Well, I don't know what to say. I'm in Australia. I'm 24 and I like the world of Harry Potter, obviously. Some stuff about me:
Fave HP Category:
Mystery. Good Mystery. Though my faves say otherwise. Hmm...
Fave HP Book:
Prisoner of Azkaban, though book 4 is a close second.
Fave HP Character/s:
I like reading about minor HP characters that could or have had serious moral dilemmas (or questionable allegiances... or are just mean sometimes heh):
- Regulus Black ---> Example: Fragmentary
- Minerva McGonagall ---> Example: Along Came Riddle
- Theodore Nott ---> Example: Control The Wind
- Tom Riddle (young) ---> Example: Riddle's War and Example: Take My Heart Away
- Barty Crouch Jr. ---> Example: Roses And Thorns
I have read some really interesting fics and I liked the way some of the characters were portrayed together, especially where they were in character:
- Percy/Pansy (seriously)
Stories In Progress:
I have a few stories in progress, but sticking to a story for more than 5 chapters is, I admit, a challenge. Nevertheless I'm really getting into one of my stories - a murder mystery. So for now I'm just writing chapter 4 for it and tying some plot twists around. Hopefully I'll be submitting soon :)
"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”
“No,” Sirius said simply.
“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”
The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP
*sigh* Who wouldn't want friends like these?
Oh good! Very long but I enjoyed it. If either Halle or Katy die in the end, I'd be really sad.... ...well eventually I'd recover ofcourse.... ...but for maybe the 1st few minutes, yeah, I'd be really sad. Looking forward to next chap.
Summary: Remus Lupin has not always had an easy or a happy life, but now after resigning from a job he loved and enjoyed, he's forced to once again sulk on his lonely and bitter existence. Wallowing in his self-pity, Remus ventures into the Hog's Head, only to meet a erudite woman that may just help to disrupt the monotony his life has become. Remus/OC, Post-POA.
Wow, you write so well. It's like the story floats, slowly uravelling... Its really beautifully written. UPDATE!
Beautiful! You wouldn't need to continue! I love the way you portray Sirius. The way you write makes it really easy to warm up to all the characters, and really easy to read. I've suggested this story to some friends because it's so damn sweet!! :)
he he! Very good! Your style of writting is rare. You're really good at communicating the scenes. Just make sure you don't keep changing from past to present tense (and vice versa). Looking forward to reading next chapter! he he!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanx for reading and for the ultra nice review! I will keep the past and present tence in check as I dod do that without realising but luckly my beta puts me back on track. Thanx again.
Wow! You have talent! It's an original idea and I enjoyed reading it. There's one thing you should be careful of, though. Verbose. When you're writing a fast-paced scene, don't use long and complex words. It's the simplest ones that hit readers hardest. And make sure your paragraphs are smaller. That way the reader can rest and reflect on what was just said. Again, it was really well written, well detailed. You obviously put your heart into it and it's SO payed of! Obviously! Keep going :)
Summary: said “Uh, umm, uh, Hagrid? Have the chickens been acting a little weird lately?”... “Well, I think some have been using the VCR.” More witty humour than palpable jokes, this is a 1,800 word story about, well, Tommy Boy - The Amazing Dancing Chicken! Rated PG-13 because, unless you are some amazing prodigy, you probably won't get the jokes if you're younger than that.
hehe! That was really weird! Definitely an original idea!
You're really good at describing the right details but at some parts I'd get lost because things are being revealed really quickly. Make sure you don't jump between slow and detailed, to fast-paced too quickly. You construct your sentences really, really well and I like the way you write about the trio esp. Ron! Keep at it!
Author's Response: I'll remember the tip. Thanks!
Author's Response: I'll remember the tip. Thanks!
Summary: Holy cream-filled cadaver! Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Az-No-Fans! is what God meant to create when he slipped, took a nosedive and accidentally created what we call earth. Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Az-No-Fans is the perfect world in which we were all meant to live. It is perfection. READ IT OR FOREVER REMAIN IMPERFECT.
... :o What da...? I...I don't know... lol nothing is sacred in this... ok all that barfing was pretty discusting... but...funny...weird, creepy funny... I think... yes... yes...
Summary: Harry writes a love note to one person...but someone else recieves it and gets the wrong idea. From here, confusion and chaos come about. Who is really sending the notes? Who really likes who? What is going on?!
oh it's hilarious! and original too!! Keep going!
Author's Response: Glad you think so!
Really liked it. Whoa, it was confusing! lol
Author's Response: Confusing? Quite. Glad you liked it though!
Oh do continue! I wanna know what happens next!
Summary: During their third year at Hogwarts, Harry plays with Hermione's time turner and accidentally brings him, Hermione and Ron back to when Hogwarts was founded. The newly founded Hogwarts is even more confusing than present day Hogwarts. Includes some very intense betting and a highly competitive eating contest.
I'm reviewing! lol. It's really weird, the whole thing... I read all the chaps, had loads of laughs so thanks for making it so..well great! :)
he he he! *fits of laughter* he he HE!!! ha ha! *slowly subsiding*...... *snort* he HE HE oh....hell....man... I so needed that! Looking forward 2 next chap.
Author's Response: haha, good thing I submitted it!
this is a fantastic story!! I enjoy reading it very much! Going straight to my faves!!
Summary: In this sweet one-shot, Lily receives a note from James one night, and finally admits to herself and to him her true feelings...
Even when you rumple your hair.
I hate that I’ve come to expect,
That life without you I can’t bear.
(Inspired by Kat's poem in 10 Things I Hate About You )
Oh Beautiful!!! Nice and short and sweet and deep!
Summary: Based on Lupin's transformations into a werewolf and the horror that he must endure at every full moon.
Warning: PG-13 because it might not be suitable for some.
*A Shakespearean-style sonnet*
Oh, me like! Me like very much!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading my poem! You're so kind! This day just keeps getting better and better!
Summary: For the rest of the Ministry, the interdepartmental challenge was merely a failed attempt to restore trust between workers. But for Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger, it was the catalyst for an unexpected relationship built on passionate letters, concealed identities, and secret meetings – and the beginning of an end that neither of them could ever have imagined possible, not even in their wildest dreams.
Post-war. Based somewhat on the story of the Phantom of the Opera. Also contains R/Hr, so don't read if you can't stomach that ship.
Status: Complete. Thanks for reading, everyone!
I don't usually read Hermione/Draco fics but here I made an exception and... wow. So good. Really enjoyed reading it and ...*drum roll*... I like the ending!
Summary: Harry, Ron and Hermione survived the Final Battle with Voldemort and now work for the Ministry of Magic. Emotionally scarred, they are living their lives to the best of their abilities. Now, a new threat rears its ugly head. Lord Malfoy. This time they have a new friend to help in the battle between good and evil. Just like JKR, I start light and end up dark... lots of humor, intrigue and romance in between. This is a delightful romp through the Potterverse. Enjoy the ride! (Written Pre HBP)
wow, just finished reading it all. It started off really well. Really like your writing and I could not stop reading. But I found it kinda MS when she started learning everything so quickly and... she's pretty, she already knows how to apparate, she can fly, she's powerful, she has a bit of all kind of blood, she can already perform a patronus, she's friends with the trio, she's rich, smart, kind, graceful and Harry likes her. I'm sorry, it seems as if I didn't enjoy it, but I really did. And I will keep on reading it because it's still very interesting and beautifully written! Original setting and really good knowledge of canon... I just wish she wasn't so darn perfect! lol :)
Author's Response: Well, yeah...pretty/rich/powerful, but surely not perfect. Remember, Ron taught her how to apparate; she can't fly and is pretty bad on a broom; Harry had some difficulty teaching her 'Patronus'; and she is going to learn some very hard lessons coming up. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Summary: NOTE: CHAPTER 19 IS COMPLETE; CHAPTER 20 HAS BEEN STARTED!
It is Hermione Granger's seventh and final year at Hogwarts. When she and Draco Malfoy are together more often than either would like, Hermione asks herself: "Can a leopard change its spots?", as Draco wonders: "Will any sort of relationship with Granger be bad for my health...?"
I've been following this story and just love it! Very nicely written. Great character development. I think it should stay in the romance section, definitely. It's really good that you include other characters but still stick to Hermione and Draco being the main characters. 10 from me!
Really liked this chap. Also liked how it ended, because I guess Draco sees Hermione differently and he hopes that she sees a bit more of how he's changed, so he's upset when she apparently still thinks he's a kid. Really liked that, you put more depth to his character. UPDATE!!!