Penname: Neli P [Contact]
Real name: Patricia
Member Since: 11/06/04
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I became a "PotterManiac" after reading Chapter 12 ('The Mirror of Erised') of "The Philosopher's Stone". I love all the books, but with some strong Veritaserum, I might admit that my favorite books are "Goblet of Fire", "Half-Blood Prince" and "Prisoner of Azkaban" ;).

I am a TOTAL, PROUD 'Harry/Ginny', 'Ron/Hermione' shipper, as you will certainly notice in my FanFic ...

And some of the stories I submitted to MNFF are also posted on Veritaserum (the 'other HP site', not the potion of course *LOL*) under my real name "Patricia" :) :)
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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 03/06/05 Title: None

10/10 CHAPTER, I loved it! Having Wood back is GREAT! Hurry with the next chapter!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I absolutely love getting reviews! This is my first writing experience and the positeve feedback is wonderful! I think we all love Wood!

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 03/30/05 Title: None

Phoebe, YOU ARE THE BEST :D!! I totally bought the "contraceptive-potion" plot (thought it was for H and G *lol*)!!

Author's Response: Glad you 'bought' the plot. That is what you were supposed to believe! Thank you for continued reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 03/30/05 Title: None

YAY, YAY, YAY! That's the "Ron" I love :) Wood is soooo cool! So are YOU, Phoebe! Hurry with the next chapter, PLZ!

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 03/25/05 Title: None

That is AWSOME as always! I loved the Mirror of Erised (always makes me cry!). Will Ron do something to make it up to Hermione *Hopeful glare*, please, Please, PLEASE? :) :)

Author's Response: Thank you!!! Ron is my favorite character, so i wont let him screw up for ever!

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 05/19/05 Title: None

Way to go, Harry !! And Good Job, Phoebe! Keep the next chapters coming, please :)

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 03/20/05 Title: None

OMG! I LOVED IT! I LOVED IT ! I LOVED IT! But what did happen with Malfoy after the chapter 8? Anyway, I just can't wait for the next one! Did I tell you that I LOVED THIS CHAPTER?? ;)

Author's Response: I guess Harry knows what happened to Malfoy. He hasn't told me yet! You've to wait out a few more chapters. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 04/16/05 Title: None

Great chapter, Phoebe! Please HURRY with the next chapters. I can't wait for "the next 2 months" ;) ;)

Author's Response: I'm doing my best. Between work and slow moderators, it sometimes takes a while. Pkease keep reading!

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 03/05/05 Title: None

'David Beckam to teach soccer and Elton to teach piano' ??? OMG !!! I AM IN HEAVEN! YOU MADE MY DAY !!! :D :D :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I struggled with those analogies! I needed something that would transend generations and cultures, but would be basically British. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

 

Summary: Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, a blond Weasley. It's Harry's sixth year. Voldemort is back, yet strangely quiet. A second prophecy. This is my version of what happens next. The whole book is written, along with all of year seven. I will post as fast as I can get the chapters past the moderators.

Story is now complete. Look for the sequel, I will be posting the first chapter tonight 6-2-05, and it usually takes 4-5 days for the mods to approve it. The title of the sequel is, Harry Potter and the Unlocked Mind.

Categories: Various Pairings Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 147324 Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/25/05 Updated: 05/28/05


Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 03/17/05 Title: Chapter 5: Year Six Begins

Interesting! I loved the wandless Magic, Hagrid, Rita Skeeter (not Her! The part about her :)), even if the Voices seemed a little bit too loud in this chapter :(. I can't wait to see what the Blond Weasley is up to. As for 'Vicky', SORRY! I am a member of the "International Krum's Haters League"! ;)

Author's Response: The voices, need to be heavy for their introduction, but take more of a back seat as the story goes on. They still get used, but talk less. It is really hard to write them, trying to keep in mind that they sometimes have different personalities. I think I do the best job writing Hermione's second voice, the rest of them, well you guys decide. Either way, they are here to stay, as they are pretty important in the story.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 05/07/05 Title: Chapter 16: The Ball

* 10/10 * chapter. I like the way they all act more mature. Ginny's magical skills improved a lot, so a special 'thum-up' to YOU for that. As for Harry/Bridgette :( I won't send any Howler don't worry, but as a H/G die-hard shipper, I admit you push all the right buttons to make us gnash our teeth (I hope you take this as a real COMPLIMENT to your incredible talent! :D ). Keep the next chapters coming!

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 05/23/05 Title: Chapter 19: Ravenclaw

The Quidditch game was AWESOME, and thanks to you, I was 'almost' glad that Cho caught the Snitch until ... she banged into Ginny :( Grrrr ... However, Please...Please x 100 times, if this accident can help Harry realize SOMETHING about his feelings for Gin, and if Ginny meets SOMEONE we know near that veil ... then you will make my day, Huskers :D :D. Great chapter and Good Job as usual.

Author's Response: There was absolutly nothing more Cho could have done to avoid Ginny. Quidditch is a dangerous game, and accidents happen. What "something" do you want Harry to realize about his feelings for Ginny? Maybe he knows exactly how he feels. How could that have happened? A clue was given in chapter 18. Who exactly do you want Ginny to meet at the veil? We know she heard whispers when she was there at the end of year five, she is much closer to the spirit world right now. That is her soul in the chamber, will she gain greater knowledge of what is beyond the veil? Will she even live? Glad you like this chapter, the next one should be up before to long.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 03/08/05 Title: Chapter 3: A New Family

Awsome chapter, again :) I particularly appreciated Arthur and Molly's suggestion to Harry not to call them Mom and Dad, it was a very delicate gesture, GREAT JOB! BTW, I totally agree with Phoebe Cat about writing a different Ron or Harry! That makes FF so fun to read! And I love your 'more mature' Ron and Harry! :)

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 03/10/05 Title: Chapter 4: DA Reformed

Two words only: GO GINNY !! :D :D Great to know about the "voices"... 'The Unforgivable Curses' was one of my favorite chapters of Book 4, and I've never thought about looking in there for the answer :) Keep the next chapters coming, please!!

Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue. I promise to post them as soon as the mods validate them

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 04/11/05 Title: Chapter 10: Ron's Diary

AMAZING ... FABULOUS ... And of course, YYYEEEAAAAAHHHH, she chose RIGHT guy! I'm OK with Ginny showing her 'bad side' (which is much like 'angry Harry' in OotP, so I'm very hopeful :) *wink*). As for Cho, well, you still have to convince me :) :) I can't wait for the next part of the Prophecy, so, PLZ, Hurry!!

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 05/28/05 Title: Chapter 20: Debt of Blood

OMG, OMG, OMG! 'Be careful of what you wish for' !!! I wanted to see Harry try his new skills on Voldemort, and I have had more than my share in this chapter. Please, HURRY with the next chapter, or I will 'owl' a Howler, or more death threats, I swear! :) :) Great Job!

Author's Response: Yes, be careful what you wish for. You might get it. Glad you like the chapter. Thanks for correcting me again on the curses. I think I have them all fixed now. The next chapter is in the queue at this moment waiting for the mods.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 04/23/05 Title: Chapter 13: The Animagi

AMAZING, no less! I think it takes a huge share of HP knowledge and ... some 'guts' (!) to write about the Animagi. And you just did it IN THE MOST WONDERFUL WAY! Great ... no ... AWSOME ... JOB! :) :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I was a little worried about this chapter and it being to easy for the four of them, but like I said if Pettigrew can do it, it can't be all that bad. After all these are really powerful sorcerors, and they are starting to come into that power.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 04/07/05 Title: Chapter 9: Tryouts

AWSOME CHAPTER! The "Tryouts" were a pure stroke of genius. I loved the way you passed a lot of "messages" through the action. As for the "kiss before the Quidditch game", Wow! And now I have to wait for the "Diary"... and it's just killing me :) Good Job!

Author's Response: Actually, the next chapter is titled, Ron's Diary.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 03/25/05 Title: Chapter 7: The First Meeting

Great Chapter! "Tracing letters with the wand" to show the 2 propheties was brilliant! I must confess: I did wince when I read this! But I guess I have to get rid of the 'You-Know-Who' ridiculous reflex, right? ;) And Thanks so much for the mention in your A/N! It is always a pleasure to R & R a good story! Cheers! :D :D

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 03/30/05 Title: Chapter 8: Harry's Confession

Oh, Oh! I am SCARED, very very SCARED for Ron (my own hair actually turned green *lol*)! Hope Cho will quit DA now that she has no chance with Harry (sorry, but I *.@.#.* her!). Anyway, EXCELLENT CHAPTER, but I'll stick to H/G and R/H *evil grin*...and Thanks again for the 'plug' in your A/N :)

Author's Response: Sorry, Cho will not be quitting the DA.

 
Reviewer: Neli P Signed
Date: 02/28/05 Title: Chapter 1: Letters

Awsome FIRST CHAPTER! 10/10! The "Chocolate Frog Card" theory sounds good! I just wish Hermione realized that "Hermione Weasley" would sound better (Ha Ha) :) ... Oh, and about the Voices, I'll take a guess: chapter 30 "The Pensieve" - Book 4!

Author's Response: The voices, no that is not where I got them. I will have to look and see if I could have though.

 
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