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Unspeakable by C_A_Campbell, Northumbrian
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 23]

Summary: Unspeakable, Michael Corner, is researching time, events, and probabilities. While testing his newly-invented RANDOM system, he stumbles upon an unspeakable possibility. Former supporters of Voldemort, all acquitted for their crimes, are dying of so-called natural causes. Intrigued by the possibility that these events might be connected, Michael investigates farther. But what he discovers will test him and raise questions that all his probabilities cannot answer for him.

What is justice? And what is unspeakable cruelty?



This is C_A_Campbell/thegirllikeme and Northumbrian of Ravenclaw writing for the 2011 Mysterious May Challenge in the Great Hall, Prompt 4.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mental Disorders, Mild Profanity, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 35289 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/20/11 Updated: 07/04/11


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/08/11 Title: Chapter 7: Shattered Souls

ANOTHER GREAT STORY WITH AN EMOTIONAL ENDING. (Left the Caps lock on). What have I been missing over here by spending time on just SIYE and Phoenixsong? I need more time to get through all the stories I have missed.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. i assume you've now found all of my non-H/G stories. -N-

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/06/11 Title: Chapter 7: Shattered Souls

Just by coincidence I found you over here. What a lot to read but how about updating some of your stories? We need more "Strangers"

Author's Response: Thanks.
I can finally reply, there have been several more chapters of "Strangers at Drakeshaugh", but it's never enough! :-D
-N-

 

The Phoenix Or The Flame by GinnyRULES
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 118]

Summary: Several years after the final battle, Dudley Dursley is struggling to come to terms with his past and the things he has done wrong. His life is turned upside down when he meets a charming young witch and is drawn into a path that leads him back into his cousin's world.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 38696 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/27/11 Updated: 12/27/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/21/12 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Getting interestimg.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/14/12 Title: Chapter 5: CHAPTER FIVE

A bit worrying at the end then.

Author's Response: Haha yeah there's trouble brewing... Thanks for commenting, I'll post more soon :)

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 12/28/12 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

Happy ending.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/12/12 Title: Chapter 11: CHAPTER ELEVEN

A lot going on in this chapter and we leave with Dudley in a spot of bother.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/21/12 Title: Chapter 10: CHAPTER TEN

This really is a great story. I hope Dudley is not in too much trouble Where is the house elf? More please.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/10/12 Title: Chapter 4: CHAPTER FOUR

I have just started this and it looks really interesting. Keep it coming.

Author's Response: Thanks that's great to hear, I plan to update soon! :)

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/12/12 Title: Chapter 8: CHAPTER EIGHT

Good chapter, but finish this story before starting another one.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/20/12 Title: Chapter 6: CHAPTER SIX

Does Dudley know whether he is coming or going? Good read.

Author's Response: Haha I'm not sure I understand the question. I do see Dudley as a very conflicted character, which would be what drives almost his every action. Thanks for commenting! Cheers :)

 

Summary: An incredibly valuable item has gone missing, and everybody is completely stumped. There is no way a stranger could have entered the room! How was the crime committed? More importantly, whodunit? Were those blue beads on the floor before? What about those two mugs on the table? Why is Pansy sitting on Blaise’s lap?

Theodore Nott investigates.

This is Northumbrian of Ravenclaw house writing for the 2011 Mysterious May Challenge in the Great Hall, Prompt #1 “ The Amateur Sleuth.

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 10705 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/28/11 Updated: 10/16/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 10/14/12 Title: Chapter 4: The Investigations of Theodore Nott

Sherlock Holmes in disguise.

Author's Response: Not quite, but Thodore does have his moments. :-D -N-

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 10/16/12 Title: Chapter 5: The Unexpected Actions of Susan Bones

An enjoyable read.

Author's Response: Thanks.
And hopefully an insight into the complex relationship (is that the word?) between Theodore and Susan.
-N-

 

Much More Than A Game by Hypatia
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 87]

Summary:
“Lord Voldemort has never had a friend, nor do I believe that he has ever wanted one.”
-Dumbledore, HBP, ch 13

Dumbledore was rarely wrong, only once did Lord Voldemort desire a friend. It started out as only a game, but became so much more…

This is the story of how the teenaged Tom Riddle met a unique individual and slipped from cold indifference, to affection, to friendship, to romance. Discover how even Voldemort’s cold and callow heart was once broken beyond repair. This is for anyone curious about how an imperfect love warped and twisted a corrupt young man into the Dark Lord.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 106968 Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/16/11 Updated: 09/29/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/30/12 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

I started this story about a week ago and you posted the last chapter just as I came to it. A thoroughly fascinating and compelling piece of story telling. Well done and thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you for reviewing,
Hypatia

 

Severus's Prince by DestinyMoonStar
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 26]

Summary:

What does Severus Snape do when a one night stand turns into a baby boy?
What does a boy do when his mother died giving birth to him and his father is an aloof ex-Death Eater?
Is there ever love between them? I say that there is.

This is a story about just that. This is a story about Severus’s Prince.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Student/Teacher Romance, Violence

Word count: 41102 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Published:
07/17/11 Updated: 09/16/14


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/01/14 Title: Chapter 7: The Gift

nearly wrapped presents - would that be neatly? There is no "and" in Beadle the Bard I had forgottrn this story so I had to do a bit pf backward reading. On to the new chapter.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/01/14 Title: Chapter 8: Lessons Learned, Wisdom Gained -- Part One

A bit on the short side.

Author's Response: I know sorry about that but for some reason it wouldn't let me post the whole thing. I had a spacer to represent time passed but the site wouldn't upload anything after that. So in the end, I just decided to divide the chapter. The part two will be on as soon as they approve it. Hopefully within a few days.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 05/18/13 Title: Chapter 6: A Wounded Heart

Just came across this story. I hope you can manage to update. I like Xavier.

 

Remember Me by lookitsria
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 35]

Summary: Based on the combination of the Latin obliviscor, meaning "forget," and the Aramaic עַ�‘ְ�“ָא כְּ�“ַ�‘רָא, avda kedavra, meaning "what was said has been done," Oblivi Kedavra has the meaning “forget what has been done.”

After being struck by a home-made curse from Draco Malfoy, Hermione's mind is swept clean of any and all memories of Ron. Which is stronger? Love or revenge?

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Epilogue? What Epilogue?, Sexual Situations

Word count: 18137 Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Published:
07/24/11 Updated: 04/05/13


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 11/17/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yhis is a very interesting story with an unusual plot.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 11/18/12 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is a different sort of story and quite sad. How long will it go on for?

Author's Response: This story has 21 chapters :)

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 01/01/13 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

A plan. Shouldn't be long now.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 01/04/13 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

We all want a positive outcome.

 
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