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If I Leave You Now by silverlining95

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 7 Reviews

'Even in a castle this huge, with as many cousins as I have there’s always someone with a map to come and scoop me out of my tear-stained reverie in a dark corner.'

Molly Weasley Jr cannot leave Hogwarts, for she cannot leave her best friend behind.

This was originally written for the Illustration for Inspiration challenge over in the Great Hall, however it wasn't long enough and I didn't have time to rework it in order to post it in time to qualify.

The title is inspired by the Chicago song 'If You Leave Me Now'.

Nominated for a 2013 Quicksilver Quill in the Next Generation category.

Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: I Never Can Say Goodbye

It was too well written because it made me sad. I would really like to know how molly gets on in life after Hogwarts.

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I'm sorry it made you sad :( I'm starting to think I should write a sequel... seems Molly needs some closure! Thank you for the review :) Fenella x

Redeeming The Past by FearlessFlyer

Rated: Professors • 3 Reviews
Summary: The past: some cling to it, others deny it; some learn from its lessons, while others are locked in the cycle of their mistakes. How far would a man be willing to go to move beyond his past and ensure that it will not define him? Severus Snape is about to learn.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/21/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good story.

Author's Response: Thanks 😊

Dragons on the Water by Gmariam

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 10 Reviews
Summary: Charlie Weasley loves his job in Romania: he was born to lead the life of a carefree dragon keeper. Yet when a new keeper from Wales arrives to help with a difficult Chinese Fireball, Charlie is forced to take on a partner, when he'd rather work alone. And this new keeper challenges him in more ways than one…
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/16/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

More than an interesting relationship here, but I am not convinced I can see it happening. Excellent writing.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm glad you are finding it interesting at this point. Thank you for the compliments, I hope you enjoy the rest! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/17/12 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Baby dragons on the horizon, Voldemort is back, will the relationship get anywhere? Will Terrence be forced to serve the Dark Lord (I think not? Plenty happening so why do you get so few reviews? Good rate of update by the way.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Yes, there is more happening and sometimes I wonder the same thing myself. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed the updating - it is finished now and hope you enjoy the last chapter! Thank you again! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/14/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Interesting personal relationships developing, but the dragons are the main thing.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I take it you are a bit of a dragon fan, then? I hope you like how the story plays out with both! Thanks for reading, I appreciate the review! ~Gina :)

Conversations by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 16 Reviews
Summary: Ron and Hermione have some news.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/15/12 Title: Chapter 1: Conversations

A simple snippet of life made into a wonderful chapter just by the quality of you writing.

Author's Response: Thanks you. :-D -N-

The Lake by opti

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 5 Reviews
Summary: It's been weeks of funerals after the Final Battle, and Ron and Hermione are long overdue for some time not spent crying.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Explosion

It was a thoroughly enjoyable read.

The Loannes Potion by crbluvsravenclaw

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 4 Reviews
Summary: There's a desire. All possess it, but one achieves it until death marks its destruction. There's a book. At first sight, it is old and dusty. However, it is selected instead of the other polished replicas. There's a note. The selector discovers it in a random section of the book just weeks later. They decide to study the scribbles on it. There's a problem. As always, there is some sort of dilemma halting the desirable task from its conclusion. There's a result. The solution may be solved at long last or it may be far from it, waiting for years to render its capability.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/17/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

Interesting set of new characters. I am not quite sure of the time period this is set in. Is it before or after Remus Lupin attended Hogwarts?

Author's Response: It is set after Remus Lupin and the Trio's time. I would say that the prologue was set in the 2020's and the first chaprter and the remainder of the book is set eleven years after that. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it! ~crbluvsravenclaw

Babies Mine by The owl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 10 Reviews
Summary: Luna is wandering around her childhood home, talking to her stomach.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/31/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Amusing and nice.

Author's Response: Thank you! That was exactly what I was aiming for.


Flying with Dragons by epiphany212

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 3 Reviews
Summary: Oliver Wood to Harry Potter: "I wouldn’t be surprised if you turn out better than Charlie Weasley, and he could have played for England if he hadn't gone off chasing dragons."

So how exactly did Charlie decide between Quidditch and dragon-keeping, after all?
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good short story.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Dark Fire by Phoenix Song114

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 4 Reviews
Summary: Celesta Grey isn't expecting anything good to come out of her fourth year at Hogwarts. Why should she when her parents are ignoring her, her insufferable cousins are bullying her and her friends, and she is reminded of a secret every waking minute? Cell isn't expecting new feelings to arise, or a strange foe to come, or even a simple promise that turns out to be harder to keep as each day passes.
Cell is in for a complicated year. Bloody typical.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/12/12 Title: Chapter 2: Short-Lived Excitement

New characters. Looking good.

Author's Response: Thank you

Teach My Feet to Fly by Equinox Chick

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 12 Reviews
Summary: Andromeda Black is not a girl who is reckless. Risks are for the foolhardy, and she is too clever for that. But she hasn't factored Ted Tonks' persistence into the equation of her life.

And Ted wants to teach her how to fly ...

This is Equinox Chick of Hufflepuff writing for Round 2 of the Character Clinic Triathlon - Minor Characters. I chose the Music prompt.

The song that Andromeda listens to in this story is River by Joni Mitchell. It is beautiful.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. I am not Joni Mitchell. I am someone who admires both artists greatly.

Ta lotsly to the lovely Natalie (hestiajones) who beta'd this and is a truly fabulous friend.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/23/12 Title: Chapter 1: Skating

Very moving.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. ~Carole~

Fear and Loathing in Florida (Mostly Loathing) by minnabird

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 6 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: Scabior and Greyback had to escape the Aurors somehow - they just hadn't expected to end up in Florida.

This is minnabird of Hufflepuff writing for Round Two of the 2012 Character Triathlon.

It earned an honorable mention in that round and won joint first for Best Humour Story in the 2013 Quicksilver Quill Awards.

Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: Oneshot

I think there is room to develop this some more. Will they get caught? Won't they? Good little read.

Author's Response: Mm. There's certainly room to develop it more, but to be honest I just wanted to write a silly story about Scabior and Fenrir having issues roughing it in Florida. They aren't caught for now, and that's what matters. (Honestly even if they don't get caught they'll probably spend the rest of their lives guarding against being caught, so no neat resolution if that's the case - and tbh I don't want to write about them being caught xD). Wow, okay, that took more words than expected. Just explaining why this is all there is. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing anyway.

One, Two, Three by Alice Mac

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 5 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: Have you ever been a part of something? I have - we were one, two, three together. Three pieces of a rather small jigsaw puzzle. But we were solid, strong and we felt untouchable.

Do you believe in 'forever?' I did. But then, I could be quite arrogant at times.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/06/12 Title: Chapter 1: Death of the Knight Bus

Very well written but a bit depressing. A ray of hope at the end.

Good Enough by Acacia Carter

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 11 Reviews
Summary: O.W.L. results have arrived, and Scorpius is certain his parents will be less than pleased.


This is Acacia Carter of Hufflepuff, writing for the Minor Character Challenge of July 2012.

Many thanks to Julie/Peppermint Toads for the beta, Jess for the nudge to write Scorpius, Gina for the nudge to write this Scorpius, and Soraya for listening to my angst.

Please note that this is a companion piece to another of my works, An Intervention. It can be read alone, but if you are interested in Scorpius's past, the beginnings of it are available on my author page.

It's not my fault I seem to be incapable of writing a story without Neville in it. Really, it's not my fault this time - blame Gina.


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/29/12 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

This was a slightly different take on the relationship in the Malfoy family and of Scorpius with Neville. Great narrative and a happy glow of pleasure at the end. Very satisfying. Thank you.

Nott: Father and Son by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 11 Reviews
Theodore Nott, the other Slytherin. Who is this mysterious person who remains in the background. Who are his friends? Whose side is he on? Does anyone know? Does he know?

This is Northumbrian of Ravenclaw writing for Round Two (Minor Characters) of the 2012 Madam Pomfrey’s One-Shot Character Triathlon.

Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/29/12 Title: Chapter 1: Nott: Father and Son

Wholly believable picture of the happenings in the life of the Nott family. Well up to your usual brilliant standard.

Author's Response: Thanks.
I was originally going to call this “Why Nott?” but I resisted. Expect to see Theodore again very soon.

Gaps Between by lucca4

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 6 Reviews Past Featured Story

Falling in love teaches Dennis Creevey that sometimes, needing someone isn't a bad thing, especially as it helps him forget all that he's lost.

It fails, however, to show him that forgetting can only go on for so long.

Thank you to Ari for her loveliness in betaing this story.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: Gaps Between

A very interesting piece of writing. It was quite depressing in the middle but a ray of hope at the end. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I am glad that you liked it and didn't find it completely depressing. xx Ariana

Yggdrasil by Northumbrian

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 18 Reviews
Luna attends the International Symposium on Fantastic Beasts in Sweden. She is looking for proof of the existence of the Crumple-Horned Snorkack. What she finds is something else entirely.

This is Northumbrian of Ravenclaw writing for Round Two (Travel Prompt) of the 2012 Madam Pomfrey’s One-Shot Character Triathlon.

Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: Yggdrasil

Will they find the tree before we find the end of Aurors and Schoolgirls? Little gem.

Author's Response: Thank you.
Will they find it at all? What can I say? Not before Hunters and Prey, that's pretty certain.

Red Currant Rum by Eleanor Lupin

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 3 Reviews
Summary: Rosmerta Church has never really enjoyed Christmas since she was seventeen. In fact, it has always depressed her - there was just so much for her to miss. But one Christmas day, a recovering alcoholic visits Rosmerta's pub and gives her a bit of hope.

This is Eleanor Lupin of Hufflepuff writing for Round Two of the 2012 Character Triathlon.

Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/10/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Heart warming. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Zygosis by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 12 Reviews
Zygosis: the biological process of conjugation; the union of cells or gametes.

Life exists to procreate, to recreating itself, being created by many different methods. Because of that urge to create new life, Auror Albus Potter finds himself in trouble.

This is Northumbrian of Ravenclaw writing for Round Two (Minor Characters: Harry Potter’s birthday) of the 2012 Madam Pomfrey’s One-Shot Character Triathlon.

Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/31/12 Title: Chapter 1: Zygosis


Author's Response: Thanks. :-D