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I am a huge Harry Potter fan and appreciate the numerous talented people who put their time and effort into writing the wonderful fan fiction stories. I just submitted my first fanfic, "Harry Potter and the Reflection of Darkness". Please read and review if you have the time.
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Ginny's Love by The Marauder
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 412]

Summary: After Sirius' death Harry is in his own private world of misery, but with Ginny's love and a plan to bring together his best friends, he is brought back to reality with much more than he expected...

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 21905 Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/01/05 Updated: 08/14/05


Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 04/01/05 Title: Chapter 9: A Long Morning

I love that Hermione and Ron knew Harry and Ginny would come to the Room of Requirement - and the anticipation of their impending "talk" is killing me! I hope you post again soon!

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 04/01/05 Title: Chapter 9: A Long Morning

I love that Hermione and Ron knew Harry and Ginny would come to the Room of Requirement - and the anticipation of their impending "talk" is killing me! I hope you post again soon!

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 03/19/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Letter

I just found your story and I truly enjoyed the first chapter. It wasn't rushed and the emotions of the characters were well written. My only criticism is that you have a tendency to write run-on sentences.

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 03/19/05 Title: Chapter 2: Whatever it takes

Really well done! I love that you are giving different points of view and the fact that this story isn't rushed at all. I am a huge H/G shipper (R/H too!) and I like that the relationship is not rushing forward. Too many other fan fics have Harry and Ginny getting together and jumping right into bed with each other. I like the pace you are giving this story.

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 03/19/05 Title: Chapter 3: The Morning After

I enjoy the different points of view, but I don't think you have to do it after every scene because it can get confusing sometimes. Since the books are from Harry's point of view, I'd say stick mostly with that and put in an occasional point of view from someone else. In defence of muggle.net, I read a lot of fan fiction and I think it's good to actually have a site that relies upon mods. Yes, it can get irritating to have someone critique your work, but style it as important as content. You can be a brilliant writer, but if your story is laden with spelling errors and bad punctuation, it really detracts from the story. This is the case on a lot of the other fan fic sites. It may be hard to have the mods reject your story, but rejection is part of life and in the end it only makes you stronger. You have a great story here and I am enjoying it immensely.

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 03/19/05 Title: Chapter 4: Secret Refuge Part 1

You are definitely getting better with each chapter. I loved the awkwardness between Harry and Ginny when they were so close together - and very glad they didn't jump right into snogging! Sometimes the anticipation makes it all the better.

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 03/19/05 Title: Chapter 5: Secret Refuge Part II

Each chapter seems to be better than the previous one. The overlap between the two points of view is much better and I like that Sirius had some interaction with Ginny prior to passing away.

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 03/19/05 Title: Chapter 6: The Prank

Getting better and better! I'm glad Ron and Hermione get together - all they needed was a push in the right direction.

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 03/19/05 Title: Chapter 7: Behind the Door

That cliffie was nothing short of EVIL!!! This chapter was so good and I love the obstacles Ron and Hermione have to go through. That took a lot of imagination on your part. Please post the next chapter soon!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 03/20/05 Title: Chapter 8: The Third Task

We all knew it was coming, but I think you did a great job of adding so much realism to their first kiss. You could just feel how awkward the situation was when they had to admit their feelings for each other. I can;t wait for Harry and Ginny to do the same. Keep up the good work!

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 05/05/05 Title: Chapter 12: Written in the Stars

I absolutely love this story and I have goosebumps after reading the end. I love that you referred to Harry and Ginny as the-boy-who-lived and the-girl-who-saved-him. It's a truly brilliant story and so well written. I hope you will write more in the future.

 

Summary: Based off a Mugglenet editorial, where the scenario that author presented seemed to make sense and I just, saw it like this, I guess. Don't pay attention to my crappy summary, the story is much better. Rated PG-13 out of general caution, nothing specific... **UPDATE- SIX IS UP!!! Please check out the A/N at the end of six...btw, six is my fave chapter so far!! Love ya!!

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 9041 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/01/05 Updated: 03/17/05


Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 02/20/05 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1

This was an excellent beginning chapter and I look forward to reading the next one.

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 02/20/05 Title: Chapter 2: Ch 2

Really well written. I'm off to read the next chapter....

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 02/20/05 Title: Chapter 3: Ch 3

Another great chapter, but this can't be the end! I hope you continue the story - it's too good to just end it here.

 

Summary: Harry's in his sixth year at Hogwarts and he's having a hard time dealing with everything on his own. He needs someone to share his feelings with...someone other than his best friends. But does the person he like like him too?

Over 10,000 reads so far! Thank you everyone!

***CHAPTER 10 is up...last chapter!



Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 15039 Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/09/05 Updated: 03/10/05


Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 03/10/05 Title: Chapter 10: Now or Never

Very good story and I hope you decide to write the one-shot about the wedding. My only words of caution are to be careful of the difference between words like "threw" vs. "through" and "weather" vs. "whether". They aren't glaring errors, but they do detract from an otherwise very enjoyable story. I look forward to the sequel.

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 03/06/05 Title: Chapter 9: The End of Darkness

This was a very emotional chapter, but a good one. I like the fact that Ginny waited around for Harry to wake up - it reaffirms her faith in him and her loyalty.

Author's Response: If Ginny didn't believe in Harry, then i dont think he would ever wake up. I'm submitting the next chapter tomorrow so keep your eyes open!

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 02/22/05 Title: Chapter 8: It's All Coming Back to Me Now

I thought this chapter was good, but a bit confusing in spots.

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 02/19/05 Title: Chapter 1: Back At School

I just discovered your story and the first chapter is very interesting - I love the cliffhanger at the end.

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 02/19/05 Title: Chapter 2: All I Want Is You

Short chapter, but you are keeping my interest. It was a bit confusing about the mirror at first because it was smashed in book five. One word of caution - watch your punctuation. I hate to be picky, but it detracts from the story.

 
Reviewer: Czarina Signed
Date: 02/19/05 Title: Chapter 3: Temptations

I'm a bit confused. The chapter opens up and it is morning, but when Ron and Hermione talk in the common room, she gets in a huff and says she's going off to bed. The next sentence has Ron going down to breakfast and Hermione's there with him. Other than this it was a good chapter and I'll keep reading.

 
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