Hi. So, I had one story posted but now it's gone. I am in the process of rewriting it. It will be reposted at some point in time. Until then, keep tabs on me? :D
Woooo! Go Marauders!
I've read this before. It's just so sad. All of your descriptions are so powerful.
"She opened her eyes and looked tearfully at Ron. It had begun to rain outside. A light, pattering rain that seemed like each drop was an arrow being fired into the world. "
Way to set up a scene, it was brilliant.
Hahaha. For once, I liked Peter. He couldn't have started out bad. He's just a rat.
OHMYGOSH!! That was so funny! I especially loved:
“Don’t ask Malfoy,” said Draco Malfoy. “In fact, keep Malfoy out of this completely.”
HOW COULD PETER SAY THAT? Maybe I should finish reading the chapter.
Peter is already showing how weak he is. I loved him throughout the entire story, but now we are seeing his true colors. How is he considered brave?
Didn't they wait until later to become animagi? Ah well!
Wow. I wish Remus would just tell them already.
*evil laughter* How is Lily so... Nice to him? She should hate him by now.
That was beautiful, I cried, from laughing so hard
You don't mess with Sirius' hair; siriusly, you just don't.
Wait so he hasn't started his transformations yet Now he just gets extremely bad reactions from the full moon. This is so sad.
I don't think Hagrid and Professor McGonagall would be there, but... I LOVE THIS. But I just got really sad because it randomly popped into my head that James and Sirius are going to die, Peter is as good as dead and Remus is a depressed werewolf.
I love how you had them just sort of fall together. I actually like Peter... The giant squid thing was hilarious!
James is such a good friend. This is all so sad. If I didn't know that Remus lived past twenty five I would be crying. They were such good friends? How did it go wrong?
That was the best Christmas ever! Poor Remus. James should talk to him.
Awwww they are such cute first years. I'm so glad James wasn't instantly smitten with Lily. Stupid Snape...
Snape is a foul, loathsome, evil little cockroach.
I can’t help but still feel terrible for Remus. When will they become real best friends. When he admits it to them. Stupid Peter has to become a rat...
"What do you mean?" Sirius asked his voice going slightly on edge.
That line astounded me with its' perfectness. Exactly how I imagined it. They should just go and talk to Remus. It isn't fair that Remus has to go through with this; it isn't fair that they just won't talk to him.
THEY JUST NEED TO TALK TO HIM. Lily is like James' voice of reason. Why does it matter that he as a werewolf? He has been the entire time and he hasn't done anything wrong to them except lie. You can't be angry at him for lying about something like that. He doesn't want to lose them; but he is. They just need to talk to him. Boys are so stupid, are they incapable of speaking to one another? Without yelling or lying I mean.
That is awesome. They have their own place that no one knows about. When are they going to do more pranks? *sigh* This is perfect.
And to think Peter started it all... Don't you think McGonagall was slightly harsh? But you know it is the beginning of a beautiful detention war.
I loved how Lily and James met! It was so sweet and innocent. Oh! And when James becomes all smug and arrogant and popular form his pranks and good looks Lily will feel likes he was tricked... Right?
Does Remus annoy James a little bit? It sort of seems like it. Remus reminds me of Hermione.