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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 06/23/07 Title: None

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! I am crazy about AD/MM and you made their first kiss, the fulfillment of their secret hopes, just right. Hope you won the contest.

 

Cat's Eye by Violet Phoenix
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: We all know the scene where Dumbledore arrives at Privet Drive to find a cat waiting for him. But what we do not know is what that cat, Minerva McGonagall, was thinking as she watched the Dursleys... One-shot, pre-Philosopher's Stone.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3368 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/04/05 Updated: 08/04/05


Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 06/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: Cat's Eye

Hmm...nicely drawn, and I like the flashback to the Basilisk's first strike. Many people do not know that both Minerva and Hagrid are contemporaries of Tom Riddle.
My one beef is that in SS/PS, Minerva reacts to Dumbledore's statement that Harry will have to live with the Dursleys with shock and disbelief: "Dumbledore, you can't!" You take the tack that she is present at the Dursleys precisely because she knows he is going to do this. (Though I admit that this is a better explanation of why she is there than the explanation of SS/PS which is, precisely, none.)

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 09/01/07 Title: None

Ooh, I love your characterization of Bella, a no-holds-barred sadist and sociopath. Then in walks Tom. Can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 09/01/07 Title: None

Wow--you have a way with words. I can feel the fear in the Malfoys and Blacks. And Bella--this explains a lot.

 
Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 09/01/07 Title: None

This gets worse and worse (that is, better and better.) Poor Andromeda. She does survive--doesn't she?

 

Summary: In the narration of Professor Minerva McGonagall. Enjoy.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1266 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/10/05 Updated: 09/10/05


Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 06/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: Bet You 20 Galleons - A Short Story

This was fun. You had me guessing throughout. And I like seeing a H.Hr fic for a change. Biut Minerva is, of course, my favorite, and you limned her perfectly.

 

A Call to Safety by Morwen
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: Now, Purebloods are arrogant, wealthy, self-assured, and able to do whatever they desire, due to their wealth and power. But a thousand years ago, that was not the case. Long ago, purebloods were set upon by those without magic, and had to fight for life itself. This is why one man fought. Written for the Ancestry Challenge by Morwen of Ravenclaw House, in which it took second.

Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1357 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/11/06 Updated: 02/11/06


Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 09/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Call to Safety

Nice job. It deserved an award. Very authentic, and I like the idea of it being in the mouth of a Malfoy ancestor. It helps me understand the pureblood slant.

Just one thing: watch your conjugation of the verb 'to have'. iIbelieve, though I'm no expert, that it's I, we, you (pl), and they *have*; thou hast, and only he, she, and it *hath.*

 

Late Bloomer by Just Tink
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 110]

Summary: Cassandra Pralent was your typical pureblood- rich, spoiled, and prepared to go to Hogwarts as soon as she turned eleven. But Professor McGonagall delivers horrible news- Cassandra is a Squib. When she is rejected at home and at school, she is forced to accept unlikely friends. And just when Cassandra feels life is getting better, her fate becomes entwined with that of the Trio in a most sinister fashion…

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 31672 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
03/29/06 Updated: 09/05/07


Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 03/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: My New Home?

Aw...this is so sad. I can't think why Cassandra's parents would do this to her. They must not know how bad it is. And I can see that McGonagall might think it's worth it to be at Hogwarts no matter what conditions you have to live in. The school is her life, after all.
You really make me feel Cassandra's loneliness and despair. And you describe the castle and Filch very well.


Author's Response: Like I said, you ain\'t seen nothing yet... glad you enjoyed it!

 
Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 03/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: Friendly Playmates

What tantalizing possibilities this chapter holds. I dare not guess who Professor Munch is--though I have my suspicions.

And the humor's great! (Cassandra's intention to scold the house elves about the food they've been feeding her and the Attack the Caretaker line to mention only two instances. )

Alta's a real stinker. I was as surprised as Cassandra that she ended up in Gryffindor--although I shouldn't be. All the Houses have had their share of miscreants over time. Gryffindor only looks so good because we always see it through Harry's eyes.

Author's Response: what tantalizing possibilities this reviewer holds! I think this was definetely one of my funnier chapters, though \'Execution Day\' is the funniest, in my opinion... thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 02/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: The News

How very like a sheltered ten year old! Cassandra's opinion changes every few minutes as she assiduously studies her parents' reactions. What will she do when she gets to school? And Filch is her mentor! This is going to be interesting.

Author's Response: yay, a new reader! Believe me, if you thought this was interesting.... well, enjoy the rest- thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 09/01/07 Title: Chapter 13: Happy Christmas, Cassandra

Aww--cute!

Author's Response: YAY! HUNDREDTH REVIEW FOR \'LATE BLOOMER\'! *confetti*

 
Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 09/01/07 Title: Chapter 14: There's Nothing Like Scrub for the Holidays

Hoorah, Cassandra's having some nice surprises for a change--though not the slugs--not nice. I like the way you portray the Trio from Cassandra's POV, though I'm sure she's misinterpreting Hermione's intentions when she loans her her cloak. Love that she has a crush on Ron. That boy just doesn't know how attractive he is, does he? I like the AU-ness too. Interesting to see what would have happened if they went back to Hogwarts that last year.

Author's Response: like I said, the crush is the little Jerri-insert into Cassandra. He IS extremely attractive. Glad you liked it!

 
Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 06/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: My New Home?

Awww... poor Cassandra. (Interesting name, that--the doom-sayer. Any relevance?

Author's Response: tell me about it... although the truth is that I just picked Cassandra\'s name because it sounded right.... whether it will turn out to have any signifigance is unknown. =)

 
Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 06/04/07 Title: Chapter 3: A Hogwarts Cinderella

Ooh, finally the big day. Can't wit for more.

Author's Response: thanks!

 
Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 06/04/07 Title: Chapter 5: Old Friends, New Enemies

Oh, no, Cassandra--don't do that. you need a friend--a nice, nonjudgmental friend like Sarah--oh boo hoooo--you dummy!

Author's Response: that basically sums up the entire chapter, doesn\'t it? Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 06/23/07 Title: Chapter 6: Lavatory Insanity

Ooh, plot thickens to a frothy goo! Werewolves and vampires, eh? And a teacher who gets no sleep.
BTW, I'm glad you are showing all the houses having equally nasty little nits in their membership. Gryffindor is not the 'good' house and Slytherin the 'evil 'one. Depending on how you look at it, Slytherins are shrewd and business like or ambitious and corrupt, Gryffindors daring and chivalrous or reckless and warlike, Hufflepuffs peaceloving or ineffectual and Ravenclaws intellectual or pedantic. It's a question of degree.

Author's Response: that\'s one of the main points I was trying to get across here, really- everyone has gits. thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 06/23/07 Title: Chapter 7: Execution Day

What a turnabout. and that vampire game--creepy. I love the name Professor **Munch**.

Author's Response: Professor Munch might be my favorite to write. thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 06/23/07 Title: Chapter 8: Little Library of Horrors

Wow. Never expected this particular turn of the screw.

Author's Response: you have no idea... thanks!

 
Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 06/23/07 Title: Chapter 9: S.P.I.T. For Short

Ah, now for the action. Love that Cassandra is falling for Ron, not Harry. But I must say, I felt a bit unprepared in last chapter when Hermione just accepted her word about the Hufflepuff cup. she's a cirtual stranger, after all. and to admit her into their deepest plot, as if they had known her for years? Doesn't quite fly. Maybe you should have prepared that ground a bit more thoroughly.

Author's Response: I just transferred my crush on ron over to Cassandra. =) As for the Hermione thing... I should go back and put more in that, but basically Hermione is looking at Cassandra as sort of a house elf right now, and that\'s blinding her. thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: spiderwort Signed
Date: 06/23/07 Title: Chapter 10: Badger Cups and Broomsticks

The meeting with Cassandra's parents is heartbreaking. I know her mother wanted to hug her, but hid behind her husband so as not to betray her feelings. So sad.

Author's Response: probably the saddest chapter in the story... thanks for the review!

 
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