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Summary:

Scorpius Malfoy, Jimber Dokes, Albus Potter and Rose Weasley are looking for a non-eventful second year at Hogwarts. However, even before the opening feast of the school year is over the entire second year Gryffindor class are called into a special meeting that will launch themselves and the entire school into a mystery.

As the Auror office, led by concerned parents Harry Potter and Ron Weasley, search for clues. Draco Malfoy will be tested when a former school mate drops back into his life forcing Draco to choose between his new life as an honest business man and a Slytherin Prefect sworn to secrecy for members of his house.

Beta Reader - The owl(Sophie)



Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 37991 Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/11/12 Updated: 11/17/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 10/06/12 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Drawing Lines

I am not to sure why Lucius thinks he can make threats through Draco about taking personal action, given they are not in a position of power any more?

 

Uncommon Friends by Gmariam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 21]

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhen Draco Malfoy walked into a shop one night looking for help, he found the last person he would have expected: Neville Longbottom. To Neville's surprise, Draco accepted his help. But neither anticipated that one chance meeting would be the beginning of a friendship that would last until the very end.

Winner, Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Post-Hogwarts story

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Self Injury, Substance Abuse

Word count: 9778 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/13/12 Updated: 06/17/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/13/12 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

Good. Very original. I liked it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Original is one of the best compliments I think a person can get in the crowded world of Harry Potter fanfiction, so I really appreciate it! I'm glad you enjoyed it and hope you like the rest! Thanks again~ Gina :)

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/18/12 Title: Chapter 3: Part Three

A sad ending, but very moving. The whole thing was just a pleasure to read. Very original pairing.

 

Strong Enough to Break by Acacia Carter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: Past Featured StoryIt had been three years since his wife's death, but the first woman to make him feel something is the last woman he'd have thought. The fact that he's closer in age to her father than to her does not help matters.

Otherwise known as All Soraya's Fault.

Important note: I used the Student/Teacher warning as a precaution; the relationship in this story is between a teacher and his former student, for whom he had no feelings while she was under his tutelage. Just to be clear.

Another important note: I'm not JKR. She has a much nicer house.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Student/Teacher Romance

Word count: 13583 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
06/16/12 Updated: 07/19/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/22/12 Title: Chapter 2: Two

Interesting story line and very moving.

 

A Black at Heart by Miss B
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: “Hey... Harry? I found some letters Sirius wrote. Have you ever heard of an Élisabeth LaBelle?”

What if you loved someone, in secret, all your life? What if you had no idea if they were even alive, and you had no way to contact them? Would you still keep them in your heart?

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 8886 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/22/12 Updated: 03/25/13


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/19/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: Old Memories

I have just found this story and I am hooked.

 

Awry by Liet Dumbledore, Kaitlyn Snape
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: At the end of sixth year, Lily hates Severus. She can never forgive him for that one word, no matter how careless. And so, when she goes home, Lily spends only a short time in her neighborhood before joining Mary in Godric’s Hollow.

At the end of sixth year, James loves Lily. She is his life. He lives to see her each and every day. And so, when he goes home, James is looking for a new way to win her heart in the coming year. Remus comes over, and the two hatch a plan.

At the end of sixth year, everything is as usual.

At the beginning of seventh year, everything has changed.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 7824 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
06/23/12 Updated: 07/23/14


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 10/26/12 Title: Chapter 2: Deleteriousness

If Lily and James do not get together it will be very bad for the Harry Potter stories.

Author's Response: Haha we know... don't worry it's canon.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 10/27/12 Title: Chapter 3: Concocting Alliances

If nothing could go wrong, why is this story called "AWRY"?

Author's Response: Because everything doesn't go to plan.

 

Sabrage by Equinox Chick
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Dominique Weasley had not wanted to attend the party, but when she saw her, all thoughts of Disapparating vanished as she was wrenched off her axis and capitulated into hitherto unknown feelings.

This is Equinox Chick and this is my entry into the Great Hall Illustration for Inspiration Challenge. I chose a picture drawn by the amazing Natalie (hestiajones) I must also thank her for beta'ing this fic.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling.

Categories: Femmeslash Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 10363 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/24/12 Updated: 06/29/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/27/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Methode Champenoise

This is certainly not the sort of story I come across in my usual stamping grounds, but it is intriguing and very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking a chance on the story as it's not your usual sort of thing. I very much appreciate the review as well. ~Carole~

 

Wisps of Smoke by majestic_ginny
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: As Draco Malfoy walks into a dusty shop in Diagon Alley, his eyes fall on something that makes him recall a day he wants to forget.

This is majestic_ginny of Hufflepuff writing for Round One of the 2012 Character Triathlon.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 2379 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/24/12 Updated: 07/01/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/01/12 Title: Chapter 1: Wisps of Smoke

Very moving.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. =)

 

The Poppy Field by Gmariam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: On the last day of his last year, a young man looks to his future in a poppy field by the lake…

Written for the Character Clinic Challenge by Gmariam of Ravenclaw.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1568 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/24/12 Updated: 06/24/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/24/12 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Different. But why is she sorry?

Author's Response: She's sorry for having to say no at this point. I can't really see them getting engaged quite so young. Thanks for reading, I appreciate the review! ~Gina :)

 

Locket by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary: Ron runs away, and runs into a spot of bother.
This is Northumbrian of Ravenclaw writing for Round One of the 2012 Character Triathlon.


Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 2688 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/28/12 Updated: 06/28/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/29/12 Title: Chapter 1: Locket

Fine as it is.

Author's Response: Thanks. -N-

 

Wolfsbane by Shiloh_Tovah
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: AU. Professor Snape finds himself in a bit of a predicament when someone from his school days shows up to teach at Hogwarts. Serena Wolfsbane, an accomplished Auror, takes up her new teaching position and discovers that there is definitely more to Snape than meets the eye. Follows basic plot of last 4 Harry Potter books.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 7234 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
07/01/12 Updated: 08/30/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/30/12 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Interesting information coming from this chapter. Waiting for more.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/06/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Is this the real Moody? Plenty to go yet.

Author's Response: The Moody we see here is the same "Moody" that appears throughout the majority of Book 4. Namely, it's Crouch Jr. impersonating Moody.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/26/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Serena looks like being a very impressive character.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you think so. And thanks for reading :)

 

Polarity by Acacia Carter
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: Draco ought to have expected he'd end up dying facedown in an alley, but nothing could have prepared him for the events or the friendships that would follow.

Draco/Neville, with references to previous Draco/Harry and Neville/Harry, as well as references (nothing explicit, merely allusions) to non-consensual memories.

Beta'd by the inestimable Soraya, to whom I owe at least three tonnes of baked goods by now.

I'm still not JKR.

Third in the Long Way Down continuity, this story takes place between the events of The Breaking Point and Tempus Vernum.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Mental Disorders, Sexual Situations, Slash, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 13648 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
07/02/12 Updated: 07/24/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/24/12 Title: Chapter 4: Snap

An interesting conversation and Neville is certainly different from his Hogwart days.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/16/12 Title: Chapter 3: Motives

Is this just turning into a Neville = Draco thing or is there action on the brotherhood/ Auror front?

Author's Response: It's a little of both. This story's panning out to be much longer than the others in this series, so the buildup is a little slower.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/11/12 Title: Chapter 2: History

This is a great Neville. Wonderful dialogue.

 

For the Love of Books by Theloonyhermione
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: What was Hermione's life like before Hogwarts? Why does she love books so much? Why doesn't she have any friends? What are her parents like and what impact have they had on her life?
A story of Hermione's life before Hogwarts.

I'm not J.K. Rowling. I suppose more than a few of you know that.

Edit: Thank you guys so much!! Over 1000 reads on my first story... whoever has read this is amazing.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4370 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/04/12 Updated: 08/14/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/17/12 Title: Chapter 1: There's Always a First Time

Is Mariah a muggle or....?

Author's Response: Yes, Mariah is a muggle. I created her to show how she was the only friend that Hermione has had in her younger years. Thank you for reviewing, however short the review!

 

Fall Behind by Ars Letalis
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: October 3rd. They still haven't told him; it's likely never will. This is the most and least selfish act they have committed, and in spite of it all they just can't let go. One-shot, Remus/Lily.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 1701 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/06/12 Updated: 07/14/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/15/12 Title: Chapter 1: One

Very emotive writing, but I am afraid I did not like your story line.

Author's Response: Perfectly fine, I know it may be a pretty unpopular concept. :)

 

If I Leave You Now by silverlining95
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary:

'Even in a castle this huge, with as many cousins as I have there’s always someone with a map to come and scoop me out of my tear-stained reverie in a dark corner.'

Molly Weasley Jr cannot leave Hogwarts, for she cannot leave her best friend behind.

This was originally written for the Illustration for Inspiration challenge over in the Great Hall, however it wasn't long enough and I didn't have time to rework it in order to post it in time to qualify.

The title is inspired by the Chicago song 'If You Leave Me Now'.


Nominated for a 2013 Quicksilver Quill in the Next Generation category.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mental Disorders

Word count: 1472 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/07/12 Updated: 07/09/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/09/12 Title: Chapter 1: I Never Can Say Goodbye

It was too well written because it made me sad. I would really like to know how molly gets on in life after Hogwarts.

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I'm sorry it made you sad :( I'm starting to think I should write a sequel... seems Molly needs some closure! Thank you for the review :) Fenella x

 
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