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Canis Majoris by trinsy
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 645]

Summary: Adhara Jocelyn Black has always been torn between her loyalty to James Potter, her cousin Sirius's best mate, and Lily Evans, the sister she has never known. But in her seventh year everything changes. Join Jocelyn, Sirius, Lily, and the rest of the Marauders as they battle for their lives... and loves...

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 56522 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/27/05 Updated: 04/04/06


Reviewer: embermorningstarr Signed
Date: 12/18/06 Title: Chapter 19: Charmed and Charmed Again

I really like this fic but why did you make Lily sound like a really slow buble headed idiot that cant see anything even when i it is thrown in her face? Even Ron Wasent this thick. Great writing though. : )

Author's Response: You are absolutely right. You see, I wrote most of this fic when I was fifteen (I\'m seventeen now). I\'d been writing for five years at that point, but everything I wrote was rubbish, and I was new to the whole fanfic thing. In the beginning I didn\'t plot very well and my characterization was a bit sketchy. Toward the end of the fic I got better about it, and I\'m still rather proud of the last few chapters, as well as this fic\'s two accompanying one-shots (which were both written in the last six months). Anyway, thanks for the concrit and the compliments!

 

Summary: James Potter and Lily Evans weren't exactly buddies at first sight. They began virtually as enemies. Gradually, however, they came to respect each other and like each other at Hogwarts. Somehow, that like turned to an eternal love.





Described through the memories of all who knew them, this is the story that follows them through the seven years in Hogwarts, as their rocky relationship develops into a bond that becomes the envy everyone. This is the story that describes the difficulties that they encounter during the terrible years of You-Know-Who's reign. This is the story of the parents of The Boy who Lived. This is the story of the love between Lily Evans and James Potter.





Chapter Five (Friends?) posted - Lily walks into the world she never knew.


Sorry for the (very long) delay.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 9306 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
08/04/05 Updated: 06/24/06


Reviewer: embermorningstarr Signed
Date: 01/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Friends?

I really like this fic : ) please update it . It really is very good : )

 

Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1663]

Summary: Past Featured Story2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)

*Completed*

“I’ll always protect you.”

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 185106 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/17/06 Updated: 01/16/09


Reviewer: embermorningstarr Signed
Date: 10/08/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Conversations and An Invitation

I love this story so so much, i love that you didnt ak Lilys life all rosey posey pretty lily chased by potter scorn fest and three chappies later they are in LURVE forever. This Fic takes real talent. I wish though Remus and Peter had an actual role. Has Peter said anything? I love your character developement Of Black. Also i think you are very brave handling such sensitive topics with such good grace. And also you have the way Post Tramatic Stress victoms have flashbacks down pefectly.

Author's Response: Remus and Peter don\'t play a very big role, you\'re right, (I think Peter talked in the second chapter) and Remus has had a slightly larger role in a few chapters. I guess I need to work on that! I\'m glad you like the story, and think the flashbacks tie in correctly.

 

Something to Celebrate by EmmeElle
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 33]

Summary: Lily has big news for James, but she has to come to terms with it herself first. Will she manage to find happiness and hope in an era of despair?

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2845 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/06/07 Updated: 05/13/07


Reviewer: embermorningstarr Signed
Date: 09/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think that the people that rejected this are barmy honestly. Lily married him because she loved him. not because she wanted to change him. If she wanted a old man she would have married Dumbledore. I loved thisfic. It is a sweet thought that they remeber how to be happy when good things happen. That can be hard when you are at war. That an i was PROUD of James for being happy who isnt when they are told of there first baby? I loved your writing. Great job


Author's Response: Wow, I\'m actually blushing! Thank you!

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