Penname: bertiebott12 [Contact]
Real name: Claire
Member Since: 01/11/07
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Hello, readers and authors, alike,

Welcome to my authors page! I, for those of you who do not know me, and Claire. You might know me from the forums, of which I have been a member since April 2007.

I love to act and sing, and have taken the lead in a school musical. I am known around my high school as the "Harry Potter Expert", and writer. Gryffindor is my house on the boards( Toaster pride!).

I have one dog, but have had several fish that sadly expired.

I love musicals, though my favorite has to be either Guys and Dolls or the songs from Chicago. I am an utter Broadway drama queen, and my iPod is filled with showtunes. Any thoughts on musicals? PM me!

My favorite character in Harry Potter is Tom Riddle, though I do have a crush on Harry. My other favorites include, but are not limited to, Neville, Luna, Ginny, Sirius, Remus, and Lily.

I don't have an die-hard ships that I support, but have several that I favor.

But, my favorite have to be: Tom/Minerva, Remus/Tonks, Ron/Luna, Harry/Luna, Draco/Ginny, and Neville/Luna. As you can see, I love Luna related ships.

Favorite musicals: Guys and Dolls, The Drowsy Chaperone, Mary Poppins, Into the Woods, Chicago, A Wonderful Town, A Chorus Line, Peter Pan, and Annie Get Your Gun!

My favorite books: Harry Potter(obviously!), the Cherub series, the Twilight series, anything by Mary Higgins Clark, Sherlock Holmes, To Kill A Mockingbird, The Pearl, and the Bible.

My Favorite Singers/Bands: Daughtry, Queen, Mika, Maroon 5, Fall Out Boy, Taylor Swift, Nickelback, Black Eyed Peas, Kenny Chesney(*drool*), Bon Jovi

My stories:

I have since deleted all but one. If you would like to see it again, please email me.



I Don't Really Know What To Say: A one-shot about James talking to a Harry that hasn't come out of the womb quite yet. Thanks for al of the reviews!

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Facing Death-A poem about the veil in the Department of Mysteries.
Upcoming Fics:
Burning Hearts(J/L)

Deleted Fics:


Betrayal-I have decided to discontinue this fic after Deathly Hallows simpy because of lack of interest from myself and readers.

Can't Help Falling In Love With You-A one-shot in which Tonks falls in love with an unlikely person.

Who We Grow To Be-A Minerva McGonagall character study.


If you read, please leave constructive reviews! No flamming!

Thank you for making a visit to my author's page!

It's not right, not okay,
Say the words that you say,
Baby, we're better off this way,
It's better that we break,
Baby.

Maroon 5, Better That We Break

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The Forgotten Adventure by Naomi Evans
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 89]

Summary: Harry awakes in the middle of the night only to find that someone has kidnapped Ginny. After being transported from the Burrow into strange world that unfolds behind each door they find, Harry who is joined by Hermione and Ron, embark on a dangerous journey to save Ginny.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 35657 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Published:
12/10/04 Updated: 01/29/07


Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 01/20/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The Dream

WOW!! This so spooky! I love it, though.

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you like it!

 

Lightning by Flgirl4life
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: My first fan fiction! Actully, since this is a poem, it's not really a fic., but it still is my first. This is about Harry the day his parents died. 64 reads! Warning! This is a one-shot!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 259 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/18/05 Updated: 02/18/05


Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 03/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Night

This was great! It depicted the night perfectly!

 

Summary:

Laura has been a good friend to Percy for seven years. She took his side during a fight between Percy and Oliver their second year. She accepted Percy the way he was, something most of his brothers couldn't even do. And when the one brother who did understand Percy died, Laura was there to help Percy through it, even though the death hurt her greatly as well.



Yes, Laura has been a good friend to Percy. So why, during their seventh year, is Percy allowing his friend to be lonely and miserable?



A fellow Gryffindor decides to try to ease Laura's loneliness by interfering in her life. The result is that Laura must suddenly deal with new relationships, including an unlikely reconciliation with Oliver.



Laura succeeded in being a good friend when she only had one friend. Now she must learn how to be a good friend to several people... including herself. Oliver/OC

Complete!

"Thy friendship oft has made my heart to ache; do be my enemy - for friendship's sake." -William Blake



Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 142992 Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/21/05 Updated: 01/21/07


Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 01/26/07 Title: Chapter 2: The Truth is but a Vision

I was a little confused. Who was Dan? How did he die? How do Wood and Dan no each other? Why did LAura and Dan have a fight? Wouldn't Wood and Percy be graduated by then? If Harry is in his fourth year? I was way confused. Good writing though. Please answer my reviews if u dont mind. :)

Author's Response: Dan is Percy\'s older brother. He and Laura never had a substantive fight (they bickered sometimes). The disagreement was between Percy and Oliver, and Laura took Percy\'s side. It\'s good that you\'re asking those other questions about Dan. I usually put important information in dialogue. This made it so that readers only know things when Laura is ready to talk about them. Sometimes, that was probably a mistake on my part. Most of the time, I think it works all right. You\'ll find out soon how Dan died. The majority of the fic is set in Harry\'s third year. That\'s why there\'s no mention of the Triwizard Tournament or that stuff. There are vague references to Sirius and other Book 3 happenings. (Not so vague references to Quidditch, of course.) The first couple chapters are vague. Answers are on the way. :) Thanks for the feedback, bertiebott12!

Author's Response: Sorry. I lost the line breaks in that.

 
Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 01/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Loneliness and Sympathy

That was great! I usually don't read romance OC's, but u have inspired me 2 do so! The story is on my favs list

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

 

Summary: *One-Shot* Lily Potter is in her last year of Hogwarts. She has 5 brothers and sisters. Her mum Ginny, and her father...the ever famous, Harry Potter. But what happens when all she wants is one more dance?

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2578 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/08/05 Updated: 05/15/05


Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 12/24/08 Title: Chapter 1: To Dance Again

Aw man, this made tears come into my eyes. This is one of my mom's favorite songs. Wow, this was incredible. Great job.

 

The Story of Me by OverObsessed
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: A poem about Sirius. Enjoy. Disclaimer: I don't own any of the HP characters. (It's so sad I think I'm going to cry.)

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 410 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
04/30/05 Updated: 06/20/05


Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 03/21/07 Title: Chapter 1: Sirius

You should put up Hermione's first. Readers would get more interested because we don't know her story before Hogwarts. Good job!

 

Summary: This story is about Harry's struggle...his struggle to obey his mind when his heart is screaming out in protest .

It's about Ginny's secrets, her aching heart, and where her loyalty lies.
Mainly, this story is about friends, those you can trust and those who can't trust you.

Reviews are fun and easy! So don't shy away from stating your opinion...trust me, it feeds the fire so I'm not left out in the cold! ;)

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 100265 Chapters: 44 Completed: No
Published:
05/23/05 Updated: 07/10/07


Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Which Witch is Which?

This is one of the best fics I've ever read! Dudley and Mafalda were hysterical!

Author's Response: Aren\'t they? They are sooooo coming back (wayyyyy later chapters) everyone keep a look out!

 
Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Some Things are Relative

YOU ARE THE BEST AUTHOR EVER! Adding Ginny in was great!

Author's Response: Thank you *blushes* Ginny had to be there! Of course Harry is crushin on her...as long as she doens\'t know ;)

 
Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Airing the Dirty Laundry

This was just plain fantastic. You just don't know how much so.

Author's Response: Thank you! They enjoyed themselves and Harry finally let himself be vulnerable with Ginny...and it felt nice!

 

Tragedies by TTOOMMYY11
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 127]

Summary: Seventh year has begun and Hermione Granger has found herself in great danger. What is the secret behind Voldemort's sudden change in targets, and what dangers lie in store for the trio? Riddled with plot twists and cliffhangers--the Potter Universe is in for a surprise. (This story is Pre-HBP)

The Final Chapter of Tragedies is up!



Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death

Word count: 43673 Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/28/05 Updated: 04/28/07


Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 02/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Glimpse of the Future

This was good!

Author's Response: Thanks!! =]

 
Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 02/06/07 Title: Chapter 2: The Six Stones of Berfulema

GREAT CLIFFHANGER!!

Author's Response: ;] Ty =] Theres a cliffie after every chapter...;]

 
Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 02/06/07 Title: Chapter 3: Flesh, Blood, Air, and Water

Volsemort seems so weak and powerless.

Author's Response: Dunno if this is good or bad :P But Thankks? ;D

 
Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 02/06/07 Title: Chapter 4: A Funeral For a Loved One

Whoh!! LILY!! JAMES!! Come back!

Author's Response: They may...Or they may not =O

 
Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 02/07/07 Title: Chapter 6: The Secret Room

This was good! I llike it, though not as much as the other chapters. :)

Author's Response: Haha. Yeah. Same :P I Had major writers block when I was writing this chapter =P

 

Barbie Girl by CraftySlytherin
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 244]

Summary: It's just your average, boring Summer day on Privet Drive. Or is it? Harry is stuck doing another one of his many thankless chores, when he hears something VERY interesting coming from Dudley's room and goes to investigate.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1780 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/31/05 Updated: 05/31/05


Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 10/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Hi!

This was a really good humor fic! It stood out to me when I went to choose one for my Hunt on the forums, one, for the title. It was very appealing, and you know that it would be funny, because of the "interesting" song. Also, your summary really made me want to read it, so I couldn't resist. Another, was the # of reviews. So many people like it, so that was another great point!

The way you wrote Harry was really magnificent. He is such a complex character, that you wonder how he would react in certain situations, like this one. When he was at the Dursley's in the summer, I assume, I think he really would be tickled. Great observation!

Your detail was great, which can sometimes not be found in a humor fic. A lot of time, it is just silly mess with no writing. You are obviously a good writer, and can twist a plot line and characters to do what you want.

The only thing I could nitpick was that I would put more introduction into the main humor point. The beginning seemed a tad rushed, but not a huge deal.

Overall, great job, and I hope to see more of your work in the future!

*Claire*

 

Take My Heart Away by Hatusu
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 959]

Summary: Past Featured Story Hermione goes back in time with one mission: to kill Tom Riddle before he ever comes to power. A difficult task, correct? An impossible one, she realizes, as a love between them grows stronger than anything she has ever known. Now Hermione has a choice to make. Will she condemn the Wizarding world to almost certain destruction, or will she take the life of the one boy she has ever loved?

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 39417 Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/27/05 Updated: 12/17/06


Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 11/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: The End

Wow, so powerful. You connect with the reader so well, in your words and phrasing. From what you have said, you wrote all of this, and then submitted? So few authors do that, but it seems to attract readers to yourfic. Great planning! On to the next chapter!

*Claire*

 
Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 11/19/07 Title: Chapter 19: The Beginning

*bawls* That was amazing, most definitely the best thing I have EVER read. *cries* I, wow, I just don't know what to say. I am crying over here. Wow, that was so powerful, and I am going to email this to my friends, and everyone. Wow. Just plain wow. *tear*

 

The Start of an Endless Journey by muggledude
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Based on the poem, “The Fly Is In” by Shel Silverstein. A short, but lovely poem starting from Harry’s first year to his 6th year. Warning: MAJOR spoilers!!!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 202 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/10/05 Updated: 09/10/05


Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 02/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

I loved it!

 

To Catch a Horcrux by CraftySlytherin
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: True to their word, Ron and Hermione accompany Harry on his quest to destroy the Horcruxes of Lord Voldemort. In the tiny Irish village of Knockmarn Glen, they search for the golden cup of Helga Hufflepuff. Will they be able to get the Horcrux? What dangers lie in wait for them?

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3281 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/18/05 Updated: 09/18/05


Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 02/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

THis ws amazing!! GREAT JOB!!

 

Summary: Warthogs is the reverse of Hogwarts. Everybody's personality is the contrary to in the books. It is a "humour fic" (If I even dare call myself funny) that tells the tale of the Final Battle. I wrote this because I was sick of writing depressing stories about unrequited love and death. It makes a light change to the rest of my collection.



Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 3723 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/16/05 Updated: 10/16/05


Reviewer: bertiebott12 Signed
Date: 04/24/08 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Hello Laura! I know that I have chosen to review a story that you had not recommended, but it looked too good to pass up, frankly. It was something that I never expected you to write. :)

Anyways, I was immediatly drawn in to the story. One, because it was very interesting to see a humour story that wasn't actually found in the humour category. Two, because this one was actually quite funny, and OOC-ness jumped in at all of the right moments for me. Right when you think that the humour has died down, there comes another hilarious incident. I am not normally big on non-subtle humour, but you maneuvered the characters and settings so well, that I couldn't dislike it.

Your attention to detail was ashtonishing, and it is obvious that you put a lot of research behind this. There were several moments where, if you were reading quickly, you wouldn't even notice what you have flipped upside-down. The more obvious things, such as the houses and Snape's characterization were still funny, and one funny thing didn't overwhelm your one-shot. I was shocked at some of the surprises early on, and then quickly caught on to what you were trying to show.

I couldn't catch many errors that haven't already been pointed out, actually. Your flow was wonderful, and you didn't focus on the same thing the whole time. You added in your personality and detail to your writing, and I could tell it was you speaking, and that you put so much time and creativity into this.

In the moonlight it was a magnificent sight -- a worn out van from the 60's, flamboyantly painted with flower pattern and emanating toxic fumes from its exhaust. The radio inside was blasting out Yellow Submarine, croaking and struggling to perform at such a high volume, but the Life Spurters compensated for this with their own merry version.

Your 80's references were my favorite part, and my eyes started to water I was laughing so hard. I could vividly picture a new, 60's side of Snape in my head, and Beatles music blaring out of studios during the final battle. I loved the irony in that Snape started the final battle, and that the theme was the 60's. You transformed it wonderfully into something bright, hilarious, and ironic.

I had never realized, or even imagined, that you would write humour, but you proved me wrong here. You not only wrote humour, but you actually made me laugh. I would continue to pursue this, along with your other writings, and you could grow to become a famed humour writer on MNFF. Great job!

 
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