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The Boy who Lived by Diamond Quill
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 62]

Summary: A short poem about Harry Potter.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 60 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/13/05 Updated: 04/13/05


Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Poem

Just wondering, but when did he lose, when did he cry, who did he save, and when did he weep?

Author's Response: Not when but what did he lose He lost his parents He saved his friends at the Ministry of Magic, he saved the Wizarding World by defeating Voldermort (for a short time anyway), he saved Ginny, he saved Ron in the lake... need more examples? He cried and wept when Sirius and Dumbledore were killed.

 

Dementor's Kiss by Mex
Rated: [Reviews - 47]

Summary: A poem about how you feel after a dementor kisses you.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 38 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
07/09/05 Updated: 07/09/05


Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Dementor's Kiss

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Author's Response: Ahahaha, what does that response even mean? LOL.

 
Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: Dementor's Kiss

Wow! Such vivid descriptions! Good job!

 

The Veil by acire
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 61]

Summary: A short poem about the Veil.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 32 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/31/05 Updated: 08/31/05


Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Veil

This is pretty good!

 
Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Veil

I'm just kidding! WHAT THE HECK?!?!?!?!?!

 

Cowardice by RagingStorm71117
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: A companion story to Courage. See the events leading up to October 31st, 1981 through beady little eyes...

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2167 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/30/06 Updated: 01/30/06


Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: Cowardice

Good job! :-)

 

Late Bloomer by Just Tink
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 110]

Summary: Cassandra Pralent was your typical pureblood- rich, spoiled, and prepared to go to Hogwarts as soon as she turned eleven. But Professor McGonagall delivers horrible news- Cassandra is a Squib. When she is rejected at home and at school, she is forced to accept unlikely friends. And just when Cassandra feels life is getting better, her fate becomes entwined with that of the Trio in a most sinister fashion…

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 31672 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
03/29/06 Updated: 09/05/07


Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: The News

Great story! Have fun! :-)

Author's Response: glad you liked it, thanks!

 

Mistakes by Pearle
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 121]

Summary: St Mungo’s is a very busy place. And mistakes do happen. Try explaining that to Severus and Hermione.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1546 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/02/06 Updated: 06/04/06


Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mistakes

That is a weird story. I don't get it. R Hermione & Snape married?
:-(

 

Wonderful First Kiss by sweetdevil
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: This is my poetic version of Harry and Ginny's very public kiss in the common room. My version of the kiss and everyone's reaction.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 182 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/28/06 Updated: 07/31/06


Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: Wonderful First Kiss

Yes, I do luv 2 review!

 
Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: Wonderful First Kiss

Bravo! You r the best writer I've seen here yet!


Author's Response: You really like to review, don\'t you? lol :P that\'s great. I love hearing what people think, I tells me what you both like and dislike to improve writing. yay for you!

 

For Years by sweetdevil
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 49]

Summary: As you might be able to tell, I really love Ron and Hermione. So to show my love, here's my view on their relationship!
~*~*~Can be from either Ron or Hermione's POV.~*~*~


Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 101 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/31/06 Updated: 08/08/06


Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: For Years

Very good. You are a very good writer.

 
Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: For Years

I just found out about my website from my friend and I am writing my first story. U r a great writer. How do u come up with your ideas???????????

Author's Response: They just sort of...*POOF* into my short attention- spanned mind at very random moments, one after another :P

 

As I Lay Here Tonight by sweetdevil
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: James is thinking about how he feels for Lily, trying to find out how to win her love. Lily, however, debates with herself on her own feelings for James...





~*~*~Chapter two, Lily's POV, is now up!!~*~*~

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 217 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/17/06 Updated: 08/24/06


Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: James's POV

Good one!

 
Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 2: Lily's POV

I luv this poem! My favorite part(s) is/are:
As I lay here tonight,

I wonder.

My feelings for you,

So foggy.

So unreal.


As I lay here tonight,

A terrifying thought arises.

With each breath of your name,

That escapes my lips.

My heart races,

My flaming head swims.


You’re so arrogant,

So full of yourself.

Yet your hazel eyes intrigue me.
Although I don't get wat u mean by "My flaming head swims."
Good job!
Rapid Reader ;-)


Author's Response: --Although I don\'t get wat u mean by \"My flaming head swims.\"-- Lily\'s hair is red. :)

 
Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 2: Lily's POV

Oh! Now I get it! Good description.

 

Mourning by sweetdevil
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: A story of death and loss in Harry's world.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 112 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/08/06 Updated: 09/10/06


Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mourning

I luv how u describe his sadness:
"An internal universe torn." Wonderful!
It's so great how u describe your characters' feelings in such a fantastically creative way. How long hav u been writing?

sincerely,
Rapid Reader ;-)



Author's Response: I have been writing for about a year.

 
Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mourning

Only a year? Wow, that's surprising! I would have guessed several years!

Author's Response: yeah, I\'m just 14 and my required writing class really inspired me ;)

 

...I Still Love You by sweetdevil
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: We all know what Harry was thinking when he broke up with Ginny; reluctance, hesitation, grief. What was Ginny thinking, though? Each chapter is from the other's POV.




Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 248 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/10/06 Updated: 09/17/06


Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Harry's POV

You have written some of the best poems I have ever had the pleasure of reading! I hop u continue writing 4 a long time! Hav fun!
Rapid Reader :-)

Author's Response: Don\'t worry, I will :)

 
Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/21/06 Title: Chapter 2: Ginny's POV

You r an amazing writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:)

 

A Ruthless Quest by sweetdevil
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: A three-part poem of Voldemort's rise to power, downfall, and life in the second war.



~*~Chapters two and three comming soon!!~*~

EDIT:Well, one rather embarassing typo has been fixed, it was brought to my attention by one of my readers. Ironicly, neither my mod, beta, nor myself caught this. Oopsie! :P


Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Violence

Word count: 376 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
10/17/06 Updated: 10/18/06


Reviewer: Rapid Reader Signed
Date: 12/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: Tom Riddle 1943-1981

In the 5th stanza, 1st line, you say "faithful night," but i think u mean "fateful night."

:-)

Author's Response: oops, thanks for catching that. I\'m suprised my beta didn\'t...

Author's Response: oops, thanks for catching that. I\'m suprised my beta didn\'t...

 
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