating a power base, punishing traitors, and not letting the haters get him down, but he's spared some time to look over the custody agreement he signed fourteen years ago...

Annabel Curry wanted to spend the summer getting a tan, perfecting her Cheering Charms, and ensnaring Terry Boot. Instead, she's spending it with her dad the mass murderer and his unshaven goons. Oh yeah, and the shower doesn't work, AND NO ONE BUT HER SEEMS TO CARE.

First dates. Sparkly nail polish. Magical plumbing fiascos. Some heartwarming father-daughter moments. And some not-so-heartwarming ones.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 5004 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
08/03/11 Updated: 03/30/14


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 04/02/14 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Silly. But good silly.

 

After the Battle by ginny6142
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 21]

Summary: When Harry Potter defeated Voldemort, he made his way to Dumbledore's office without speaking to the girl he loved, knowing that they had a very long time to talk. Eventually, on his way back to his dormitory, he realizes that he can't avoid her forever.

This is a chaptered story that chronicles Harry and Ginny's journey as they recover from the separation and make their way to the epilogue.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 3171 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
08/26/11 Updated: 09/04/11


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/04/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A good precise of what happened. I hope you develope it a bit more originally.

Author's Response: This is very close to what JK wrote because it is close to the battle, but it will become more original. Thanks for reviewing!

 

High by Equinox Chick
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 233]

Summary: Past Featured StoryScorpius Malfoy is the Seeker for Slytherin. Not only that, he's the best Seeker at Hogwarts, and it's his catches that win matches. But this year things are different; Albus Potter has switched to Chaser and the new Gryffindor Seeker is his annoying little sister.

This is the story of how one match and one missed catch can change your life.

This story was accidentally deleted, so is being resubmitted ... very very quickly.

SQUEEEEE! High won the Best Next Generation QSQ award. Thank you so much for the everyone who has helped, either by beta'ing or encouraging me.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. I'm not sure who I am at the moment, but there must be some Arthur Weasley blood in me.

Thank you Natalie (hestiajones) for doing the vast majority of the beta work on this, and Apurva for work on the early chapters

Squish for Natalie, Jess, Kara and Bob for helping me sort this out.

Due to an archive hissy fit regarding any story with a rating about 3rd-5th, I have temporarily lowered the rating on this story. However, I have NOT changed the content. This story is still a 6th-7th. You click at your own risk.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity

Word count: 135569 Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/04/11 Updated: 01/14/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/26/12 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 -The Same Sweet Steps

What a great story. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I have a sequel planned (in my mind) I hope to have it written soon. ~Carole~

 

Stormy Skies by voldiegirl
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary:
As the granddaughter of Sirius Black and Celeste Lovegood, Nimbus is used to the fame the name brings. However, being the only Ravenclaw in the family and being related to almost every great guy at Hogwarts is more annoying than her twin brothers.

When her abilities as a Seer give her an interesting glimpse at the past, she begins to question everything as she discovers a conspiracy and the history of a certain third-floor corridor, along with a romance that is forbidden in her eyes.

*This is the third part of The Secret Life of Scarlet Black series, but can be read alone.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 40424 Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Published:
09/06/11 Updated: 05/14/14


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 01/20/13 Title: Chapter 16: Tragic Love Stories

There are some good characters in this story.

 

The Unforgiven by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary:

The Battle of Hogwarts brought out the best in some and the worst in others. And not everyone emerged knowing into which group they had fallen. Susan Bones was one of these individuals. But when she came face to face with one of the war's unforseen victims, she began to wonder whether she didn't truly belong in the latter category.

Then again, not all was what it seemed ” not when it came to Theodore Nott.

 

 

 

This is a birthday token for the delightful and talented Ariana/lucca4, who doesn't seem to realise quite how talented and jealousy-inducing she is. I hope her day has been half as wonderful as she is. :)



Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Mental Disorders, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 17043 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
09/20/11 Updated: 11/23/13


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 11/17/13 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I have just read this from the beginning and it has a lot going for it. Get it finished.

Author's Response:

I am working on that as we speak. I'm just taking a quick break from the word doc to get the letters from dancing in front of my eyeballs, hehe. I haven't been very sure about this story, but I'm glad you enjoy it thus far. I plan on finishing it within the next week or so and posting over the next two, so yay for that. Thanks for reading!

Jess

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 11/24/13 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

What happened there?

Author's Response:

Well, Susan hasn't yet figured it out, so the narrative isn't going to come right out and tell you. However, if you squint, you can probably work out why Theo turned on her. I shan't spoil, though.

~Jess

 

Remember the Slytherins by iLuna17
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 62]

Summary: There is a thin line between love and hate. There is an even thinner line between Gryffindor and Slytherin; the willingness to do anything to achieve their goals. Gryffindors cannot see the big picture, and if they come to a decision to choose between the greater good and their loved ones or himself, they would sacrifice the world for their friends.

Slytherins are different. We know the value of sacrifice, but there is something else that separates us from those who wear red and gold. We will fight as hard as we can, in any way possible, even if it may be seen as unjustified or morally wrong. Gryffindors let their consciences get in the way of the greater goal. We don’t, but no one believes that we can fight for the right cause. They remember us as the evil, idiotic, or simply power hungry. They don’t remember us for what we are; who we are. We’re here to change that.

They will remember us, and they will remember us as those who fought all prejudice and cruelty simply because were were done with it. They will remember us, and the next time they think of a phoenix rising from the ashes they will remember this phrase:


Remember the Slytherins.


Nominated in the 2012 QSQ Awards - Next Gen/OC for Nick.


Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Mental Disorders, Strong Profanity, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 97777 Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Published:
12/15/11 Updated: 09/02/13


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/02/13 Title: Chapter 23: The James Factor

It is very sad that your characters have lost hope so badly.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 10/15/12 Title: Chapter 1: Prolouge: The Week of Tears

This does not paint a very good picture of the wizard world in general. I will see how it develops.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! It will develop in time- both sides will be explained, and you can make the decision on your own. Keep in mind that Nick is *slightly* biased. :) Thank you, and keep reading!

Ellie

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 04/22/13 Title: Chapter 21: Falling to Pieces

This makes for grim reading. I hope there is light at the end of the tunnel.

Author's Response: I know that it's a dark fic, and a completely happy ending is out of the question from how far off the cliff it's gone, but I promise there will be some good parts to come. Thanks for the review!

Ellie

 

The Real Magic by goldensnidget92
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 31]

Summary: Past Featured StoryThis is a story about a love of books. It is a story about a boy and a girl united by this love.


Perhaps there's a reason why Hermione Granger values frienship so strongly. Perhaps there's a reason why Hogwarts: A History means so much to her. And perhaps there's more to her life before Hogwarts than we have been told.


This is her story.

This story was nominated for a Quicksilver Quill Award 2012: Best General Story!


Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 16760 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/21/11 Updated: 05/24/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 05/24/12 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Friends and Farewells

I thought that was just a lovely story.

Author's Response: Thank you!

 

Summary: Voldemort is dead. Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny have survived. Now, the young warriors have a future. They have dreams, and dreams cost nothing; however reality has its price. The path each chooses has twists, potholes, and detours. They find that life plays tricks on people. These issues have to be confronted before they make it Platform 9 and ¾ in 2017 and beyond.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Suicide

Word count: 54280 Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/27/11 Updated: 10/22/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/30/12 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12-A Very Weasley Wedding

Plenty going on in this chapter.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/24/12 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14-A Life Together

Nice chapter.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 10/23/12 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17-Loose Ends

I think it should be "Greengrass", not "Greenglass". Still a good read.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/28/12 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Some Muggle Magic

Good for Hermione.

 
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