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A Butterfly's Wings by pen11
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: A late night meeting between the two Black brothers will affect the outcome of the war in ways neither of them intend. One-shot.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1421 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/05/06 Updated: 04/05/06


Reviewer: enchantedsleeper Signed
Date: 07/29/11 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

Awww, excellent writing, truly heart-rending. :( "Do what you have to do little brother, but then you come back." BUT HE DIDN'T *bawls eyes out*

Author's Response: I know! I wish Sirius could have found out what his brother tried to do in the end.

 

Not a Maybe Thing by HoneydukesAddict
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 126]

Summary: Lily knew that James was nothing but trouble. He was rude, conceited, and indifferent to anyone that wasn't in his group of friends. She had known him to be that way for six long years.

But their seventh year comes, and Lily slowly begins to see that he is no longer the boy he was. Now Lily sees herself more clearly, and she isn't sure she likes what she sees.

This is the almost-forgotten story of Lily and James's romance, and what they went through to become the heroes that were Harry Potter's parents.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 15567 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Published:
10/22/06 Updated: 10/29/07


Reviewer: enchantedsleeper Signed
Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Oooh, dun dun duuun! Shouldn't Remus have been wearing the Invisibility Cloak, though, if he looked so bad? At least one of them should have been wearing it...

Your story has some pretty big spaces in between the paragraphs. Is it meant to be like that? Because it messes up the flow a little. It's odd, since I have a friend whose story was rejected on the grounds that the spaces in it were too big...

Author's Response: Remus didn\'t think anyone would be up to see him that early, and he could always just make an excuse if he ran into someone. He just had trouble lying to Lily. Also, the other Marauders needed the cloak the most to get back because what they had been doing was illegal. Yeah, it made big spaces when I uploaded it from the file. Now I just copy and paste, and in later chapters the gaps between paragraphs aren\'t as big. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: enchantedsleeper Signed
Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Oooh, dun dun duuun! Shouldn't Remus have been wearing the Invisibility Cloak, though, if he looked so bad? At least one of them should have been wearing it...

Your story has some pretty big spaces in between the paragraphs. Is it meant to be like that? Because it messes up the flow a little. It's odd, since I have a friend whose story was rejected on the grounds that the spaces in it were too big...

 
Reviewer: enchantedsleeper Signed
Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Lmao! That last comment by Sirius made me burst out laughing XD Thankfully there's no-one around or they'd know I've gone mad!

 

Whose Buttock Is It Anyway? by remus R us
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 24]

Summary: The Order meeting is rife with speculation about the identity of the ‘one-buttock’ wonder, leading to some surprising disclosures. Starring Remus, Tonks and Sirius, supported ably by other Order members, risqué dialogues and bad-arse jokes.


Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4395 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/11/07 Updated: 07/19/07


Reviewer: enchantedsleeper Signed
Date: 08/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Very funny =D I have to say that I can't believe it of Kingsley to come up with a prank or indeed to behave at all the way he did in this fic, and others seemed somewhat OOC as well... but regardless, I loved the interaction between Tonks and Lupin at the end, and also your use of Mundungus' "I 'gree with Sirius" comment.

Author's Response: Dungie\'s words seemed to fit the fic. I think for a good dose of humour, a good dose of exaggeration is necessary, right?

 

31 July, 1980. by whitefur
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: This one shot is about the fateful day when Harry was born. Seen through Remus Lupin’s eyes, it details out the events that had happened on the day, events that had repercussions felt through years, and through several individual lives.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 4783 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/22/09 Updated: 05/23/09


Reviewer: enchantedsleeper Signed
Date: 07/29/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Good and the Bad.

I certainly did enjoy it :D Great writing and a lovely heartwarming ending :3 Hooray for baby Harry. :D

 

A Day in the Life by Luna_Lover
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: A glimpse into the everyday lives of your favourite Marauders. In which Peter is not Sirius' mummy, James daydreams of lunch, and Remus just honestly can't stand his ex-girlfriend. I am LilyLunaPotter of Hufflepuff, and this is my final for MWPP class Autumn 2009.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 2187 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/20/09 Updated: 12/22/09


Reviewer: enchantedsleeper Signed
Date: 07/29/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:D This is the first fanfic I've read on Mugglenet which I've liked enough to add to my favourites. Your characterisation of everyone was absolutely spot-on. I especially liked how you wrote Peter as being more than just a pathetic hanger-on, a Marauder with equal status and sense of humour to the other three. I also like that you wrote Lupin as not quite the goody-goody people think he is XD The image of him pouting at Mary is especially cute. I can't help but wonder what Sirius put in his trunk! XD Also, trust Lily to figure out exactly what would stop the Marauders pranking her. She is the best :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Finding this when randomly logging back into my account after more than a year's absence was a nice surprise :) I learned these characterization skills from taking a class on the Marauders on the beta forums - I would definitely recommend the beta forum classes, if they still exist. Thanks again! ~ LiLu

 

A Black Family Christmas by Gmariam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Past Featured Story

Sirius Black spends his last Christmas at Grimmauld Place.

This is Gmariam of Ravenclaw writing for the Great Hall Christmas Challenge, Prompt One.



Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 4292 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/15/10 Updated: 12/15/10


Reviewer: enchantedsleeper Signed
Date: 07/29/11 Title: Chapter 1: A Black Family Christmas

Excellent fic!! Perfectly characterised, great writing, and well in keeping with canon :D I particularly liked the way you wrote Regulus - he and Sirius obviously don't hate each other's guts, but they're on two very different sides of a coin. It's interesting to read his words in terms of how his perspective on "My own personal thoughts don't matter" changed over time. :3

Author's Response: A belated thank you for the review! I'm so glad you enjoyed the Blacks in this story. Thank you for reading and reviewing! ~Gina :)

 

Like Father, Like Son by Ethan_May
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: We all know the story of the famous Harry Potter, the conqueror of the Dark Lord. But now, his son James Sirius Potter is at Hogwarts, and trying his best to follow in his father's trouble-making footsteps. The story begins on Christmas day at Hogwarts in James' fourth year, as he unwraps a rather strange Christmas gift, and a whole new world of mischief making is open to him...

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Pottermore Spoilers

Word count: 1407 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
03/26/14 Updated: 03/30/14


Reviewer: enchantedsleeper Signed
Date: 07/17/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Use It Well

Great story! I loved your characterisation of the three Potter children and especially the way that Albus acts differently around his siblings compared to with everyone else - very believable. I would love to read more about James' adventures with the invisibility cloak! It's a shame that he can't share its existence with his siblings, though, because I'm sure they would love to huddle under it together. Didn't Albus inherit the Marauder's Map? It would have been cool if Harry had sent a special "troublemaking" present for each of them, though I'm not sure what Lily would have got... Maybe a Weasley heirloom? A Weasley's Wizarding Wheeze, courtesy of Ron and George? Ah well, my headcanon is running away with itself as usual. Thanks for writing!

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