I am 15 year old and I come from Lincolnshire. I have been reading *coughs obsessed with * Harry Potter since I was 7 or 8 and I think they are simply amazing and have loved them, like so many others, for all that time!!!!!!!!!! I have never really written a fan fic before but I have been addicted to this site since it began and have read soooooooo many I really thought I should write one too! I hope you enjoy it! yours the 5th marauder!
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I think it will be good that you're taking a break, when you do come back I am sure your stories will be all the better for it! I think your stories are brilliant and that you are a brilliant writer, please dont stop forever, your writing is of a too higher standard for you to allow that to happen! I hope that you continue to write even if you dont continue with this fic, please continue to write on the site! Thanks soooooo much for all the stuff you have written thus far, it has been amazing, your stories were some of the first I read on MNFF and they are what inspire me to continue doing so! Well Done, and thanks!:)
I found that well worth waiting for, I absolutely adore this fic, Harry character has developed so well, in a way which is characteristic due to the events of the story, I love the fact I can actually visualise Jo creating the same sort of character.
I absolutely loved the part with the party and the interaction between Harry/Ron/Hermione I thought that was quite funny. I loved the scowling which Ron was giving to Dean I thought that was amazingly IC. I think that Siobhan is acting very suspicious and although I love her as a character, I don't trust her one little bit! I think perhaps she has ulterior motives, mmm very suspcious, maybe she is some madly obsessed Harry Potter fan on the rampage for blood, muhahahaha, only joking, :) Can't wait for the next installment but don't go overboard on the work front getting it to us, this chapter evidently shows us your writing is worth the wait!
Author's Response: Ulterior motives? Of course! Siobhan's role was created before I even designated her a Slytherin - so you must realize there was a reason, eh?
I'll put to rest any worries that anyone has about her being out for his blood, though :p She's not violent. To Harry, that is.
Wow, another brilliant and fantastioc installment, I wonder what did work for Voldemort? hmmm... interesting question. I can't wait for the answer, which I kow as a wondefully kind author you are going to supply for us. i love reading your stories so many plots, so much information - it is great! I LOVED IT! keep writing and being just generally wonderful!
I really really liked this chapter, as with all your writing it was completely awe inspiring, I hope that we see more of the journals, it makes me think that there might be a time when Harry remembers other forms of communication, like with the mirrors, I can't wait for your next chapter, I hope it gets updated really really quickly, thanks for writing something as captivating as the JKR books, you have an astounding writing capability!!!!!!! go you!
Your story is the best, it is amazing you are like one of my favourite authors on mugglenet, I keep trying to review your chappie but i keep getting logged out etc, very annoying, I really think you should go into professional writing if you arent already!!!!!!!!!! JKR standard, go you!!!!!!!!!
I have just read the whole of your fic and I really like it, I think Neville gets a bit of harsh deal in the books, everyone assumes he is almost worthless, I think he has so much potential, I wish he had more confidence. You have him really in character, love it!!!!!! 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your review! I hope you liked that little cliffhanger... bwahaha. Chapter five is already written it's in the checking over period, so it shouldn't take too long... unless if it gets rejected a bajillion times. Thanks again! ~Eponine
I really like your story, it is somehow believable, even though Hermione (and I presume it is Hermione) doesn't remember who she is, she still acts like her natural self! well done please please please please UPDATE SOON
I loved this story, I am a dedicated reader of your fic
I dont know what happened to my review it cut a load of it out - hmm annoying anyway I guess I shall just have to write it again!
I loved this fic, I love all of your fics, I am a dedicated reader of the Daughter of Light and it was the first fic I ever read on fanfiction ever; if you hadnt been a brilliant writer then I would not have continued to read fanfic with a passion - so thanks!
Now about this fic, brilliant loved the original perspective that you portrayed, I loved the way you conveyed her emotions - she was very resolved which suited her down to a t. I can imagine JKR portraying her as you did - so I have to say there is no higher accolade! I am glad to see you are able to write fics which are more direct as well with less description, you have the ability to see when your ability at description is required and when it is more distracting from the real message of the fic - this is really good for you since it is very rare, I often read fics with too much description! Very Well Done! :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. With one-shots like this I think description is not always necessary. this was more about an old lady telling her tale and as such didn't need a lot of background imagery.
I think it is extremely kind you offering these songs to struggling writers, you should be really proud of yourself because they are really good well done!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm happy to know that you writers appreciate this ^_^
My goodness that was mazing I thought it was simply stupendous, I loved it. I have read The Long Road Home and Ginny's Gift and I think they are simply mazing I love them sincerely I do. I thought this chapter was good and the bit about what they want to do with their lives is very fitting - Merlin knows they all deserve a break! I can't wait for the upcoming chapters, I love your portrayal of the wedding and how it was chosen by Lily almost, I LOVED IT! Infinity/10
Author's Response: Thank you
Long Road Home and Ginny's Gift, are brilliant stories, and that you put me in the same catagory is really cool.
Yes, these characters do deserve a break. Being an Auror or Unspeakable would be cool, but then the four of them already are in everything but title. I know I would want out if I managed to survive this whole thing.
Any one who has read, A Promise Kept, knows I like the tie between Liily and Ginny. Unfortunately canon dictates that I can't make this as strong a tie as I would have liked too. Oh well, what can you do?
Thanks for the review.
This chapter was great, the grammar as always was wonderful, the content and ideas even better. With each chapter you write I find myself thinking wow, such a good idea. I love the fact that when I read your stuff it gives me a different, yet still believable, take on the prophecy etc.
I loved this section It was amazing to Ginny that she could even dream anymore. I love this bit because I love the fact that you incorporate Ginny's hardship with Tom into the story without it being the overpowering factor. I love your take on Ginny and I have probably said it before but she does remind me of what I have always visualised Lily to be like, (I mean your Ginny, the one in the book hasn't fully came out of her shell yet).
I love your take on Occlumency and Legilimency, I like the idea of imagining a cloud, I think I have read something about that before in R.E. when they use it to aid meditation, so I thought it was really fitting! I loved the reaction of Ron to Harry when Hermione stayed in too long, he acted just as the overprotective Ron should irritable, it is almost as though his protectiveness of Ginny has transferred to Hermione now she is with someone he trusts. (I do realise he still has that certain feeling about Ginny though). All in all great, I could go on and on about everything I liked, that is the problem when I review your fic, there are so many things I like. I feel like a kid in a sweet shop. Well done and keep writing this wonderful fic!
Author's Response: I'm glad I'm giving you something each chapter that you like. Ginny's hardship with Tom Riddle is a driving force in the story. Harry has found her now, and the concept that Riddle could get her again is pushing him to new height.
Glad you like the occlumency and legilimancy, as they get to be bigger and bigger parts of the story in the next few chapters. don't worry, I promise to keep writing the story all the way through to the end.
I really liked it, it was a perfect baance between funny ans erious, I am glad you had the serious present round it off at the end, it made for a really good read. I think that the reactions of the Weasley borhters were perfectly in character and were really funny. Glad you are such a trooper and are so dedicated to writing this fic, or I would be sadly dissapointed by long waits. You are so very kind and keep them coming all the time! Thanks
Author's Response: Glad you liked it.
It was hard to get the humor fo the chapter down. I do better writing the serious stuff. Probably because I am not much of a prankster myself.
I am dedicated to getting this fic posted. I had hoped to be done with it before HBP, but even though it is written, the mods need to have their time with it and there are just not enough days left between now and the release date for HBP to do it.