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Penname: Fellytone [Contact]
Real name: K
Member Since: 02/12/05
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I love the Marauders... Peter.. stinks.. I am sorry but he killed my favorite people. I am friends with CassandraTrelawney so check out her works... Umm.. I am 17 and british... I have a wonderful fiance, Matthew, but we aren't getting married until 2009. Um, I love ballet, gymnastics, and rock music... okay.. thats about it...
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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published: 12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Fellytone Signed
Date: 02/14/05 Title: None

Your story is really good. There was one sentence that I didn't quite get, but keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks K!!

 
Reviewer: Fellytone Signed
Date: 02/14/05 Title: None

This chapter I liked the best. Lupin was a good choice for Harry's god-father. Lupin knows his stuff. I have one suggestion though, try and mae Dumbledore sound more whimsical. More like an older Trelawney. He's suppose to give riddles for answers, and answers that make you think. You have him talking to Harry like you would to a friend. Goo job!

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