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*tears is all I can bear to type* wish I could give it a hundred and 2
Oh my gosh, I found this and I didnt even know it. This was the first story that I read when I came onto MnFF in Febuary and I wasnt logged in so I couldnt add it to my favorites, I have been looking for it since.
Sorry one more off topic thing, I admire you on the forums and on here, I love your work in general and just love it.
Okay, this chapter, I liked how I could see the scene, you do that so well, and how you can feel how Mauve is feeling. erm..You are truly talented.
I'll try reviewing better tomorrow when I read chapter 2.
I loved it, update soon. I loved how you have Ron being late. Is Percy the Minister? Why was Harry in Bulgaria, did I miss why? Ohh, I think I will just have to wait. Cant wait. Love how the story is put together. UPDATE ASAP
I love it. I love cliff hangers and I also love Kira. It came as a shock, but it was awesome. I like how Ron is seperating from Harry and going towards Kira. Its gonna be a nasty shock for him when he finds out. (Idont like ROn)
Also this is not a SPEW admission review, jus one I felt like doing. :D
Author's Response: I\'m so glad you like Kira, I worked hard to get to her to come out right. *whispers* I don\'t like Ron either.
WOW. That is the best way to sum up your story. I knew you were good, but not that good. I loved your story. I loved how at the end of each section, it would say, "I am a ---, My name is --- and I will --- my way through this." I have to say my favorite part is how you use minor character. That is always a nice change. I like the your descriptivness. Thank you for reading this.
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i love it, its so wel put together with logic and such
I love it, I cried. I love your work. I didnt think I should write the same thing in each review box, but I love your work. One small error. Sirius Black shouldnt be on the "list of the dead" because he is not dead. :) I wish I could give it an 1000000
OMG Its so funny, its a part of Ron I never new!!! You have the talent of JKR herself HAhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
Author's Response: wow! what a compliment! i know that not true because no one will EVER EVER be as good as JKR! she is the bomb!
Natasha, I like this story even though it is H/G and R/Hr, but I liked it.
I LOVE the story, I read it straight through, the end is so sad, I cried. I loved the whole fact that it takes place after Hogwarts, as so little J/L fics do.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. :)
I told you I would get around to reading this.. *smiles* I like this, it's erm..different. I like how you have Chrissie cutting also adds a nice twist. Keep writing, tell me when you update again, I cant find any SI stories that are worth reading nowaday(this is one that is worth reading) ;)
Author's Response: Thanks Britney! I shall update very soon. I have chapter... whatever I'm up to written so yes, I shall update tomorrow. Thankyou.
I love the story, its a new perspective, but it needs DETAILS I love Sara she sounds like she is really cute. The renuion was a really nice way to bring back what people were up to. I'm glad to see Neville an Auror, just like his dad. Hermione sounds alot like regret, like she regrets ever marrying Ron, and especially about Sara, its kind of sad. I hope she learns Sara was meant to happen, because everything happens for a reason.
Author's Response: Details will be revealed! And I know, but I wanted it to be real, since a lot of people have regrets. Even I, only being 13, have regrets!
honeydude some people cant review, I am anxiuusly awaiting chapter 5
Author's Response: still in queue...grr...working on chappie 6!
I love the story its so funny, the plot is hard to follow, but thats half the fun. I loved the "Ron-Bird" Granger house is funny, what will the other houses be called if the trio dont save hogwart. I love the fact that Godric is so stupid, he's always portrayed as a intelligent man. Salazar doesnt seem to bad. Helga cooking sound devine just kidding. Rowena doesnt sound very smart.
Author's Response: None of them are supposed to sound very smart.
In fact, the horrendous things in this collection are too numerous to name. I wouldn't think of mentioning such things as an evil wizard, birthday presents, ghosts, an owl, or a spider-filled closet.
With all due respect,
P.S. This chapters in this collection may be read in any order you please. Although, it would probably please you more if you did not read them at all.
Oh, I like it. I havent read a worthwhile Lemony Snicket/Harry Potter parody yet. It really was, what I thought anyway, in Lemony Snicket's style. And he is hard to copy.
I cant wait until the next chapter, I'll keep watching this one. I think it will be interesting to see how you portray Hermione, because she is already really smart.
Oh my gosh. I am crying. I like how Hermione listens to her parents, even when she is an adult. The detail on here is wonderful. This story reminds me of a poem I read in Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul.
I have a few mistakes for you, to make you a better writer. First, you spelled the word "recieving" it should be "receiving". Next you have "She was optimistic about the days ahead, when suddenly, she heard tires screeching" There should be no comma between "suddenly" and "she". Daughter isn't spelled "daughther" Also you have " The doctors came in,looking grave" there is no comma needed between "in" and looking". You also spelled successful wrong.
I like this story a lot, because my cousin was killed on Christmas Eve a few years ago. I hate people who drink and drive. I join the milions of people like me. I loved the plot.
I loved the story. I think My favorite part was when McKee was thinking about joining the DA.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, lavender! Many of my one-shots deal with McKee, so I hope you get the chance to take a look at them!
Ohhh...I love it. I cant wait for the next chapter. I wonder what is going to happen with Malfoy. I give it an 11
Author's Response: Thank you!! And to answer your question, quite a few things will be happening with good ol' Malfoy. But I won't say exactly what!
Srry wonderful I forgot to finish the sentence, I meant I love the conflict but I hate the ship, I hope it never turns out to be like that.