Hi, my name is Deni. I'm a MAD Potter fan, I spend about 3 hours at least on this site a day, just reading stories (except when I have homework....which is basically always....EVIL TEACHERS!). I particually enjoy reading the James/Lily romance stories - well, basically, they're the only thing I ever read. If you want, just email me at firstname.lastname@example.org
Summary: *How far would you go for love?* "If you touch her again, I'll kill you." "Go ahead for I'll come to her again and again." *Is it worth it?* "James leave her alone, she's no good for you." "Don't say a word against Lily!" *Will it last?* "It's forever, I've known it sice the day I met you." "Forever is a long time." "Not if you love someone..." I am finally re-editing this story, please take a look and see all the new stuff!
I think that you are a very good author to write about something like that. I have read all of the story and I love it!
All's fair in love and war
Lily thinks herself too clever to fall for James Potters charm. Yet, as the two of them are appointed Head Boy and Girl, will Lily regret her negative feelings towards James? Pre-HBP
"Remus was glancing quickly over his Defense homework while Lily and James were playing around. He was tickling her while she was desperately trying to reach his hair; his weak spot" For some strange, strange reason, that is my favourite quote. :) Although I did like "Operation Semonster Successful!" :)
"“Wow, he speaks Squid?” Arielle asked. “I wish I could speak Squid.” “All hail Sirius Black,” all the girls chanted. They were inside a small, broom closet with very little space for anything. They did however have a huge, blown up picture of Sirius Black. They had ordered huge Sirius blow up dolls but they didn’t fit in the closet. “I envy you, Mackenzie,” Mary said. “Sirius Black is totally in love with you.” “I know,” Mac said, forgetting her resentful feelings. “He talked to a squid for me!” All the girls squealed in triumph." OMG, I just took a sip of water and spat it out all over the keyboard when I read some of the things Sirius said in this chapter!
Whoa....whoa. You are....EVIL. Very, very evil...but funny! :) HURRY UP AND LET HER SUBMIT HER CHAPTER, MUGGLENET PEOPLE! I'm dying! Oh...oops....*Hides Sirius Black crossword* Errr.....ignore that:)
QUOTE: “Do I look like I’m in the mood, Wormtail?” Sirius snapped. “Um, yes?” Peter guessed. “Go away,” Sirius ordered. Peter did so, walking down the stairs. “Uncompassionate rat,” Sirius muttered. Awww....I feel so sad for everyone!! I just realised that it was updated! YAY!! Now, update it again!! I NEED GOOFINESS!!
Oh my god!! I just realised that you updated, I read the chapter, and now I'm crying my eyes out!! I loved the way you had all those flash-backs, and then that letter at the end! *sob* Please, update soon!!
QUOTE: "Any objections?” “A few,” Remus said. “Any other objections?” Sirius asked, raising his voice more. “Are you sure this is sane?” Lily questioned. “Alright then, if there are no objections, we will proceed,” Sirius said.
TeeHee.....funny!! And I know what's going to happen next, cause I read your story on fanficton.net! teehee...I LOVE THIS STORY!!
Author's Response: everyone, please don't go to that site and read ahead. I want some people to stick it out here. Thanks!
OMG, that was HILARIUS!!! I was cracking up, and my little 8 year old brother is like 'What? Whats so funny? Teeellll MEEEEE!!!' OMG, that was so funny, I'm almost crying!
I'm dying of laughter here! QUOTE: '“Have you looked at your legs lately Cavewoman?” Arielle asked. Immediately, everyone’s eyes turned to look at Sirius’s legs. They were covered in hair. Sirius looked at Remus’s and found that his were silky smooth. He gritted his teeth in anger. Of course he got to be the girl with all the problems while Remus got to be perfect. He had all the luck. “What’s wrong with them?” Sirius asked. “Well, unless you’re planning to braid them, I would suggest shaving,” Mac said. She pulled out a razor and some shaving cream.' TeeHeee.....have fun sirius!:D
This keeps getting better and better!! Keep going! I've been giving you a 10 all the time!
Whoa....never thought I'd see the day when James would push away Lily Evans....but I'm still enjoying it!:D
I really like this! I reckon you do Sirius' character really well, too. :D
Wow, you are an awesome writer! I love everything about this story, and that chapter was so sweet, and you wrote it really well.
This deserves more then a ten, but as I can't do that....10!
I had to review before I read the next chapter but I love it! I really like the way you fit everything in - the relationships, and now going to Miami.....dun dun dunnn....:D *10*
"He cupped her face in his hands and brought his lips to hers. And there, they had one of their first real kisses, alone on the beach when the sun was setting. As Sirius would say, ‘How sweet, but totally clichéd’.Actually, he would most likely say something along the lines of,'Addy babe, that could be you and me'. Yet, nothing really mattered to them at that moment other than being themselves." So sweet, and I love all the way you fit Sirius in! :D
ARGH!! EVIL VOLDEMORT!! No faveourite quotes.....to evil....still good, though!
"He heard footsteps approach and he looked at the doorway. He saw her; her angelic face and long auburn hair. The emeralds were staring into his own hazel ones and he saw guilt for the first time in weeks." Awwww......so sweet! You have a way with writing which I'm really jealous of, so keep up the good work! I'm loving it!
Awww.....I don't have any quotes! It's all so cute! I can't wait to read more!
Addison mumbled something that James didn’t hear, but apparently Sirius did. “I’ll kill her. I’ll kill her with my own bloody two hands,” he said angrily. Hehee.....I like the 'relationship' between Bella and Sirius. Not that pleasent....EVIL BELLA! KILLED SNUFFLES!