I'm 21, living in London and have been a HP fan since I was 18.
I loved the new song, it was exactly how it should be.
That was incredibly well written. I actually cried at the last, when Harry saw Ginny. Very moving and touching.
Are you J.K.?! Excellently written, really heartwarming.
lovely and lighthearted but deep and moving also.
Very moving, I think Harry is captured perfectly, the way he feels and acts as he tells everyone the truth.
Such an excellent chapter, I loved the dark twist at the end, very unexpected.
I never thought I'd be sad if anything happened to the Dursley's. So well written.
As for the Patronus forms I think Ron's should be a lion, remembering the scene in POA where they were eating the funky candy! Ginny should be a cat, There are various references to her curling in a chair like a cat. Also it fits, Ron is her older bigger, prtecting brother, so he should be a large feline, while Ginny is smaller, for feminine and delicate but fierce, so an ordinary cat seems right.
Once again excellent. i love how the story turned on the endge of a knife from light-hearted to dramatic. I love Dark Bombs!
So very heart-felt. I loved Ron and Harry's induction.
That was such an awesome chapter, I almost cried when I read about the cut on Ginny's forehead! Keep it coming!
I love the first chapter, very intriguing, and definitely an original idea. Can't wait for the future chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks... you won't have to wait very long, I already submitted chapter 2. :D If the Mods are in a good mood it will be up in a few days. :D The plot of the story is complex, even from the very beginning... I think it's just going to get better.