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I'm Jennifer. I write fics for your enjoyment (well, mostly my own, but I hope you enjoy it too).

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Fidelity by some_kinda_superstar

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James has always been totally commited to Lily. So when he stands her up, she brushes it off. But when it happens a second time, she begins to grow suspicious. Is James Potter, the love of her life, cheating on her? Or does he have something else up his sleeve?

Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 02/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: Fidelity

That was so gorgeous! I think the characters were portrayed really well.

"I think he just liked it because it showed off my arse." That was a good one! So James-like to think like that. This is going in my favourites, one of the best fics I've read in a while. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so glad you thought this was good. It\'s going on your favourites? Wow, I am so flattered!

Christmas Love by LilyLady

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: A one-shot about a future Christmas between Harry and Ginny. Pure fluff.
Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 09/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Love

This story was sweet, but I think you overdid it a little. Firstly, your characters seem to be a little OOC, because Ginny depends on Harry too much in this fic. She's usually the strong one, and she seemed a little weak. Also, Harry is NOT that romantic. Sure, he's nice, but the rose petals and the jewelery are over the top. Oh, and it seems a bit repetitive with the necklace he gives her on Valentine's Day and the necklace he gives her at Christmas.
The pet names also seem way too cutesy for Harry and Ginny. I can't really imagine Harry calling Ginny 'snowflake', no matter how much in love he was.
Well done all the same!

Outcome Unknown by Accio_Rose

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Will the Chosen One win the final battle? At this point the outcome is unknown...

(A poem...)

Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 12/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Outcome Unknown

Children cry and people die,
At the hands of the man with scarlet snake eyes.

That sent shivers up my spine ...

The Things I Do For L.O.V.E by Pussycat123

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hi, I’m Lily Evans. You know, there are a lot of fics about me out there. I’m flattered that you spend time thinking about me, but sometimes sickened. How could these fics not mention my bonkers beautiful cat, Missy? And what about my evil and malicious extremely helpful conscience? Or the fact that I make a fool out of myself at every opportunity am unique?

Well, this fic has all of these things. It also has L.O.V.E (I’m the ‘L’), the elite group of cliquey lovely girls that I am part of. And our rival, the sarcastic cynic also unique Iola Potter (cousin and partner in crime to James). But does it have an actual plot? Of course not Absolutely! And it starts with me getting a detention with Iola (through no fault of my own, of course). And we kind of ... almost ... well, we get on alright. A friendship sparks, shall we say. I have no idea how it happens It is meant to be. But it’s going to take some fighting for if we want to keep it. It would be a lot easier to just stick to what we know, really. We were perfectly happy hating each other. But ... well. I guess you’ll have to find out!

Read this or I’ll curse you Read this and I’ll love you!
Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 01/20/07 Title: Chapter 7: When People Ring Your Doorbell, You Have To Let Them In

Absolutely brilliant. I just read them all in one go, and I can't wait for the next one! I loved the red wine trick! You are so going on my favourites!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I\'m really glad you enjoyed it, and am honoured to be on your favourites ... I always am. Next Chapter should be soon, depending on when my beta can get it back to me ... :D

Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 02/27/07 Title: Chapter 9: Too Much Can Happen In One Short Day

Another brilliant chapter! Petunia's reaction to Lily's friends was hilarious! It was pretty funny how all of them thought she was menstruating too. Update soon! I love this story!

Author's Response: Ha ha, that part was based on how if I\'m ever upset about something, someone always asks me if I\'m \"due\" and it\'s like: \"Hello, I can have feelings without hormones being a part of it!\". I\'m glad you liked this fic =D

Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 06/04/07 Title: Chapter 14: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

AAAGGGHHHH!!! POOR LILY AND HALLEAD!! That's horrible! Why did Hagrid have to be so mean? It's not like him! I feel so sorry for Hallead. *sobs*
But anyway, I said about five chapters ago that Iola would get together with Sirius. I was right, hey? *looks around for support* And Lily and James ... those bloody Perfects! Way to ruin the moment!
So sad that this will be finished. But it still is my favourite fic! I can't wait for the last chapter!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you, I\'m glad you\'ve enjoyed this fic. Hagrid wasn\'t mean, he was just upset about Hallead, and he and Lily aren\'t as good friends as he and the trio are (or will be). And yes, you were right about Sirius and Iola. Congratulations!

Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 06/20/07 Title: Chapter 15: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

OMG I CAN"T BELIEVE IT"S FINISHED!!!!!*Bursts into tears*
Sorry, but this is my favouritest story on this site. I love it so much! THis was an amaing chapter, I loved the Hollywood ending. So sweet!
My favourite characters - of course, the adorable James and Sirius, my favourite chapter - has to be 'Revenge is a Dish Best Served Comical', Scene - the last one! Quotes - there are just too many to name! My favourite things all round would be Padfoot Points and the reinvented 'Perfects' ... hilarious.
Thanks for writing a great story for me to while away hours reading!

Author's Response: It was a pleasure to while away hours writing, so don\'t worry! I\'m sorry this is over too, but it\'s been fun, and I\'m glad you enjoyed it. Yay for James and Sirius! I love those guys ...

Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 01/26/07 Title: Chapter 8: A Path Becomes Clear, And For Once I Take It

Oh my god! That was so cool! Does Iola like Sirius? That would be so cute if they got together! I'm glad Lily's going to ditch her friends, I never really liked them. I didn't think Iolas life was lame, by the way, it fit in perfectly. Once again, I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks. We\'ll have to see about Sirius and Iola I guess. It\'s time for some anvil type hints, methinks. I\'m glad you never really liked Lily\'s friends. It\'s nice to know I achieved that particular goal.

Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 04/16/07 Title: Chapter 11: Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Comical

I loved it! You are such a great writer! I almost fell off my computer chair laughing when they called themselves 'The Perfects'. I can't wait until some romance starts... and what about Iola and Sirius? Are they going to get together? Update soon!

Author's Response: Ahaha ... you\'ll have to wait and see. There are a couple more obstacles to get in the way before any true romance, but maybe ... maybe ... soon ... you never know! Thanks about the \'The Perfects\' thing, too ... I just thought \"What would be a really tacky, yet still believable name ...?\" and there it was!

Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 05/22/07 Title: Chapter 13: That Freezing, Stressful, Traumatic, Ridiculously Distressing, Happy Time Of Year

Once again, another super duper amazing chapter! I didn't remember the centuar, by the way. But I have a bad memory, and that was ages ago! I don't want this story to finish! It's so good! When are James and Lily gonna get together, anyway? They better! *jumps around crazily* Anyway, do you wanna see how much I love this story? I actually use punctuation in the reviews! Shock, horror! Update soon! How many more chapters?

Author's Response: Two more chapters I\'m afraid ... oh, how time has flown by! If you look back at Chapter two there should be a mention of our dear Hallead being a bit of a wuss ... and as for Lily and James ... well, keep your eyes peeled! Congratulations on the punctuation by the way! Hi, punctuation! It\'s nice to see you!

Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 05/03/07 Title: Chapter 12: I Do Something Stupid. No One Is Surprised.

AAAGGGHHH! That is the best chapter yet. So sad ... but very well written. I thought I knew what would happen, I was screaming along with Lily's conscience, but then BAM. So unexpected. Poor Iola and James! I send them both virtual hugs. OK, I know I can't, but it's been a long day.

Author's Response: Iola and James feel your virtual hugs anyway, I\'m sure they\'re very grateful! Yeah, okay, it\'s been a long day for me as well. I\'m glad you liked this chapter! I wasn\'t sure how it would be received, but it\'s all going well so far!

Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 08/22/07 Title: Chapter 15: There's A Difference Between Love And L.O.V.E

I just re-read the last chapter of this story, because I love it so much! Lily and James! SQUEE!
Anyway, I definitely will be nominating this story for a few awards in the QsQs. If anyone deserves one, it will be you.

Author's Response: Oh my cod! REALLY? You\'re kidding! That\'s so ... that\'s unbelievable! Thank you so much, that\'s really, really great of you! =D I\'m so excited that someone loves this so much!

The Girl's Revenge by x_lily_evans_x

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
In James's and Lily's third year, James's and Sirius's plan to throw a sparkler into Snape's cauldron goes wrong when Slughorn comes by, delaying their plan and causing the sparkler to become dangerously shorter. In desperation, Sirius throws it into a certain redhead's cauldron. When the redhead thinks that it's James, she comes after him in fury.
James had better watch his back... because she plays by the rules.
Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 03/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot fic

that was good, but a bit weird how lily gets points for pulling a prank on James.

Author's Response: lol (: well, I made use of the point that Dumbledore might be senile...

Teacups are the Nemesis of Small Furry Animals by InkandPaper

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: During the first scene in HBP, Fudge turned a teacup into a gerbil, and the Prime Minister 'gave the gerbil to his delighted niece'. Here is the tale of the girl Annabel, and the rather unfortunate gerbil named Teacup...it's canon!
Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 10/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Of Gerbils and Other Tasty Things

This was very funny! Light-hearted and sweet. Even from the small bit written of the muggle Prime Minister in HBP, you managed to make him sound very canon.

I loved Annabel's character. Very brat-like and selfish, which is perfect for the Prime Ministers daughter.

It was written in a different style to most fics, and I really liked it. The short sentences and the way you made it sound as if you were telling it out loud was great.

Excellent work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for this wonderful review! I can\'t believe I only just found it - over 6 months late! Shows how much I visit this account, lol.\r\nAnyway, I\'m glad you like the characters! Yes, it\'s a different style to anything else I\'ve ever done, too, so I\'m glad it worked.\r\nThanks HEAPS again! :D :D

Taken by Amelia Bedelia

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily felt her heart jump into her throat. In fact, all she heard was her heart beating steadily throughout her body. ...Any minute, James Potter is going to walk through that door and sit down. At my table. By me...
Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 01/31/07 Title: Chapter 1: Taken

ooohhh! sequel! sequel! it was so good!

Up To Speed by Amelia Bedelia

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily and James used to be best friends, hanging out in their neighborhood with each other. But once they were accepted into Hogwarts, they went their separate ways - James, the popular prankster, and Lily, the know-it-all bystander. But will their past be able to bring them back together?
Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 02/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Up To Speed

oh that was so good! especially the end! it made me laugh! i love ALL your stories, you're one of my favourite authors. this one is probably my favourite!

Funeral For a Friend by Amelia Bedelia

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A tragic accident occurs in Lily's life, causing her to turn to the only friend she has left.
Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Funeral For a Friend

that was really good. u should definitely do a sequel!

The Epic Tale of the Hogwarts Food-fight by Gin_Drinka

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."

After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...

"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"
Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 09/28/07 Title: Chapter 2: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people

Yay! I love Sirius! Poor Sophie ...
I love Lilys criticisms of McGonagall and Dumbledore. I literally started laughing. This is so funny! The best bit: Lily Evans: Queen of Cool. Nice.

Author's Response: Yeah, I love Sirius too...who doesn\'t? Lol, thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 10/22/07 Title: Chapter 10: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

Well, I decided to be lazy and not review every chapter like I said I would. They're all great, though. :)

I loved this chapter! It was short and pretty calm, but I think you needed a break after everything that's been happening in this fic. I loved the ending.

Good job!

Author's Response: Gee, thanks for all the reviews. Don\'t be silly, it is no obligation of yours to review my chapters. I\'m very glad that you do though, lol. Thanks!

Reviewer: jenny b Signed
Date: 09/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: First detention...87 more to go...

This is an amazing story so far! I found this in the Hufflepuff library on the forums, and the title caught me. I'm a sucker for Lily/James. *sighs*
I love your characterization of Lily. She seems nice, yet slightly evil. That's the way I've always thought of her.
I don't like Terry, but that's only because I love James and hate all of Lily's boyfriends before him.
Good job! I'll get around to reading the other chapters soon.

Author's Response: Wow, turns out posting in there really did payoff! I\'m so glad you\'re liking this. I never really liked that stereotype image of Lily, so I morphed her into something a little more sinister. Lol, anyway, I\'m glad she doesn\'t scare you.