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The Accidental Family by Ruby Emeralds
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 91]

Summary: The fourth sequel to The Accidental Godmother showcases a variety of moments in the lives of the recently expanded Snape family.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 74549 Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/10/12 Updated: 07/26/13


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/06/12 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This has been a really original series which I have enjoyed a lot. Only two more chapters. Have they ever thought about adopting? That could get us a whole new series.

Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that you have enjoyed the series of "Accidental" stories. I have had a blast writing them and it's very fulfilling to know that someone out there also likes to read them! :) In response to your idea, I haven't considered having Celie and Severus adopting more children because I'm not sure that I could invent new scenarios for them to experience with more children. At this point, I am wanting to wind down the series, so that I can tackle new HP fanfic writing ideas, but I thank you for your excellent suggestion. Perhaps I'll want to return to the series at some point in the future; in case I do, I will hang on to your idea. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 04/05/12 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I just love this family so much, I had to remember how to login to leave a review. When you are old and senile, login details for so many sites are a pain. Thank you for a very different and great series.

Author's Response: I'm so excited to hear from you! :) Thank you for taking the time to figure out how to log in to the website and for leaving me such a kind review. I'm glad that you are enjoying the series and I hope that you like the next chapter. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

 

Summary: A story of how Rose Weasley and Scorpius Malfoy evolved from being two people who never spoke to each other to being two people who broke all of their families expectations to be with each other.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 3341 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
02/25/12 Updated: 10/30/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 10/30/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - A Friendship Forged?

I am enjoying this, but I wish the chapters were a bit longer.

Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm working on it - I find that usually after about a thousand words I run out of meaningful things to say in the chapter.

 

Fighting for the Cause by PeppermintToads
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: Voldemort has taken over the Wizarding World and Death Eaters are crawling all over the majority of Britain. At Hogwarts, a war is being fought amongst the students and staff. Through an organization called Dumbledore's Army, many believe that there is still hope.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 12410 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
02/26/12 Updated: 09/26/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/26/12 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: News

Interesting talk with Draco.

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/07/12 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Dumbledore's Army

I just started this story today. It is an excellent tale of other characters at Hogwarts. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: I am glad you like it :)

 

Iris albicans by Lost_Robin
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: James Potter was not the only child of two older parents, as everyone thought. He had a twin sister, who fell in love with his best friend. What if Harry had a cousin, two years younger than him? Follow the story of Iris Lily Potter as she takes on her first year at Hogwarts.


And I can not thank my lovely beta, BrokenPromise, enough.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death

Word count: 2583 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
03/14/12 Updated: 06/01/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/01/12 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Interesting start to this story. Look forward too more

 

Preconceptions by Hotrav
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary:

Ginny Weasley is where she used to dream to be someday. She is being hailed as the next great Quidditch player. She is the starting Chaser on the Holyhead Harpies and is playing Seeker for the first Unified United Kingdom Quidditch World Cup team. However, Ginny has discovered that being a 'Quidditch star' has costs. You have no privacy, and people will talk about you, saying things that have little or no foundation in truth.

Ginny is facing a turning point in her life. She will be going up against Viktor Krum and the favored Bulgarians. She also has a long term contract with the Harpies awaiting a signature after the match.

And there's always Harry Potter, the other part of her dream. Can she or does she still want both of them as the main part of her life?



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 19725 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/12/12 Updated: 07/23/14


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 12/31/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Protectors

A quidditch match lasting more than three chapters. Spectacular.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/20/14 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Fourth Choice

It has been eighteen months to get to here. I hope we do not have to wait too long to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: fyi, I accidently hit the story is final button. An epilogue is coming, but the main stor ended with the 5th chapter. I'm sorry for the delays, but I lost my beta reader/editor and had to do it on my own. Thanks for your patience

 

Grounds for Divorce by Alice Mac
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1]

Summary: Some, when sitting as I am now, ponder how they have arrived in this place. They do not recognise themselves, let alone the person sitting opposite them. That isn’t the case with me. There is no mystery; there is no question.

It was me - all me. Well, me and him.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 6734 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/30/12 Updated: 05/04/12


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/15/12 Title: Chapter 1: Irreconcilable Differences

That was so real I am now depressed. Good writing, bad subject.

 

Overcoming by Kaitlyn Snape
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: Ginny is torn apart by Fred's death. He was the only one of her brothers who understood her, and now he is gone. Yet despite this, she knows she must go on. She must continue to live despite this. And to live, she must accept his death, no matter how hard it is.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4194 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
05/06/12 Updated: 09/15/13


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/16/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Moving Forward

Why has Ginny not seen her family or Harry for so long?

Author's Response: She withdrew from most of her family and friends because of her grief.

 

The Ring of Urobara by Osgard
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 58]

Summary: Potter. Weasley. Malfoy. Black. Seven years after the Battle of Hogwarts, a new threat has emerged that will cross distant lands and centuries in this thinking person's canon fantasy. A dark, ensemble page-turner filled with action, suspense, and mystery.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 58956 Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Published:
05/11/12 Updated: 01/04/14


Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/21/12 Title: Chapter 10: The Gorgon

This explains a bit of what happened but not a lot. Who is this McGonagoll, surely not a Hogwarts Professor training Aurors?

Author's Response: Yes, it was meant to show another perspective of the event, not to answer all the questions about it. This is indeed Minerva McGonagall. The chapter explains she is there at Shacklebolt's request to evaluate the new Aurors. Without formal assessments and a proper final year of school, and with so many trusted members of the ministry dead following Voldemort's attacks, Shacklebolt turned to McGonagall, who would be available during a summer session to assist in the rebuilding of the Ministry.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/02/12 Title: Chapter 11: The Woman

Another chapter full of questions and not a lot of answers.

Author's Response: Yes, there are many mysterious layers in this story, but they will be resolved in the end.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/11/12 Title: Chapter 15: Beyond the Veil

Graphic writing.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 11/18/12 Title: Chapter 22: The Ambush

It leaps from one action and set of characters to another and can be a bit difficult to follow. What I cannot do is miss any of it. A huge work.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 09/01/12 Title: Chapter 14: The Gate

A philosophical chapter with an ending that promises plenty more action. Still a lot of threads to pull together, but this is great writing.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 06/27/12 Title: Chapter 7: The Wolfhaus

I said a few chapters back that there were a lot of possibilities for this story. Few! That was an understatement. There are an awful lot of things going on here and I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words. I would be thrilled to know which story threads particularly interest you. I promise you two things. First, I aim to write a story that's actually worth the investment of time to read (i.e. not just a simple ho-hum Hollywood storyline where plot threads are obvious, cliched and predictable). And second, I promise to answer plot questions through the course of the story. There will be certain philosophical themes that may not be given a direct answer because the point is to get the reader thinking, not for me to give my particular view of ethics or the universe. But anything character or plot related, however nebulous the story becomes, I promise to answer. Knowing which questions are on your mind by the reviews you post will help me to be sure to follow up on your particular interests. Thank you again for your time and thoughtful comments.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 07/09/12 Title: Chapter 9: Parseltongue

We now have an idea where Harry has got to and why. I am a bit lost as to what happened at the end of the last chapter. Where will Draco turn up next. Why is Neville important? All magic story telling.

Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying. Some of this is meant to be confusing, but to clarify, Harry is at the mercy of Soran, who believes Harry still possesses the ability to speak Parseltongue. Torture, both mental and physical, is part of Soran's plan to make Harry magically part with that talent.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 08/20/12 Title: Chapter 13: Weasley

Go get 'em, Hermione.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 12/12/12 Title: Chapter 23: Voices in the Dark

You have slightly confused me with this chapter. Am I right in thinking this is before chapter three? Without reading the whole thing again, I am not sure of the time line.

 
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 10/14/12 Title: Chapter 19: The War

It was very exciting to read, but we now have one more twist in the plot.

 
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