You obviously clicked on my name for some reason or another, so I feel that it is my duty to tell you a bit about myself. I lead a very boring life and I think that my sense of humor is great, when in reality, it is sick and twisted. You have been warned.
The name's Meg, but I also respond to OuchKibble, Ouch or even Mega-Meg, if you're feeling crazy. I'm fourteen years old and I live in the Great White North, or Canada. Pick one. I'm a competitive Irish Dancer, and a lot of my time is being taken up by dance practices. I like to eat breakfast foods for dinner, but not for breakfast. I'm good that way. I like to think of myself as a nice person, so feel free to drop me a line sometimes. I'm on AIM a lot now. :)
I also go by the name of OuchKibble over at the MNff forums. I'm a member of the Beta Guild, meaning that I'm a recommended Beta who has passed the super-special Beta test. Not many people did. I'm only doing one-shots and single chapters right now, but if you need my help, I'll gladly oblige.
I sail many different ships, especially Harry/Hermione, Ginny/Neville, Draco/Luna, Ron/Pansy, Blaise/Hermione, Snape/Lily and Ron/Draco. I'm currently searching for a well-written Ron/Draco fic, or an angsty Lily/James. What can I say? I like things to be complicated.
I think I've bored you all to tears with my rambling, so I'm going to leave it there. Ta!
Attention! From Parchment to Parchment has been taken off this site and transfered to another one. If you would like to continue reading this fic, please contact me and I will either send you the upcoming chapters, or I'll give you the new URL of the story. I'm sorry, guys, but Humor isn't the genre I want to focus on, and I'm working with a humor expert on another site. My three romance fics will still be on MNff.
Nice. I like the way you encorperated the song with the writing. I did the same with my story, 'Always and Forever'. It's in the same catergory as this one.
At last, the plot if finally starting to take off. Good work.
Author's Response: well i'm glad u like it thanks much!
*Is patiently waiting for the next chapter* MOOORE!!!!! 10.
Author's Response: thanks! i updates yesterday so it just needs to be approved!
A summary is what draws a reader's attention to your story. Your summary says that you're not good at writing summaries. That automatically turns me off. How am I supposed to know what's happening in the story if you won't give at least one hint? You've also got to work on grammar and a few spelling errors. Cordy also seems like a Mary-Sue. No one's perfect whether it's the Wizarding world or the Mugge world, so why should she be? Personally, I don't like reading about perfect characters because they are WAAY too predictable. They always get perfect grades, perfect friends, they always get the guy. What's so interesting about that?
That was a very touching, well written fic. One of the best I've read in a while. I liked how it was about a character whom we had all thought to be a snob, struggling with things that we don't see. The only mistake I noticed as 'I used to Parvati Patil, Padma Patil’s twin.' The word BE should be used. Love the ending, excellent job. 9/10.
Author's Response: *bows gratefully*
A very good storyline, though I highly doubt that members of the Order would just waltz into the Dursley residence and take Harry. Also, when the five wizards (and witch) show up, Harry seems a bit OOC. As far as I know, the fireplace at the Dursleys is not real, so Floo Powder wouldn't work (remember the fourth book?) Be careful with awkward phrasing at a few parts, also be careful with Lana bacause she is an OC. Other than those few things, nice job. 7/10.
I only got to read the revised copy, but I like it so far, and I'm looking foreward to more.
Love it! Update soon.
Author's Response: I have, then it was rejected, now Chapter 6 has been re-submitted!
What? No reviews? Come on guys, constructive criticism is a must!
What!? No reviews? Chapter Three will be submitted tonight, and the "real" romance will start soon.
Loved it! I don't know what skip day is though. Could you pease expand?
Author's Response: I don't know if you have it where ever you live, but in Michigan our schools have something called senior skip day. It is near the end of the year, and the seniors just don't have to go to school. It isn't expected. Then the seniors also don't have to go to the last two or three weeks of the school year. I decided to use this idea for the story. In this story, the last month is optional for seventh years. They don't have to go to school, but they may choose to stay. If they stay then they are given a chance to finsh up their studies, maybe a month of harder spells, or fun activities or as in Hermione's case, they can apprentice. Hermione wants to teach so she plans on staying at school for this. She will spend the last month working with a teacher so that she has experiance in what she wants to do. Draco is choosing to leave and open his own apothecary. He isn't going to stay. Basically the final month is given off to the seventh years as a way of saying "Good Job. Now you can leave early adn enjoy your freedom." It is smart for people like Harry and Ron, who want to be aurors, to stay in school. It looks good on an application of that degree. I hope this cleared things up a bit!
Loved it! But I just have to point out, that a Potter wouldn't be a pureblood either. Harry was a half-blood. But other than that, it was great! 10!
Author's Response: To be a pure-blood your grandparents need to all be wicthes or wizrads. Harry's parents were both magical. His grandparents weren't, but his childrens grandparents would be. And heis wife's parents were magical also... I believe... i have to check it... lol do you get how his kids are pureblood?
I meant that there was a lot happening, and it was hard to follow. I WAS really tired at the time though. I have since re-read the story and I like it. Please post more.
Author's Response: lol. that's great! I'm glad you liked it! please continue to watch. the second chapter is in sue and the third is being completed. i had to put in an extra scene becasue it was to funny to not have! thanks for reading!
I read it, but I found that the story line was really confusing. I almost stopped reading because everything was sort of jumbled together.
Author's Response: How do you mean "jumbled together"? I'll work on clearing it up once I know what's wrong with it.
I know exactly what you mean by not getting reviews. I reviewes my own story. Any who. I love it! 10!
I like it. I'm still trying to figure out the romance part of it though. I mean, I know it's only the first chapter, but Sal IS only 10. Can you please help.
Author's Response: Hey, hold on! It's coming soon. Nobody says an amazing plot twist can't carry us to maybe the second or third year, where Sal falls in love with one of the most unexpected people *coughcough*!
Author's Response: Not the Author, actually: Besides, Ron only knew Hermione since the first year... *sigh*
I'll admit it: I HATE the Harry/Ginny pairing. But, like you said, this one is very differently written and I'm intrigued after only the first chapter. You write beautifully, and for that, I must say that for once, I'll keep reading.
Author's Response: It's fine, not everyone likes H/Gs. I myself hate Hermione/Draco's. I am glad you liked it, though. But if the whole thing becomes too much for the dislike of the ship, by all means, you can stop reading. I'm not going to force you to read something you don't like. But thanks, anyway. I'm happy that you read it.
Meh. It was okay. I hope that upcoming chapters are more humorous.
Author's Response: Oh they are... don't worry. I was just setting the scene. I accidently just posted this as a review.. oh well.
I loved that. Please update.
Author's Response: i am making it into a round robin :) Email me for more info :)
If the mods say that she is a Mary Sue, try giving her some quirks. Like she bites her nails, or twirls her hair around her finger when she get bored. I can always read it over for you if you'd like, just e-mail me, my info is in my profile-thingy. Love the story though, I hope you continue.
Author's Response: thx 4 the idea! i might use that. I just sent it in hopefully 4 the last time! thx again!