Well, I don't know what to say. I'm in Australia. I'm 24 and I like the world of Harry Potter, obviously. Some stuff about me:
Fave HP Category:
Mystery. Good Mystery. Though my faves say otherwise. Hmm...
Fave HP Book:
Prisoner of Azkaban, though book 4 is a close second.
Fave HP Character/s:
I like reading about minor HP characters that could or have had serious moral dilemmas (or questionable allegiances... or are just mean sometimes heh):
- Regulus Black ---> Example: Fragmentary
- Minerva McGonagall ---> Example: Along Came Riddle
- Theodore Nott ---> Example: Control The Wind
- Tom Riddle (young) ---> Example: Riddle's War and Example: Take My Heart Away
- Barty Crouch Jr. ---> Example: Roses And Thorns
I have read some really interesting fics and I liked the way some of the characters were portrayed together, especially where they were in character:
- Percy/Pansy (seriously)
Stories In Progress:
I have a few stories in progress, but sticking to a story for more than 5 chapters is, I admit, a challenge. Nevertheless I'm really getting into one of my stories - a murder mystery. So for now I'm just writing chapter 4 for it and tying some plot twists around. Hopefully I'll be submitting soon :)
Wonderfully written. I like how you describe the surroundings though I feel like some places weren't important enough to be given much attention. And this is where the pace slows a bit. It takes time to pick up pace, which I think is why some people may be reluctant to read it. I myself felt a little drained at some parts. Though I like the story and you give the characters depth. And you've left us with a cliffhanger!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I know it is a bit heavy, but trust me, everything deserved the attention it got :) So, I hope you\'ll like the next chapter as well! Stay tuned...
It sounds interesting so far. Keep at it and don't stop writing. Nice cliffhanger! ;) But you have many spelling and grammar mistakes. Ask a beta to help you, okay? Good luck!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I\'ll try and fix my errors as soon as possible, and thanks for letting me know i have some!
I can't believe I haven't reviewed this. I think this is the best chapter yet. The way you describe the surroundings and the suspense is great. I find it really interesting that just because they're wizards doesn't mean they can use magic since it might be traced. Tou've left us with a cliffhanger! Gah! Looking forward to next chapter.
Hmm interesting. Though I don't think Voldemort would bother asking Dumbledore for help. But anyway, very well written as always :)
Author's Response: Well, I don\'t think Voldemort would bother telling his followers all about his true intentions. ;)
Great chapter! Like the idea of the power behind Ravenclaw's wand. That was very clever. Also the Chirro's background; that was very startling. Great work :)
Aha! Voldemort's true colours are beginning to show. I wonder how Jonah takes it. Voldemort will be keeping an eye on him, won't he? Now that Jonah has seen his master kill.
Wow he's playing a really dangerous game, isn't he? Once again, very nicely written, great description. Also, very good dialog, even though there isn't a lot of that. Nice descriptions as always. I greatly enjoyed it! :)
oooh, yes I thought he figured that out. I've only just read this; didn't have time earlier. But this was a good chapter; as always very well written :)
Very interesting. I like how you describe his journey, both geografical and emotional journey. Hmm... though I still don't see where Jonah's deep loyalty for Voldemort comes from. Also, I don't think he has enough hattered for Muggles (and love for his pure-blood family) to be in Voldemort's circle. He seems lost, following his master but not yet having certain beliefs that constitute today's Death Eater. I take it Voldemort first strengthens their loyalty to him, and then tries to convince them of his beliefs. But anyway, very good chapter. I go forth and wait for the next one!
Author's Response: well, more people than you have commented on this, but what they all seem to miss out on is that Voldemort is being NICE to Jonah. He\'s not asking Jonah to kill or maim, and this is the fifties. Stealing from Muggles might not seem like such a big deal for a pure-blood. Jonah is not a traditional death-eater per se. He is not with Voldemort to wipe out Muggles, and that is the case with Zutala, Chirro and McKinnon as well.
Interesting. Definitely didn't expect that. Every chapter leaves me on the edge lol. It's so hard to guess if Jonah will survive or not in the end. This story definitely has a lot of suspense. :)
this sounds original. I wonder what will happen next. I enjoyed reading the first chapter and I do hope you'll update. I can't find anything wrong with it!
Author's Response: I certainly will, the entire story is already written. All I need to wait for is that they unlock again so I can post the following chapters.
Author's Response: Oh, and thank you very much! :)
Oh Zutala has been underestimated! Hmm this is very interesting. I enjoyed how you described the scenery. Even though Jonah could do magic, he really couldn't out of fear someone would detect it and find him. Interesting. Oh I like how this is unfolding!
Author's Response: I am very glad you like it, and I appriciate you for being the only one who reads and reviews this story. thank you.
Wow! He killed himself. That is sure to change Jonah. Nicely written. I enjoyed reading it. :)
There's this kind of strained suspense (that's the best way I can explain it) in this chapter. It's done so subtly. Very good character work and, as always, wonderfully written.
Eeek! There's no paragraphs!
Author's Response: Sorry about that. The paragraphing on this page drives me nuts. its edited now though.
Goodness! This is a beautiful oneshot! Wow! I don't know what else to say. I could imagine the whole scene, and Tom's thoughts flowed; they made sense. This Is just wonderful!
Author's Response: Hi loligo8me! (Great name btw!) Ah, you don\'t know how much you have relieved me! I was starting to have my doubts (it always happen to me when one of my stories has just been approved). But your very kinds words are very much appreciated :) Thank you for reviewing!
Wow, beautifully written.
Author's Response: Thank you!
I haven't seen an update in ages and I'm still hoping you'll update one day. This story is cute! So it's got a lot of AU, so what? I want more... pretty please? With sugar on top?
Very, very interesting. And wonderfully written too.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review.
This is really interesting! I love how you sprinkle the clues around. It's a real mystery/crime story. And it just keeps getting more and more interesting. Do update soon. I'll be following this one!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. The sprinkling of the clues is a factor that is very important to me, so I\'m happy you think it\'s being done well. I\'m still working on the third chapter, so it\'ll be at least a week. Thanks for the review.