Summary: This is a very short one-shot about what happens next… Small dialogue between Sirius and Lily. Tell me what you think about it!
that was so good! poor lily...it made me cry!
Summary: I guess I should write AU… Anyway, this is how I would like the last chapter of Book Seven to be… What do you say?
I laughed so hard! It was really good, but it's hard to imagine the series ending like that! I loved it, anyway. But why was Snape in their house? (*shudders*)
Summary: Angsty, very angsty, I admit it. 15-year-old Sirius is tired of the constant physical and verbal abuses he has to endure from his family and decides to end it all. But someone shows him just how very mistaken he was in wanting to do so.
That was really sad. I love James! He saved Sirius! Your grandma said it right, by the way. That's gonna be my new motto! ;-)
Summary: A typical LilyJames story, but with few twists. Lily is a Marauder and is best friends with James. If you are looking for pink hair-dye, Truth or Dare and revenge on evil Slytherins, then this is the story for you!
that was really funny! I hope Sirius and Candace get together! please?
Summary: James Potter usually accepts dares without batting an eyelash. However, this time, while he’s on a dare, he's also on a personal mission. But first, he’s anxiously waiting for Lily to turn up. What does Lily have to do with this dare? And what will she say when she finds out?
Before you start commenting that the dare was unromantic, please please read the 2nd sentence of the 4th paragraph. I clearly state that "James was steeling himself to do SOMETHING HE WANTED TO DO VERY MUCH EVEN WITHOUT BEING DARED TO". In other words, the dare was the catalyst, not the cause. It only served to spur him into action; it didn't give him the intention of doing what he did (I'm trying not to give out spoilers here, so read to find out what - though you can probably guess ;)).
ohhhhh... that was beautiful! i loved it!
Summary: Professor Sprout has just given 7th year Gryffindors a new project, where the class, divided in pairs, has to raise a rare plant. What’s gonna happen when Lily finds out who her partner is? And how will she survive in his sole company?
Oh, I loved this chapter! Poor Harry...if only he knew he was named after a plant!
Summary: Harry, Ron, and Hermione make a trip to Godric's Hollow to visit the Potters' graves. There, Harry speaks to his parents for the first time, and in so doing, discovers that the dead are never truly lost. (One-shot. Bring your kleenex.)
I cried. A lot.
Congratulations on getting runner-up in the QsQs. You really deserve it! This sotry was wonderful, and definitely one of the best fics I've ever read. Harrys emotions were captured so well that I can't even describe how wonderful you did it.
Summary: Oh, Harry. How different his life could have been. My own life, too. But Voldemort chose me, so I must carry the burden; not Harry. I only wonder how much it would change him, if he happened to be me. The one with the wizarding world counting on them. The one with the bad past. That's not Harry Potter, but me, Neville Longbottom.
Neville reflects on what has come to be, and what could have been.
"It's kind of fun to do the impossible." -- Walt Disney
This was really good!
I love how you've made Neville lose his innocence with the burden that's been placed upon him. Neville is usually portrayed in fanfiction as a bit of an idiot, which I think is mostly due to the characterisation of him in the movies.
You've captured Neville's feelings about Harry really well, because I think even in canon he really seems to respect him and look up to him.
Harry's opinion on how he is very lucky is very IC for Harry, because as Dumbledore always says to him, he is one in a million to not be tempted by anything and to stay on the right path.
Finally, I like how Neville's grandmother is so proud of him. It reminded me of when they were on the train in HBP, how Neville says she'd do anything to have Harry as a grandson. You really did it justice.
An excellent story!
Summary: The story of the wonderful life of Sirius Black told by the one and only, Sirius Black!
CHAPTER 5 SUBMITTED!
Ok, i know my vote is late but...JAMES! im sorry sirius, but you can still be number two. You are no competition for JAMES POTTER!!!! hot...
Summary: This is my version of how Lily tells James she's pregnant. Filled with fluff and originality.
Oh my god! That was so sweet, especially the end! I was smiling like crazy. I loved James's reaction! Great way to tell him!
"I CALL GODFATHER!"
That got me laughing. So Sirius-like! and 'Hurricane Lily'. that's a good one. once again, great fic!
Summary: As Lily and James enter their last year at Hogwarts, many hidden feelings emerge. But when tragedy strikes, will Lily ever be able to tell James her true feelings? Or will it be too late?
Reviews are greatly appreciated. There's an e-cookie in it for you. ;D
oh my god i do wanna hug him! that was so sweet!
Author's Response: =) Thanks, the new chapter should be sent in by this Saturday.
ooooohhh!!! nice chappie! i don't think I've reviewed this story before, but it's really good. But the whole James/Lily, Sirius/Arielle and Remus/Nicole thing was a bit cliquey. It was so obvious. I still like your story though, I'm a sucker for romance fics, especially Lily/James ones. All in all, I love it!
Author's Response: When I first started this story, I didn\'t really know where I was going with it so I just started some things going to get the story moving along. That\'s pretty much the only reason for the Sirius/Arielle and Remus/Nicole thing; sorry about that. =P Anywho, I\'m just happy you liked it! Thanks for reviewing. :-)
Summary: Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs join old Moony at the Hospital Wing the morning after the last full moon. Sirius plays the Grim; Remus loses another girlfriend because of his problem, and the four friends stay together when rejection comes their way. This is my first HP fanfic.
This was really sweet. You really showed how the majority of the wizarding world would despise Remus because of his condition. I agree with you how we mostly see the types of girls who somehow manage to get over the fact he's a werewolf, and fall in love with him.
Only one person can do that, and it's Tonks. =)
This was amazingly well-written for English not beng your native language!
I loved Sirius' and James' argument. You characterized them so well, and it was a cute finish to a story that was otherwise a bit darker.
A wonderful story!
The Amazing and Adaptable, Quick and Accurate, Handy-Dandy Spell-Check Quill by Vindictus Viridian
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Ron has made a most exceptional purchase at his brothers' new shop.
that was good..but it got a bit long winded in the middle. I love your take on Snape though, never really thought of him in that way!
Summary: James Potter had always secretly loved Lily Evans, from the very first day he met her. But she has shown him nothing on her part but contempt. She calls him arrogant, cruel... Then one night everything changes. James asks Lily to go with him to the Yule Ball at Hogwarts, and to the surprise of both — she accepts, telling him, "Not that this is anything permanent." But the magic of Christmas Eve brings with it a few surprises of its own...
This fic shows what brought these two very different people together, who built a life with each other and who, in the end, unknowingly helped determine the fate of the entire Wizarding world.
That was really good! I thought I might read one of your stories, seeing as your'e betaing mine! At the end where the marauders were talking to James about his kiss, it reminded me of Harry after he kissed Cho. Hmm. Coincidental? Anyway, that was brilliant!
Author's Response: Almost done, Jennifer!!! I\'ll get the chapter back to you sometime today, I promise... Anyway, I\'m glad you like the story! Yes, quite a few people have told me that the kiss and afterward reminded them of the Harry/Cho thing, although I didn\'t try to do that! I really thought I was making up my own story... :\'( Ah well, that\'s the price an author must pay when writing fanfiction, I guess. Thanks for the review, Jennifer!!!
Summary: A compilation of the most commonly used Harry Potter clichés in the fandom. Features Angsty!Harry, Sweet!Draco, Head Dorms, sudden romances in the forms of Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny and of course, Draco/Hermione, because what's a cliché without them?
The Marauders also make an appearance in this fic, including Lily/Lily's best friend/Lily's other best friend.
Warning: mention of hippopotamuses inside.
Chapter Five is up! The story is done. Also, thank you to everyone who nominated this neatly tied bundle of ridiculousness in the QQ awards, I really appreciate it!
that was pretty funny...but a bit weird!
Summary: Three meetings, two people, one place. The girl and the boy, together and apart. Nothing lasts forever, but at least she remembers when it felt like eternity, when the days were soft, the nights of dark and their love, forever [Lily/James AU]
Nominee for Best Alternate Universe in the Quicksilver Quills!
that was beautiful! I loved it!
Summary: SEQUEL OF LESSONS: After successfully completing their Herbology project, Lily finds out from her ex-partner James Potter that the two of them have been paired together to work on a new Potions assignment as well. How will Lily react when she realises that after having spent one whole month in James’s company yet another four weeks await her with the same task? And, moreover, will they be able to finish this assignment with out killing each other first?
ooooohhh! this is getting interesting! keep up the good work!
Summary: Sirius has finally realised he has feelings for a certain girl... but since he can't share these considerations with James, who is he going to turn to for advice?
is there going to be a sequel? that was heaps good!
Summary: Lily makes a slip-of-the-tongue that causes James to wonder.
oohhh! that gave me shivers at the end! i wish james was real (*drools*) i loved it!
Author's Response: WHAT? Are you saying he\'s NOT real?! *faints*