I am 15 year old and I come from Lincolnshire. I have been reading *coughs obsessed with * Harry Potter since I was 7 or 8 and I think they are simply amazing and have loved them, like so many others, for all that time!!!!!!!!!! I have never really written a fan fic before but I have been addicted to this site since it began and have read soooooooo many I really thought I should write one too! I hope you enjoy it! yours the 5th marauder!
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Summary: An Irish witch languishes in the darkness of her family home, confined by her father and circumstances. What will it take to bring her out of this exile? The chance to return to Hogwarts? The opportunity to participate in the fight against Voldemort and his Death Eaters? Or will it be Severus Snape, a man she did not expect to see again in her lifetime?
This is canon compliant to OoTP but written pre-HBP.
Reviews and constructive criticism are most welcome, and thanks go to Ashwinder who kindly beta read the chapters for me. :-)
These last two chapters were amazing, I forgot to check the site for a little while and I came back to find my FAVOURITE story of all updated, not once but twice, needless to say I was extremely excited! I love the last two chapters, my favourite parts I have to say were the necklace and the awesome and curious power surrounding it, and the ominous departure of Roderick, I am not entirely sure if it was his finale, he is a very slippery, yet endearing, character!
I really loved the description of these chapters, the parts about the mexican stand off, if you will, in the corridor was very climatic, I was permanently on the edge of my seat! Thinking the can't die they can't die, I had to keep rationalising with myself, very enjoyable indeed as a reader! Thanks soo much for updating so quickly and to such an extent, can't wait for the next chapters!
May I ask, will we get to see Maeve's wedding, well read about it I mean, you have such a descriptive skill, I hope you dont end up finishing the story before you let us into your imagination and write how the wedding goes! I know you probs won't answer, but well, one has to try!
Thanks for the great chapters, amazing as always, your ability as a writer really astounds me and I am sure it will continue to do so!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. You will be pleased to know that you will get to see the wedding! I haven't decided whether it will be the epilogue to this or the prologue to the summer holiday story I plan to write. But Maeve is choosing her dress and plans are afoot to book a location...so keep checking back for updates! :-)
That was great, I love your story, it is actually my favourite one on mugglenet fanfiction, you are a really talented writer! Thanks for writing such a fantastic and tantilising story! Update soon because I can't wait for the Snape/Maeve confrontation! 10/10 great! :)
OMG!!!!!!! this story just keeps getting better and better; you have a truly wonderful imagination!!!!!!!! btw it is so sweet about severus and maeve!!!!!!!! :) GO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!
That was amazing! It was so good, I loved the exchange between Dumbledore and Maeve it was so sweet, I loved the fact that you didn't go too mushy at the end aswell, I feared you might have some overly fluffy scene about her and Severus which you didnt and it made it a much better fanfiction in it's own right. I love the whole of the story and it seems so long since I first started reading this amazing fic in November, it has been the best fanfiction on the whole of the site, I can't wait for the sequel. The wedding is something which I can't wait to read it should be really good fun. Dumbledore organising it, I wonder if it is completely filled with Muggle sweets and weirdness, it should be a really good read I hope you don't leave it too long before updating writing the next fic. Please put in a note on the first summary when you do and the name of it, I will be watching! Thanks for an amazing, astounding basically fantastic fanfic and giving your readers something really juicy to read, lol! Great story!
I absolutely loved that chapter, this is what makes reading fanfiction worthwhile, these types of fanfictions are simply amazing, the plot is worthy of JKRowling herself, you truly have a brilliant talent and I have to say i truly suspect that you are a professional writer for you to be of this standard and not be is a crime to literature! I love the Sirius/ Maeve plot it is so believable, for Snape to fall in love with someone she would have to be like Maeve, I have read some snape relationship fics which change his character to suit his partner which you have never done, which is brilliant!
I have to say that i simply loved the parts with Roderick in this chapter (basically nearly the whole chapter) his devious character is so interesting, you have built him up so well it is as if he is a canon character; we know so much about him. I love his involvement and I think he is one of the most intriguing characters of your fic! Go you please update soon since i check your fic for updates about 15 times a day! Well done oh great one, lol!
Author's Response: No, not professional… not yet anyway! LOL. I agree, Snape is never going to change to fit a partner…that partner will have to make allowances for Snape. Love is the one thing that keeps these two going when most others would have given up and it’s a love that’s been there for a long time. Maybe one day I will write their past history from before the time of HPDL. Given my lovely Roderick’s popularity I may have to devise a different ending to the one I had planned…but we will have to see. ;-)
sorry i wrote Sirius/Maeve I meant Severus/Maeve - sorry!!!!!! oooops! lol :)
this is the best story on this site it is simply amazing i love the way you write and well it is just GREAT! please continue to write this and make sure you submit soon!!!!!!!!!!
I think this is really good!! You should be really proud of your writing! Ir is alot like I imagine (and secretly hope) it is going to be at the start of the sixth book! Well done!!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks you so much!! When people say things like that it really makes you feel good about your writing. Thanks again :)
omg great story, is there going to be a lily remus thing????????? i wonder how that would work????????? anyway sorry getting back to what i wanted to say absolutely brill, i love james and lily fics they are right up there with ron and hermione stories!!!!!!!!!! go you amazing!!!!!!!!! excellent :)
please update, i really want to see what she does to james; make him sweat a bit longer or be nice! soooo please dont enter professional torturing and update
please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please! PLEASE add another chappy i have been checking up every day and i have just been disappointed, the story is so great, and you have written it so well please (see above :0)) write more!!!!!!!!!!!
this is so great he needs some love too!!! bless him!!
Summary: Harry's sixth year; the burden of the prophecy, the grief over the loss of Sirius, the wizarding war, blossoming romances, the new Quidditch Captain, Weasley family drama - and that's just part of it.
This is such a great story, I have been reading it for ages and it is the first story I check for new chapters every day; you should be really proud of your talent as a writer and your ability to sensitively depict really deep emotions! WELL DONE! I am so glad that you are writing a sequel, no doubt I will be awaiting even more of your chapters with baited breath! Thank you for writing such an enjoyable story! :)
Summary: What is Ron and Hermione's friendship all about?
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THAT STORY, YOU ARE SO RIGHT, EVERYONE FORGETS RON IS A PERSON TOO, HE ISNT JUST HARRY'S MATE HE HAS HIS OWN FEELINGS! GO YOU!
Summer post OoTP. Recovery after DoM tragedy. This time it's different, however. It's not Harry who's having nightmares. It's not Harry who gets hurt. It's not Harry who learns it all the hard way.
an outtake: >"Guess it’s time to admit it, Ron,” she whispered, knowing well, that he couldn’t hear her, “I did misjudged you. I did... And I don’t think I know you as well as I thought I did,” she closed her eyes, one last time touching his scarred arm, “And you’re not of the emotional range of a teaspoon, Ron. You’re much more... You’re so much more...”PEOPLE! I'LL POST NEXT CHAPTER ON SUNDAY!! PROMISE!
Where have you gone the story is getting so good and exciting!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please Please Please update soon, this is a great story but I am not sure if I will be able to handle much more waiting!!!!!!!!! :0) oh n btw A VERY HARRY CHRISTMAS EVERYBODY!!!!!!!!! he he I no thats lame but I couldn't resist! seriously though please update soon!!!!!!!!
Summary: As the final battle is approaching, a new prophecy is made. Would you go against it for love?
I loved that it was amazing, so brilliant, such a good story line, Professor Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall are a totally believable couple, all your characters are so in character, it is amazing I can actually see them reacting this way if it were in the real books, very well done! I can't wait to see what happens next, I hope the talk between Hermione and Ron comes soon, it is inevitable and I can't wait to see the sparks fly be it good or bad! :) a million out of ten, pretty good you'll agree! ;)
All's fair in love and war
Lily thinks herself too clever to fall for James Potters charm. Yet, as the two of them are appointed Head Boy and Girl, will Lily regret her negative feelings towards James? Pre-HBP
please for the sake of all things holy update soon! I am actually quite glad that they are getting attacked again because it will be quite dramatic and really interesting, and I agree HPgrl R U INSANE????????? please, please please please please please update within the next week coz some authors leave it yonks and i check like everyday for updates and i find zilch so please dont be one of those!!!!!!!!!!!!!! amazing story congrats
That was totally amazing! another great chapter, I prefer your chappies when they are like this they are slightly more serious but really funny; the perfect mix! Oh, James,” Lily mentioned. “I forgot to tell you. My parents are coming this weekend for graduation. They should be here tomorrow morning.” “W-What?” James stammered. “Your parents? Here? Tomorrow? Hogwarts?” “Yes, Prongs,” Sirius coached. “Very good. You understood a sentence.” so funny, actually very realistic; guys have a thing against "meeting the folks" they get extremely twitchy and generally start sucking up, lol! great portrayal I really enjoyed it, get the last chapter up since i believe this is the 24th review; we kept our part of the bargain now please don't torture us and update very soon!!!!!!!!!!! lol 10/10
1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (ex. James, Lily, Sirius, Remus..etc.) Lily 2) Who was your favorite OC? (ex. Addison, Maimee, Mac?) Addison 3) What was your favorite chapter? A train of the tracks 4) What was your favorite quote from this story? (GO DIGGING PEOPLE!) “You’re walking like you’ve got a load on your back. Stand straight Sirius or people will start calling me Quasimodo,” Addison said. “Blah Blahdy Blah,” Sirius said, mimicking Addison. “Oh, deal with it,” Remus said to both of them. “Padfoot, you make one hormonal girl.” 5) Will you read the prequel, “No Rain,” when it comes out? Certainly, it better have lots of addison my favourite character! 6) Who was your favorite couple? (L/J, S/A, R/M) S/A 7) Anything you’d like to see in the prequel? S/A or A/R 8) Is there anything you didn’t like story related? I thought you went into Sirius a bit much in the final chapters, his stunts, they were really funny but I'd like to see some development of the other characters. 9) What was the craziest thing Sirius did in this fic? The Giant Squid thing with Mac 10) Have you read my other stories? If not, do go read them. I dont have any idea, I will check though! Well done on the story, it is a great achievement, this story has been in my favs for like forever, it is nice to see it finished to such a high standard well done!
Summary: Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny have spent the better part of their sixth year advancing their knowledge of witchcraft and wizardry in the hope of vanquishing Lord Voldemort when the time comes. But now it's time for a break. Can the trio just have fun, or must Harry carry his secret on his back until the Prophecy is satisfied? Will Harry's longing to see Sirius again be fulfilled? Read and See . . . .
this is such an amazing story, i know you probably get tired of everyone who reviews saying the same phrase - amazing - but it just is truly great, i have been reading it on and off for a while because i keep forgetting to put it in my favourites but that great chapter has certainly reminded me!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP GOING AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON BECAUSE I DONT THINK I WILL READ ANYTHING NEAR AS GOOD AS THIS UNTIL YOU DO!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Author's Response: I never get tired of hearing that people like my story! Thank you, and there is another (final) chapter in queue - seems to be a bit of a backlog just now, I guess! Nancy ;)