Just wanna let you know the 'to' should be 'too'.... :) good luck getting your story validated. :D
wow. your story is just, wow. violent thing hermione and draco got going on, but still sexy. and poor ron, do they get together? and snape gay? who woulda thought...lol im addin u to my faves and i await updates. :)
Summary: A poem about the prophecy made in book 5 and again it has to do with the Harry/Voldemort plot.
very nice, you capture harry's inner struggle very well =) *10!* also i was wondering if you could help me. see i can't figure out how to format the html to make the lines of a poem appear one right under the other (the < br > thing doesn't ever seem to work for me...) how do you do it? if you get the chance email me at maraudernumber5@mugglenet. thanks for the help ~*Ashley*~
Summary: Lupin returns to Grimmauld Place after the events of the night before at the Ministry of Magic. Sirius/Lupin romance, but not ridiculously so.
this is so so sad, and extremely well written. you describe everything so perfectly, it really captures lupin's feelings. well done!
Author's Response: thank you so much. please keep reading!
seriously this is one of my fave slash fics ever. i was never a fan of draco at all until i read this story, and i love this ship! it's so hot *melt* you're an excellent writer, please update soon
Summary: This is my version of what happened the night that Lily and James Potter died, and Lord Voldemort was defeated.
*tear* so sad, and you don't draw it out, which probably makes it even more sad because that's how it probably happened- short and swift. great chapter, plz update soon
Author's Response: Thanks soo much for your review. I felt so sad writing about the death of James and Lily, but I thought it would be a good first story for fanfic. I'm glad you liked it, but that's how it finishes. Thanks again.
aw a toddler harry! i agree though, this makes me hate the dursleys so much more than i already do. mrs. figg is very sweet, too. good job :)
Author's Response: Thanx.
Summary: “They’re alive, you know,” said Luna. “The stars. You can tell, if you know them well enough. They’re full of emotion. Like that one—” she took an arm from behind her head and pointed at some faraway star, “—is quite unhappy tonight.”
that's just adorable. You've got Luna down perfectly. Wish you would continue this fic.
holy wow this story is FABULOUS! i love the flashback scenes. you've got everyone so in character, and i love how you get into draco's mind! 10! ps- i'll be emailing you...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading through the whole story tonight...I appreciate it!!! Your awesome and I look forward to your email....Thanks again!!!
aw why can't draco just be nice to her? eventually i'm sure he'll start to slip though. yay for madame pomfrey! i like this chapter, although i do miss the flashbacks lol. glad you updated, 10!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm sure the next chapter will be better..since I now have someone to read and check them for me!!!:D
Summary: *one-shot* If Ron won't make a move of his own, then what is Hermione to do? A manipulating girl's mind at work on New Year's Eve. Hermione a bit OOC, but not too much. Please R&R.
aww that's so cute! i love the countdown. excellent story, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Wow. I'm glad you liked it! This is one of my first fanfiction, and it is still one of my favorites.
oh wow i like it. i like it a lot. i added ur story to my faves...i await updates!!!
Summary: Just a random funny poem that's bound to raise a laugh in even the darkest of hearts.
cute! that makes me laugh :)
wow i really love your story. this is the first angst fic i've read and i really like it. you characterize tom so well, and i like how you parallel him with harry. also the blood-licking thing was creepy but very captivating. i look forward to reading more, update soon :-)
Author's Response: thankies XD i'm very flattered indeed =D i was very amused while i wrote the blood-licking part... lol X3 to write about someone evil, you must think like an evil person =3
wow this is a great chapter, and i agree- he seems really grown up for an eleven year old. maybe that's what made him so bitter, no childhood. it's very believable. but i wonder, if grindelwald hadn't shown up, would tom have grown up liking *defense* of the dark arts, instead of using them? love love this story, please update soon!!!
Author's Response: lol thanks. he gives me the feeling of having no childhood at all :) thankies i'm very flattered indeed XD
i love how you portray tom's attitude in this chapter, he's such a manipulative little bastard... great way to set the stage for his future work :-) excellent chapter, update soon. 10!
Author's Response: thankies XD the next chapter is quite long though... =_=
Summary: (COMPLETE-- FINAL CHAPTER UP!!!) One day, everything changes. All it takes is for Harry to wake up, go through his daily routine, and bump into an unexpected person from his past... who tells him all the lies his friends and lover have been keeping from him. What then does Harry do--but try to live life as best he can?
my goodness i love this chapter- this is quite possibly the best fanfic i have ever read. im so glad harry finally talked to ron and hermione, although i understand how things can't ever be the same between them again. i love harry's relationship with teddy, it's so so cute. and i still don't like draco too much, for some reason i think he's only hanging around harry to benefit himself. i wish snape would just tell draco to leave them alone. please please please update soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: It's really awesome that you're enjoying this story so much, b/c I certainly didn't make it reader friendly. But then I'm not trying to make it commercial :). I'm trying to improve my writing skills and use device and see what works or not for my own novel. I'm glad you're anxious! And it's udpated. I just hope it doesn't take a week for the mugglenet staff to get it up like it did this time. As long as they don't reject it for... "tense usage" as they've done several times in the past... don't they get it's intentional?
well i don't think this story is slow, and i like all the "little things" you put in because i think it adds to the story. keep it up, and when is the last chapter going to be posted!?!?!
Author's Response: Well it's been sent to them for the last week or so.
FINALLY! the mods took long enough with this one--sheesh! but i'm confused, who is Harry with? is it draco or snape? or is that the whole point...? anyways, it was a great chapter and a fabulous end to your story. i really enjoyed it and am looking forward to the prequel.
Oh wow I love this chapter. Poor Harry, I feel really bad for him...He finally gets to talk to Severus and Severus just rejects him. It's kind of understandable, but still it's sad. I think Draco sounds very sincere, and he's being really good to Harry. I'm starting to like him a lot more now. As for the colors in the RofR, the really white walls remind me of 'the white light at the end of the tunnel' and the gray chairs seem like shadows or something. I'm probably way off, but when I read that paragraph I think of death. Either that or unpure people living in a pure world. (Can't you tell I'm not great with color symbolism?) I really really hope you update soon...I need to see what happens with Albus!