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01/24/07




eSilver haired (blond turned to grey actually) 60+ year old sad old man who loves HP Fanfics. Now very close to 70...

Now over 70 so still keen.


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The Ring of Urobara by Osgard

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Potter. Weasley. Malfoy. Black. Seven years after the Battle of Hogwarts, a new threat has emerged that will cross distant lands and centuries in this thinking person's canon fantasy. A dark, ensemble page-turner filled with action, suspense, and mystery.
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/02/12 Title: Chapter 11: The Woman

Another chapter full of questions and not a lot of answers.

Author's Response: Yes, there are many mysterious layers in this story, but they will be resolved in the end.



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/11/12 Title: Chapter 15: Beyond the Veil

Graphic writing.



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 11/18/12 Title: Chapter 22: The Ambush

It leaps from one action and set of characters to another and can be a bit difficult to follow. What I cannot do is miss any of it. A huge work.



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/01/12 Title: Chapter 14: The Gate

A philosophical chapter with an ending that promises plenty more action. Still a lot of threads to pull together, but this is great writing.



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/27/12 Title: Chapter 7: The Wolfhaus

I said a few chapters back that there were a lot of possibilities for this story. Few! That was an understatement. There are an awful lot of things going on here and I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words. I would be thrilled to know which story threads particularly interest you. I promise you two things. First, I aim to write a story that's actually worth the investment of time to read (i.e. not just a simple ho-hum Hollywood storyline where plot threads are obvious, cliched and predictable). And second, I promise to answer plot questions through the course of the story. There will be certain philosophical themes that may not be given a direct answer because the point is to get the reader thinking, not for me to give my particular view of ethics or the universe. But anything character or plot related, however nebulous the story becomes, I promise to answer. Knowing which questions are on your mind by the reviews you post will help me to be sure to follow up on your particular interests. Thank you again for your time and thoughtful comments.



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/09/12 Title: Chapter 9: Parseltongue

We now have an idea where Harry has got to and why. I am a bit lost as to what happened at the end of the last chapter. Where will Draco turn up next. Why is Neville important? All magic story telling.

Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying. Some of this is meant to be confusing, but to clarify, Harry is at the mercy of Soran, who believes Harry still possesses the ability to speak Parseltongue. Torture, both mental and physical, is part of Soran's plan to make Harry magically part with that talent.



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/20/12 Title: Chapter 13: Weasley

Go get 'em, Hermione.



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 12/12/12 Title: Chapter 23: Voices in the Dark

You have slightly confused me with this chapter. Am I right in thinking this is before chapter three? Without reading the whole thing again, I am not sure of the time line.



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 10/14/12 Title: Chapter 19: The War

It was very exciting to read, but we now have one more twist in the plot.



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 10/27/12 Title: Chapter 20: An Ocean of Wisdom

Very complex. Unmissable.



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 05/31/12 Title: Chapter 3: The Black Adder

There is a lot of possibilities to this story. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you! More is definitely on the way! Stay tuned!



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/12/12 Title: Chapter 12: Slytherin

More food for thought.



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/21/12 Title: Chapter 16: Muggles

Some interesting history here, but meanwhile, back with Draco?



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 01/07/14 Title: Chapter 24: Ten Thousand

Good to read another chapter.



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 10/07/12 Title: Chapter 17: Ave Maria

I am left gasping for breath.



The Healer's Heart by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary:

Daphne Greengrass had until her twenty-first birthday to pick a husband, or her parents would choose one for her. With only months to go before the deadline, she found herself with a perfect suitor in Theodore Nott.

But when a freak pregnancy landed her in the care of cranky Healer-in-Training Michael Corner, Daphne started to realise that things she thought she knew were slowly being turned upside-down. And what she thought she knew about Michael Corner began to dissolve into something different entirely.


This story has been nominated for two 2012 Quicksilver Quill Awards: Best Non-Canon Romance and Best Post-Hogwarts Story.


This story has also been nominated for a 2013 Quicksilver Quill Award: Best Post-Hogwarts Story.


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/03/12 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This story just gets more gripping.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so. It's hard to know whether something is exciting on the page to someone else when it's already happened in your head and hence has no suspense. Thanks for checking in!

~Jess



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 05/19/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This would not normally be my sort of story, but in this case I was just sucked in. Well written and original.

Author's Response:

Would you believe I get that a lot? My author page is covered in stories with reviews prefaced with 'this isn't the type of thing I normally read, but...'. I take it as a compliment, so thank you for that.

I'm glad you find it original. It's hard to write stories that people haven't read before in some other fashion. I hope the rest of the story continues to be a pleasant surprise. Thank you for the read and review. :)

~Jess



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/06/12 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Interesting developments.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Or at least I think so, hehe. Thanks for dropping in!

~Jess



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 05/29/12 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That was a powerful chapter.The dialogue was brilliant.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. The beginning of the story was a fair bit lighter and fluffier than the latter half, so be prepared for some turning of the screw! Thanks for stopping in. :)

~Jess



Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 05/22/12 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good update. I am liking this story more and more. Your characters are very real.I have just checked out your other stories and what a wealth of stuff to go at.

Author's Response:

Welcome back! I'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far and that it's getting better as it goes along. The beginning moved a bit slow because of the amount of character introduction I needed, but I think it paid off.

Anyway, thanks for the support, and watch for an update in a few days!

~Jess