A kiss is not just a kiss. After a disastrous Valentine's date with Cho, Harry finds himself alone with Luna and discovers what a kiss should be. Humour and Romance in a story that started with canon and went What If?
Awwww, that was really cute! Nothing like a good, fluffy romance to spice up what happened in canon! You did a great job with this! I think I'm going to go find another Character/Luna fic now! Thanks!
Author's Response: I have Luna paired with Wesley Roberts, (inspired by Westley, the farmboy who becomes the dashing Dread Pirate Roberts in the Princess Bride) in A Tale of Two Matchmakers if you don\'t mind D/G and have time to read a 50 chapter epic! :D
Awww, that was so cute! Very well written, you didn't end up making half the story explination, as some might, but provided just enough clues to give the story a lot of meaning. Great job and good luck writing more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was in quite the Christmas mood when I wrote this, as I recall.
That was really good! You portrayed Luna perfectly, and in the end, it all made perfect sense. Great job! Good luck writing more!
I think Luna is a bit more of a go-with-the-flow kind of girl who probably wouldn't think a lot of this, but if she was less of a kind, easy-going person, I could easily see her thinking this kind of thing. A tad OCC for Luna, but very inspirational and moving, none the less. :)
Olympe looked into Hagrid's eyes hoping he would confess his love...not call her a half-giant! After storming off, romantic frustration leads her to Hagrid's hut, where she sees beneath the unfashionable suit, and he sees past a French facade.
Wow, that was one giant romance for a one-shot, but you made it perfect! You're amazing at writing romance, even some that's a little out there. Great job and good luck writing more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought Luna and Harry would make a great couple until he let Ginny\'s dancing hair sway his affections, lol.
Author's Response: I just realized that I was thinking of your Kissing Harry review and that you were referring to that pairing, not Hagrid and Olympe, LOL. Giants in love are \"out there\" literally, I suppose, heh.
Very nice descriptions!
... something inside Andromeda broke a little and it hurt...
That was my favorite part of the story, I've never heard that description of an emotion! I may just be culturally deprived, but I thought it was very original!
I really liked your characterization of Andromeda, authors like to bend her character every which way to get her to fit their plot, but your's was very character-dominated if I'm not mistaken, and Andromeda, in the spotlight, was written very nicely.
Very good job, and good luck writing more!
That was cute! I love Molly/Aurthur stories, they're usually very sweet, just like this one! Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you liked it.
*Laughs* *A lot*
That was really good! I loved BRUCE. Although, he should be a bit more Gary-Stu, if that's what your trying to make him. Although, I don't want to ruin the happy and giggly mood reading this story has put me in.
One last thing, how did BRUCE get Johnny Depp's cheekbones(. In a jar.)? Did BRUCE sever off the sides of his face while he was sleeping? Does BRUCE just have a picture of The Cheekbones in the jar? Why didn't tabloids from all over the world have a photo of Johnny Depp without cheekbones on the cover?
*Is too doing her homework right now*
*Is a member of the Cute-little-star-thingies-that-you-put-around-things that-you-are-doing Overuse Association*
Author's Response: How did I not respond to this review? *Whaps self upside the head in a suspiciously Dobby-ish manner* BRUCE stole Depp\'s cheekbones via MAGICAL GORGEOUSNESS. (?) I\'m addicted to *asterisks* as well, by the way.
Awww, this was really good! I really liked how you explained that there was something behind Fleur's veela-ness through Bill's point of view. Her 'strength' fits perfectly into canon when we see Fleur in the end of HBP in the hospital wing. Great job with this story and I hope Bill and Fleur get a happily ever after in DH!
Author's Response: Thank you! I rather felt that Bill was too smart and has a bit too much common sense to fall for a girl with no personality. And I felt sorry for Fleur, because we really don\'t see much of said personality. I, too, am hoping that they will have a long and happy life together!
That was good! The ideas for each room where really creative! Great job! The only nit-picky thing I need to mention is that in the books, Fred and George are described as shorter and stocker. (Sorry for being so nit-picky, it was really a great story!)
Author's Response: Well, Fred was on the floor so George only looked tall. ;) And thank you for all of the compliments.
Haha! That was really good, just like all the ice cream in it! Good theory! I had a theory about Florean's capture, but it involved Snape as a cow Animagus and a dairy farmer named Joe....ummmm....yeah....Great story! Good luck writing more!
Author's Response: 0_0 I would read that story!
That was good! Bellatrix and Snape where very in character, which is hard to do sometimes, and overall, I really liked your story.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Awww, that was really good! It's nice to think that Dean's dad abandoned him for his own protection! Great job, and good luck writing more!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! =]
Awww, I always like a good Happy Together!Lucius/Narcissa story! Very good characterization, and I liked the point of view in the story. A lot of people would want to write about how Andromeda was fighting for what was right, muggleborn equality, but you wrote about how it affected two otherwise 'bad' people who also where in love. Which you wrote very well! Good job and good luck writing more!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I\'m in love with Narcissa, she\'s such a fun character to write and while I agree that Andromeda made a difficult choice, I wanted to explore what her choice meant for the family she left behind.
MAJOR SPOILERS A post-DH Fred and George fic.
It's been one year since the war ended and Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes is still going strong. That is, until Angelina shows up with news that her new boss is being blackmailed. Next thing, a mysterious package arrives on the doorstep, there's a spate of inexplicable burglaries in Diagon Alley, and an old friend appears to have come back from the deadů
This is a great story! I love Fred and George stories, and you managed to write one even when one of them is dead! Your writing style is very clear and Fred and George are very in character! Great job! I can't wait 'till the next chapter is up!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying it!
Aww, that was a very sweet Dursley story! You kept all of them very well in character too! You did a great job and good luck writing more!
Author's Response: I hadn\'t planned to write this, but the idea popped into my head a few days after reading DH and I couldn\'t shake it! I enjoyed writing it and managed to write it surprisingly quickly for me as well.
Wow, that was really good! I've never read a Canon!Draco story before, (Which kind of says something about the Harry Potter fandom, doesn't it?) nonetheless one as good as this one, and I really liked it! It doesn't display Draco as some 'dream guy' *Tries not to be sick* or even someone whose 'really a good person underneath all the snottiness, and that's just a cover up', but the real Draco. I'm really glad you didn't try to read between the lines or make things better then they seemed for Draco, and I really liked that!
I also loved the way your sentences flowed, and how everything seemed to make sense. Except for the last sentence, although it does show that he's glad he stuck with life just for his son's sake. There isn't any mention of him having suicidal thoughts before his wedding day, even though he seemed unhappy. That is my one and only nitpicky kind of complaint about your great story! Great job and good luck writing more!
Author's Response: I\'ve never written a canon!Draco story before this one. I\'m glad you like it for what it was - I never liked Drco as a \'dream\' guy or \'Slytherin Price\' o.0
It literally made me sick to my stomach to read that phrase ten-thousand times. I like the real Draco - flaws and all, and I felt he deserved some real redemption. This is one of the strongest pieces I\'ve written, so thank you for noticing. As for the suicide, that\'s true. That last sentence is a bit odd (even I\'ll admit that) but it seemed right to me. He didn\'t have suicidal thoughts in the story because I assumed it could be inferred but perhaps not.Lol. Thanks for your review!