SSxHG -- one shot--Pre-HBP
Wow! That was a great one-shot, the best I've ever read! I like the cliffhanger-ish ending. And Hermione's character in this one-shot is brilliant. It's like she wants him, but she doesn't. :) Anyway, keep it up with the great stories!
WOW. This is literally the BEST Hermione/Severus fanfiction I've EVER read! I like how you took 2 nights and turned it into 11 chapters. (I think it was 2 nights?) But Severus seemed like himself in this fic. In the other ones, he seems to lovey-dovey and romantic. xD
But anyway, it was great! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you!
This chapter was FULL of surprises. And I cannot believe Snape and Hermione were caught. xD
And if Snape is dead Im going to roast your behind! No im kidding. :]
This story is a work of art; I love it and I find only one error, but its mostly an opinion.
After Hermione and Snape confessed their true love and desire for eachother, they warmed up to eachother like, REALLY quickly. I mean it had been like a day and a half and they were already having cute little lover's quarrels. ^_^
Im not complaining, its cute and made me lol a few times, but it be a lot more realistic if it had been awkward for a bit longer, seeing as their personalities are completely opposite of eachother.
Nonetheless, you are a brilliant writer and I cant wait until the next chapter comes out. :]
Author's Response: lool, you totally picked out like the one thing that i myself am uncomfortable about in the story! i know they fell in quickly, but i only had a day to squeeze in some cuteness, and i just felt like everyone deserved a little ss/hg lovin xD i tried to insert a little \"they started off awkward and shy, but soon fell into...\" etc. oh well xD glad you liked it! thanks for reading!
And can you give me the link to the story "The Buried Life"?
Im itching to read it. :]]
Author's Response: if you search on FF.net, it should come right up :D
Really great! I love this one-shot. I also love the song Lacrymosa by Evanescence
Author's Response: Thanks!
It was... interesting. :] But the whole format thing was annoying. :\
:O Forget my last review. :] I wrote it like halfway through the story. No, now I love it. ^^